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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Nature & Wildlife
- Published: 11/22/2021
The Girl with the Watering Can.
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United States.jpeg)
Author's Note: This is my story for JD's Painting Challenge. And boy oh boy, did I have a lot of fun revisiting some of my favorite paintings. I decided on this one.
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“You sure are helping all those plants grow.”
The little girl with an older woman’s grace and intelligence smiled up at me.
“Yes. Aren’t they pretty?”
“They are.” I agreed.
“I would like to chat with you, you seem like a nice old man (I smiled, Thirty Five is not old). But I have to keep moving, there are so many plants.”
“Could I help?”
Her face lit up. I knew right then I would have to paint her some day. She was filled with joy over my offer to help.
Somehow she reached down with her left hand and brought up another watering can. I didn’t think much of it …at the time. Perhaps she had always had two of them, and one was just sitting near her foot and I didn’t notice. At least, that is what I convinced myself of at the time. It was filled with water. I took a sniff.
“Oh, my gosh. I never smelled water that smelled like this!”
I took another sniff. A deeper one. It made me feel stronger, lighter, more loving and caring. I took another sniff. It smelled of Earth, of good soil, of all the flowers on Earth in bloom at one time. It smelled like the fresh skin of a newborn baby, it smelled of kitten fur, puppy licks, and hugs from your Mother. All things good and pure were in that lovely scent.
The little girl reached up with her hand, pulling my watering can away from my nose and mouth.
She giggled.
“Silly, you can’t help the plants if you take all the joy out of the water.”
“What?”
I was befuddled.
She pointed to my watering can:
“That is the water of Life. It makes things grow. It makes things thrive. It makes things turn out just like they are supposed to be. That’s life.“
“You mean to tell me that this isn’t ordinary water?”
She actually huffed at me.
“Ordinary Water? There is no such thing!”
She took my watering can and set it down by her foot. Then she set her own watering can down next to it. Then she put both her hands on her hips and looked straight up at me. I told you she had an older woman’s eyes and intelligence, and right then I felt like the five year old…and she was the adult. I got ready for a “talking to” …and I got one.
“Your body is mostly water." She pointed to a big tree near us: “That giant tree is made out of thin air, with nothing but water, Oxygen, and dirt.”
She didn’t stop and I didn’t dare not listen.
“Everything you eat needs water. Everyone you ever met, loved, despised, or considered a colleague, needed water every day…just to stay alive. Every flower you ever touched, or sent to a loved one, every salad you ever ate, every dish you made for supper…animal, or vegetable…needed water to complete the cycle of life. When you die…and I hope that is a long way off…your water will go back to the Earth. Ordinary water! Hmph.“
I couldn’t help it. I waved my arms in surrender. I laughed a good natured laugh, which she joined in on.
“Thank you. I will never consider water ordinary again. Ever.”
The little girl had taken back over from the enormously intelligent older woman who hid behind that small frame and sharp eyes.
“Oh goody, grab your watering can, and let’s get to work.”
I never really noticed that even though my watering can was built like hers, to fit a small child’s hands, and not my big clumsy grown man hands, that it never seemed to need refilling. That seemed to escape my notice …at least consciously. Just like the fact that every plant SHE watered, bloomed, blossomed, or bore fruit. The plants I watered just seemed to grow…well…more alive.
Finally we reached the end of the Garden. She took my watering can from me, thanked me and turned to go. She took only a few steps. Then she turned back to face me. In her little girl’s voice I heard a decision being made.
“What do you do? Are you a Teacher?”
“No, I am a painter.”
“What do you paint? People? Portraits? Buildings?”
I smiled as I shook my head no.
“No, No little lady. I paint Nature. I love flowers, ponds with water Lillies, fields of Poppies. I put people in them only to show that Nature brings peace.”
She shook her head in a motion I can only describe as “complete agreement.” She reached up to me, holding her watering can like a chalice.
“Here. Take a sip. A small sip. You don’t want too much Life, it will be overwhelming for you. Just one sip.”
I humored her.
I raised that luscious smelling water, the scent of everything good and growing, from fresh hay, to a new day after a gentle rain in it, and took a sip.
I fainted.
