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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Action & Adventure
  • Subject: Recreation / Sports / Travel
  • Published: 11/16/2021

Double Double Hookup

By Gordon England
Born 1954, M, from Satellite Beach/FL, United States
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Double Double Hookup

Double Double Hookup

“Donny, I know where black bass are running,” I said with a teasing voice.
“What do you mean running? Black bass don’t run.”
“Let me take you to my secret bass pond. I’ll show you something you won’t forget.”
“You have me curious now, Gordon. When do we go?”
“I’ll pick you up Saturday morning. No need to go early; they’re biting all day.”

We arrived at a private five-acre bass lake near San Antonio on a June Saturday of 1985. On the bank, we found a friend’s 14-foot skiff. I carefully turned it over after checking for snakes that might be hiding underneath in cool shade. Donny took a 2.5 horsepower motor from my trunk and attached it to the boat’s transom.
I stopped for a few minutes to watch for tell-tale signs of fish action. Numerous ripples with occasional splashes across the lake portended feeding fish. We scrambled into the boat and used oars to push away from a high, grassy shoreline. One easy pull of the starter roped ignited the tiny engine.

“Look over there,” Donny said, pointing to a ten-foot circle of water that appeared to be boiling. I stopped the motor, allowing our boat to drift within casting distance of the circle. At this distance, we watched small fish and minnows thrash on the surface to escape larger fish attacking from below.
“Those are bass chasing minnows,” Donny said. “I’ve seen that on the ocean, but never in freshwater.”
“Same here. Let’s catch some of them.”
We put green and white rattletrap lures on our lines and cast them into the midst of splashing bass. Rattletraps are three-inch hard lures with a large, square lip to force a deep dive. Two double hooks, one forward and one at the tail, ensured few fish escaped a strike.

We cast to different sides of a primordial frenzy and reeled fast to make our lures dive to larger fish waiting in the deep. Donny’s rattletrap received the first blow, bending his light rod almost double. He yelled with delight. A few seconds later, my rod also bent down. We cheered with glee while reeling in a pair of two-pound black bass.
“Wow,” Donny said. “Who would have thought black bass would school like that?”

Noise from our thrashing bass had spooked our school of blacks, driving them into deep water. I started the motor to patrol the lake’s clear, spring-fed water for a while. Cattle and horses grazed on thick green grass in a gentle breeze before severe summer heat set in. A few minutes later, another thrashing boil of bass appeared. Yes, here we went again.
I raced across the water, pulling close to swarming bass. My rattletrap took the first hit when we cast into the frenzy, putting an energetic bend in the rod while pulling line from my reel. Then Donny’s rod arched down with a bass on while boiling fish encircled us.
“Can you believe this?” I said with a laugh.
“I would have said impossible.”
Suddenly, my rod bent more as something jerked the tip underwater.
“What’s that?” Donny asked.
“I don’t know. Maybe I snagged a log.”
“You better sit down before you go swimming.”
Without warning, Donny’s rod slammed onto the gunnel. He lifted hard, but his light rig couldn’t bring in line. We both sat before we went overboard.
“What kind of fish are in this lake?” Donny asked as we struggled to reel in line.
“The usual catfish, bass, and perch.”
“Hmph.”

Five minutes later, we both brought a squirming mass of bass into the boat simultaneously.
“Look at what we caught,” I yelled with glee.
“I can’t believe it,” responded Donny, also laughing. “I caught two fish on one lure.”
“Me too.” My two hooks each had a nice bass. “That’s four bass on two lures. Nobody’s going to believe us, and that will never happen again.”

Knowing people would doubt our story, the attached photo shows our catches.
I will never forget that once-in-a-lifetime catch.

Double Double Hookup(Gordon England) Double Double Hookup

“Donny, I know where black bass are running,” I said with a teasing voice.
“What do you mean running? Black bass don’t run.”
“Let me take you to my secret bass pond. I’ll show you something you won’t forget.”
“You have me curious now, Gordon. When do we go?”
“I’ll pick you up Saturday morning. No need to go early; they’re biting all day.”

We arrived at a private five-acre bass lake near San Antonio on a June Saturday of 1985. On the bank, we found a friend’s 14-foot skiff. I carefully turned it over after checking for snakes that might be hiding underneath in cool shade. Donny took a 2.5 horsepower motor from my trunk and attached it to the boat’s transom.
I stopped for a few minutes to watch for tell-tale signs of fish action. Numerous ripples with occasional splashes across the lake portended feeding fish. We scrambled into the boat and used oars to push away from a high, grassy shoreline. One easy pull of the starter roped ignited the tiny engine.

“Look over there,” Donny said, pointing to a ten-foot circle of water that appeared to be boiling. I stopped the motor, allowing our boat to drift within casting distance of the circle. At this distance, we watched small fish and minnows thrash on the surface to escape larger fish attacking from below.
“Those are bass chasing minnows,” Donny said. “I’ve seen that on the ocean, but never in freshwater.”
“Same here. Let’s catch some of them.”
We put green and white rattletrap lures on our lines and cast them into the midst of splashing bass. Rattletraps are three-inch hard lures with a large, square lip to force a deep dive. Two double hooks, one forward and one at the tail, ensured few fish escaped a strike.

