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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Inspirational / Uplifting
- Published: 07/28/2021
After Sabor left Andrea’s house, he went down a narrow path, which led to his boss’s office. His boss’s name was John. John was a mean man who liked to kill people. “Boss, I killed that Andrea kid you told me to kill. I want my billion dollar reward. RIGHT THIS MINUTE.” Sabor said in a cold voice. John replied, “Ok, I will transfer the money in your bank account. Here, I have transferred the money to your bank account. Now, kill that girl named Livonia. Here’s some scoop on her. She is mostly in her house, either reading something or studying. You should go right now to kill her as her parents are out working right now.” Sabor said, “Ok, boss. I will now go to meet that Livonia kid.” Saying that, Sabor went off to kill Livonia. He knocked on her door. “Hello, who are you?” asked Livonia. “I am your tutor. Your Math tutor. By your expression, I’m guessing your parents didn’t tell you that you got a tutor?” Said Sabor. Livonia replied, “But Math is one of my strongest subjects. Why will my parents hire somebody to improve my Maths?” Sabor panicked. He wished that he hadn’t said that he was her math tutor. He should’ve said English or Evs!
“Well, you can always be better at Math!” Sabor said cheerfully. “Ok, fine. What are we studying?” Livonia asked. “Er, Fractions.” Sabor replied unsurely. “Fine. Let me bring you something to drink, then, we can begin.” While she prepared some cookies and a glass of water for Sabor, she thought to herself. “I have seen that there is a criminal on loose who is killing kids. My parents told me to not let anybody inside the house, but I want to catch the criminal for myself. I wonder if this tutor is the criminal.” She thought. “Here are the cookies and the glass of water, Tutor.” She said politely. Sabor liked her. She was so nice and kind to him. He almost didn’t want to kill her. But he remembered that he is going to get money from killing her, so he shouldn’t care otherwise.” “Thanks, Livonia.” Sabor said. “Let me take off your coat, Tutor. You must be feeling hot. It is the middle of the summer season, after all.” Livonia asked kindly. “Sure, here’s my coat.” Sabor said, forgetting that he had hidden his knife and the list of kids in the pockets of his coat. Fortunately, this incident helped Livonia confirm if Sabor is a criminal or not. She took the coat from him, and hung it on a crook on the wall. While she was straightening up the coat, she secretly checked if anything was in the coat pockets, while Sabor munched on the cookies greedily. Livonia’s hand felt something sharp. She felt the touch of a knife. A shiver ran down her spine. She realized that Sabor is actually a criminal. The math tutor thing was just a bunch of baloney. She figured out that he is probably here to kill her, just like the poor girl who was on the news. “Well, two can play THAT game.” Livonia thought. It was obvious that Livonia had a plan to save herself from Sabor and get him caught. “ Tutor, may I go to the washroom? Then we can start out lesson.” Livonia asked. “Sure, sure, do that. But when you come back, do you mind bringing me some more water?” Sabor replied. Livonia nodded and went to the washroom. Only, she didn’t. She instead went to her bedroom, and got some sleeping pills and mace. She hid the mace and sleeping pills in her skirt pocket. Then she went to the kitchen and prepared some more water for Sabor. Only, she added the sleeping pills in the water. They dissolved in the water like sugar. She carried the water and gave it to Sabor. He gulped down the water, not aware of the slight change of the water. He said thanks to Livonia. She sat beside him. A few minutes later, Sabor said that he feels a little drowsy, so they should take a little break. Livonia nodded and went away. But as soon as she stood up to leave, she suddenly turned her head around, reached into her skirt pocket, took out the mace and sprayed it on Sabor’s eyes. “ARGH!” Sabor cried out. Apparently, somehow the mace sped up the process of the sleeping pills work, and so Sabor fainted. Livonia knew that the sleeping pills will work for half an hour, so she quickly dialed 911 and told them to come here to her house because she caught the criminal, and told the police the address. The police was there in no time flat. They took away Sabor and thanked Livonia for catching the criminal. Livonia’s parents were also called, and they also heard the good news. Later, the police made Sabor tell them about his boss, John, and so both Sabor and John got arrested. Livonia was also informed that the money of Sabor will be given to her as a reward for catching Sabor. All of this attracted the attention of several news stations, and so they came to interview Livonia. She told them everything, from how Sabor pretended to be a math tutor to how she gave him up to the police. At the end of the story, she got a lot of applause and a standing ovation. At last, the news interviewer said, “Thanks to this amazing girl Livonia, This wretched criminal is caught and the children are safe again!”