I felt a small hand take the watering can from my grip. I still couldn’t move, but I felt glorious, alive in a way I had never felt before. I felt a small hand touch my forehead, and then a wisp of hair brush my cheek as the softest of butterfly kisses landed on my forehead.
“Paint well, my friend, Paint well.”
I did.
The Girl with the Watering Can.(Kevin Hughes)
Author's Note: This is my story for JD's Painting Challenge. And boy oh boy, did I have a lot of fun revisiting some of my favorite paintings. I decided on this one.
*****
“You sure are helping all those plants grow.”
The little girl with an older woman’s grace and intelligence smiled up at me.
“Yes. Aren’t they pretty?”
“They are.” I agreed.
“I would like to chat with you, you seem like a nice old man (I smiled, Thirty Five is not old). But I have to keep moving, there are so many plants.”
“Could I help?”
Her face lit up. I knew right then I would have to paint her some day. She was filled with joy over my offer to help.
Somehow she reached down with her left hand and brought up another watering can. I didn’t think much of it …at the time. Perhaps she had always had two of them, and one was just sitting near her foot and I didn’t notice. At least, that is what I convinced myself of at the time. It was filled with water. I took a sniff.
“Oh, my gosh. I never smelled water that smelled like this!”
I took another sniff. A deeper one. It made me feel stronger, lighter, more loving and caring. I took another sniff. It smelled of Earth, of good soil, of all the flowers on Earth in bloom at one time. It smelled like the fresh skin of a newborn baby, it smelled of kitten fur, puppy licks, and hugs from your Mother. All things good and pure were in that lovely scent.
The little girl reached up with her hand, pulling my watering can away from my nose and mouth.
She giggled.
“Silly, you can’t help the plants if you take all the joy out of the water.”
“What?”
I was befuddled.
She pointed to my watering can:
“That is the water of Life. It makes things grow. It makes things thrive. It makes things turn out just like they are supposed to be. That’s life.“
“You mean to tell me that this isn’t ordinary water?”
She actually huffed at me.
“Ordinary Water? There is no such thing!”
She took my watering can and set it down by her foot. Then she set her own watering can down next to it. Then she put both her hands on her hips and looked straight up at me. I told you she had an older woman’s eyes and intelligence, and right then I felt like the five year old…and she was the adult. I got ready for a “talking to” …and I got one.
“Your body is mostly water." She pointed to a big tree near us: “That giant tree is made out of thin air, with nothing but water, Oxygen, and dirt.”
She didn’t stop and I didn’t dare not listen.
“Everything you eat needs water. Everyone you ever met, loved, despised, or considered a colleague, needed water every day…just to stay alive. Every flower you ever touched, or sent to a loved one, every salad you ever ate, every dish you made for supper…animal, or vegetable…needed water to complete the cycle of life. When you die…and I hope that is a long way off…your water will go back to the Earth. Ordinary water! Hmph.“
I couldn’t help it. I waved my arms in surrender. I laughed a good natured laugh, which she joined in on.
“Thank you. I will never consider water ordinary again. Ever.”
The little girl had taken back over from the enormously intelligent older woman who hid behind that small frame and sharp eyes.
“Oh goody, grab your watering can, and let’s get to work.”
I never really noticed that even though my watering can was built like hers, to fit a small child’s hands, and not my big clumsy grown man hands, that it never seemed to need refilling. That seemed to escape my notice …at least consciously. Just like the fact that every plant SHE watered, bloomed, blossomed, or bore fruit. The plants I watered just seemed to grow…well…more alive.
Finally we reached the end of the Garden. She took my watering can from me, thanked me and turned to go. She took only a few steps. Then she turned back to face me. In her little girl’s voice I heard a decision being made.
“What do you do? Are you a Teacher?”
“No, I am a painter.”
“What do you paint? People? Portraits? Buildings?”
I smiled as I shook my head no.
“No, No little lady. I paint Nature. I love flowers, ponds with water Lillies, fields of Poppies. I put people in them only to show that Nature brings peace.”
She shook her head in a motion I can only describe as “complete agreement.” She reached up to me, holding her watering can like a chalice.
“Here. Take a sip. A small sip. You don’t want too much Life, it will be overwhelming for you. Just one sip.”
I humored her.
I raised that luscious smelling water, the scent of everything good and growing, from fresh hay, to a new day after a gentle rain in it, and took a sip.
