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Astral Eyes

By Pratik
Born 2004, M, from Maharashtra, India
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Astral Eyes
Deeper and deeper I travel
Into your astral eyes,
The celestial glories that resemble
Splendid starry skies.

They contain affection
With sorrows concealed,
Tenderness intense
And mysteries to reveal.

Never will it end
Never will it suffice,
Deeper and deeper I'll blend
Into your astral eyes.
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Chaitali

07/23/2023

Wow pratik! Good joob bro ;D

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Pratik

12/29/2024

Thank you!

Kevin Hughes

10/21/2021

Aloha Pratik,

Some lucky love got this poem from you (I hope!). Or, you wrote it for the love that will be. Either way, it will get the message across. Smiles, Kevin

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Pratik

10/21/2021

For no one particularly. Thanks for reading :)

Radrook

10/20/2021

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Pratik

10/21/2021

Thanks for reading :)