The Treacherous Hug (Part 2)(Archisha Srivastava)
After Sabor left Andrea’s house, he went down a narrow path, which led to his boss’s office. His boss’s name was John. John was a mean man who liked to kill people. “Boss, I killed that Andrea kid you told me to kill. I want my billion dollar reward. RIGHT THIS MINUTE.” Sabor said in a cold voice. John replied, “Ok, I will transfer the money in your bank account. Here, I have transferred the money to your bank account. Now, kill that girl named Livonia. Here’s some scoop on her. She is mostly in her house, either reading something or studying. You should go right now to kill her as her parents are out working right now.” Sabor said, “Ok, boss. I will now go to meet that Livonia kid.” Saying that, Sabor went off to kill Livonia. He knocked on her door. “Hello, who are you?” asked Livonia. “I am your tutor. Your Math tutor. By your expression, I’m guessing your parents didn’t tell you that you got a tutor?” Said Sabor. Livonia replied, “But Math is one of my strongest subjects. Why will my parents hire somebody to improve my Maths?” Sabor panicked. He wished that he hadn’t said that he was her math tutor. He should’ve said English or Evs!
“Well, you can always be better at Math!” Sabor said cheerfully. “Ok, fine. What are we studying?” Livonia asked. “Er, Fractions.” Sabor replied unsurely. “Fine. Let me bring you something to drink, then, we can begin.” While she prepared some cookies and a glass of water for Sabor, she thought to herself. “I have seen that there is a criminal on loose who is killing kids. My parents told me to not let anybody inside the house, but I want to catch the criminal for myself. I wonder if this tutor is the criminal.” She thought. “Here are the cookies and the glass of water, Tutor.” She said politely. Sabor liked her. She was so nice and kind to him. He almost didn’t want to kill her. But he remembered that he is going to get money from killing her, so he shouldn’t care otherwise.” “Thanks, Livonia.” Sabor said. “Let me take off your coat, Tutor. You must be feeling hot. It is the middle of the summer season, after all.” Livonia asked kindly. “Sure, here’s my coat.” Sabor said, forgetting that he had hidden his knife and the list of kids in the pockets of his coat. Fortunately, this incident helped Livonia confirm if Sabor is a criminal or not. She took the coat from him, and hung it on a crook on the wall. While she was straightening up the coat, she secretly checked if anything was in the coat pockets, while Sabor munched on the cookies greedily. Livonia’s hand felt something sharp. She felt the touch of a knife. A shiver ran down her spine. She realized that Sabor is actually a criminal. The math tutor thing was just a bunch of baloney. She figured out that he is probably here to kill her, just like the poor girl who was on the news. “Well, two can play THAT game.” Livonia thought. It was obvious that Livonia had a plan to save herself from Sabor and get him caught. “ Tutor, may I go to the washroom? Then we can start out lesson.” Livonia asked. “Sure, sure, do that. But when you come back, do you mind bringing me some more water?” Sabor replied. Livonia nodded and went to the washroom. Only, she didn’t. She instead went to her bedroom, and got some sleeping pills and mace. She hid the mace and sleeping pills in her skirt pocket. Then she went to the kitchen and prepared some more water for Sabor. Only, she added the sleeping pills in the water. They dissolved in the water like sugar. She carried the water and gave it to Sabor. He gulped down the water, not aware of the slight change of the water. He said thanks to Livonia. She sat beside him. A few minutes later, Sabor said that he feels a little drowsy, so they should take a little break. Livonia nodded and went away. But as soon as she stood up to leave, she suddenly turned her head around, reached into her skirt pocket, took out the mace and sprayed it on Sabor’s eyes. “ARGH!” Sabor cried out. Apparently, somehow the mace sped up the process of the sleeping pills work, and so Sabor fainted. Livonia knew that the sleeping pills will work for half an hour, so she quickly dialed 911 and told them to come here to her house because she caught the criminal, and told the police the address. The police was there in no time flat. They took away Sabor and thanked Livonia for catching the criminal. Livonia’s parents were also called, and they also heard the good news. Later, the police made Sabor tell them about his boss, John, and so both Sabor and John got arrested. Livonia was also informed that the money of Sabor will be given to her as a reward for catching Sabor. All of this attracted the attention of several news stations, and so they came to interview Livonia. She told them everything, from how Sabor pretended to be a math tutor to how she gave him up to the police. At the end of the story, she got a lot of applause and a standing ovation. At last, the news interviewer said, “Thanks to this amazing girl Livonia, This wretched criminal is caught and the children are safe again!”
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Alok Srivastava
07/30/2021Great built up and an exciting part 2 with happy ending. Enjoyed the story, narrative was so good that it almost felt like watching a movie. Archisha is a super hero!!
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Satish Srivastava
07/29/2021Livonia is a superhero.... !!! Would love to hear more stories about Livonia's super deeds...
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