We cast to different sides of a primordial frenzy and reeled fast to make our lures dive to larger fish waiting in the deep. Donny’s rattletrap received the first blow, bending his light rod almost double. He yelled with delight. A few seconds later, my rod also bent down. We cheered with glee while reeling in a pair of two-pound black bass.
“Wow,” Donny said. “Who would have thought black bass would school like that?”

Noise from our thrashing bass had spooked our school of blacks, driving them into deep water. I started the motor to patrol the lake’s clear, spring-fed water for a while. Cattle and horses grazed on thick green grass in a gentle breeze before severe summer heat set in. A few minutes later, another thrashing boil of bass appeared. Yes, here we went again.
I raced across the water, pulling close to swarming bass. My rattletrap took the first hit when we cast into the frenzy, putting an energetic bend in the rod while pulling line from my reel. Then Donny’s rod arched down with a bass on while boiling fish encircled us.
“Can you believe this?” I said with a laugh.
“I would have said impossible.”
Suddenly, my rod bent more as something jerked the tip underwater.
“What’s that?” Donny asked.
“I don’t know. Maybe I snagged a log.”
“You better sit down before you go swimming.”
Without warning, Donny’s rod slammed onto the gunnel. He lifted hard, but his light rig couldn’t bring in line. We both sat before we went overboard.
“What kind of fish are in this lake?” Donny asked as we struggled to reel in line.
“The usual catfish, bass, and perch.”
“Hmph.”

Five minutes later, we both brought a squirming mass of bass into the boat simultaneously.
“Look at what we caught,” I yelled with glee.
“I can’t believe it,” responded Donny, also laughing. “I caught two fish on one lure.”
“Me too.” My two hooks each had a nice bass. “That’s four bass on two lures. Nobody’s going to believe us, and that will never happen again.”

Knowing people would doubt our story, the attached photo shows our catches.
I will never forget that once-in-a-lifetime catch.

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Jessica M.

09/04/2025

The photo says it all! Glad you had such a day, Gordon! Many don't have such a lucky day in their entire lives.

The photo says it all! Glad you had such a day, Gordon! Many don't have such a lucky day in their entire lives.

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Gordon England

09/04/2025

You are so right. Thank you my friend

You are so right. Thank you my friend

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Kevin Hughes

09/03/2025

Aloha Gordon,

Of all the fishing stories in the world - this one is backed by photographic proof. Had this happened to my brother (who absolutely loves bass fishing) he would have put his rod and reel away for life. No way it could get any better.

Congratulations on Story Star of the Week!

Kevin (who does not fish...since tuna already comes in a can)

Aloha Gordon,

Of all the fishing stories in the world - this one is backed by photographic proof. Had this happened to my brother (who absolutely loves bass fishing) he would have put his rod and reel away for life. No way it could get any better.

Congratulations on Story Star of the Week!

Kevin (who does not fish...since tuna already comes in a can)

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Kevin Hughes

09/04/2025

Oh My Gosh, Gordon! Four concussions? Did you start playing Strong Safety for the Dolphins? Seriously tho...that needs to be scrutinized by a TBI Doctor. I am glad you can write, but how is your memory, balance and headache situation? I had three, bu... Read More

Oh My Gosh, Gordon! Four concussions? Did you start playing Strong Safety for the Dolphins? Seriously tho...that needs to be scrutinized by a TBI Doctor. I am glad you can write, but how is your memory, balance and headache situation? I had three, but all in my childhood. None after puberty.

My heart goes out to you. I know how those things can go. Sending you every good thought I can. I will even sacrifice a chicken if I have to. But will fry it first, if that is okay with you.

Heal up!

Kevin

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Gordon England

09/04/2025

Its been a long time, Kevin. Good to hear from you. A series of 4 concussions have slowed me down a lot. We keep on trying.

Its been a long time, Kevin. Good to hear from you. A series of 4 concussions have slowed me down a lot. We keep on trying.

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Cheryl Ryan

09/02/2025

This was such a fun read. I could almost feel the excitement building as you described the water boiling with bass and the thrill of casting into the frenzy. I love the way you ended the story with humor and disbelief. It's truly a once in a lifetime catch. Thank you for sharing!

This was such a fun read. I could almost feel the excitement building as you described the water boiling with bass and the thrill of casting into the frenzy. I love the way you ended the story with humor and disbelief. It's truly a once in a lifetime catch. Thank you for sharing!

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Gordon England

09/04/2025

NOtes like your are why I write

NOtes like your are why I write

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JD

08/31/2025

Sounds like a great memory. Thanks for sharing the story with us, Gordon. Happy short story star of the week.

Sounds like a great memory. Thanks for sharing the story with us, Gordon. Happy short story star of the week.

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Gordon England

09/04/2025

Thanks good lady

Thanks good lady

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Lillian Kazmierczak

04/28/2022

Gordon that is the first fish story I ever heard where the fish didn't get away! Seriously, that was very interesting. I have caught a lot of bass but never a black one. That was definitely a very lucky day!

Gordon that is the first fish story I ever heard where the fish didn't get away! Seriously, that was very interesting. I have caught a lot of bass but never a black one. That was definitely a very lucky day!

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Gordon England

04/29/2022

you are most kind as usual. thank you Lillian.

you are most kind as usual. thank you Lillian.

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