I fainted.
I felt a small hand take the watering can from my grip. I still couldn’t move, but I felt glorious, alive in a way I had never felt before. I felt a small hand touch my forehead, and then a wisp of hair brush my cheek as the softest of butterfly kisses landed on my forehead.
“Paint well, my friend, Paint well.”
I did.
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Martha Huett
12/03/2021How beautiful Kevin. A very picturesque story befitting a stunning painting. Wow. I loved it. I don't know that much about art and such, so I had to look up your pick. A Renoir! In the National Gallery of Arts in DC, no less! Your story is exceptional. Thanks for this Kevin :)
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Kevin Hughes
12/03/2021Thanks for the kind comments Martha. And isn't it fun looking up Art you don't recognize? I am lucky that I have seen a lot of Art. I have to thank my Mom, and the Artistic folks in my life. I can't make a straight line with a ruler, so people who can make "pretty' amaze me. Smiles, Kevin
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Gerald R Gioglio
12/03/2021A wonderful fantasy Kevin gifted with a truly vivid word picture. Enjoyed it very much. Yep, drop the microphone, challenge met.
Peace, Jerry.
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Kevin Hughes
12/03/2021Aloha Gerald,
I usually just drop a fork, or sometimes the inadvertent peanut butter toast, but I will take the compliment! Smiles, Kevin
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Shirley Smothers
12/03/2021Beautiful story. You painted in words a fantastic piece. Thank you for sharing.
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Jason James Parker
11/28/2021This is a beautiful piece, Kevin. Painted skillfully with prose and colored with heart and humanity. : )
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Tim Norland
11/27/2021What a sweet and whimsical story. I'll never look at this painting in quite the same way again. And always with a clever, and satisfying, twist at the end.
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Kevin Hughes
12/03/2021My thanks to you Tim, it sure was fun to look through paintings that I liked to figure out which one to write about. Smiles, Kevin
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JD
11/23/2021I loved this story, Kevin! I loved how you turned this little girl into a nature nymph with magical water that gave Renoir special inspiration to create her portrait. As an art lover, a nature lover, and a short story lover, it blended my loves beautifully. Absolutely superb, delightful, and inspirational story. Thank you! : )
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JD
12/15/2021You have a great attitude about it Kevin. I'm really glad that you and so many other talented writers enjoy 'playing' even if you don't 'win'. In my book you're all winners! :-)
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Kevin Hughes
12/15/2021Well that’s a very nice Christmas present. 1000 points! JD don’t worry about me and losing. LOL I think of writing the same way I used to think of sports I don’t care if I win or not I just got to play ! I like playing. Lol
There are some super talented people on this and a whole bunch are really good writers! There’s a smaller pool that I think are either professionals or could be. To even be in the same conversation , well that’s pretty cool. You have a great day smiles Kevin.
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JD
12/14/2021Hey Kevin, even though you didn't win this challenge, I just wanted to let you know that this was one of my favorites, and I just awarded you 1,000 points. You're a winner in my book! : )
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Aziz
11/23/2021Excellent choice Sir along with a lovely story and positive thoughts from strong symbols: water, plants the innocence of the little girl...
Well done.
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JD
11/23/2021Hey Kevin, Jackson Pollock is famous for saying, "I Am Nature!" when his critics complained that his splash and drip paintings had nothing to do with Nature. I think it is the same with all creations... be it paintings or gardens.... they are made from nature, because WE ARE NATURE! :-)
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Kevin Hughes
11/23/2021Aloha Aziz,
You are always so kind in your comments. I appreciate them all. However, I must point out to you, as I did to Gail, that the little girl represents Mother Nature. But I got to thinking, maybe Mother Nature isn't a Universal concept? Do you have a Mother Nature folk story in your culture?
Smiles, Kevin
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Gail Moore
11/22/2021Wow Kevin, this is a winner. I love your style :-)
I just posted my entry that was very hard to write as I know very little about art so waivered off the subject a bit. :-)
Great work :-)
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Kevin Hughes
11/23/2021Aloha Gail,
My Art knowledge has only two sides to it: "Oh, I like that." And: "That sucks." But because of my University Courses, and traveling the world I got to see a lot of Art. My absolute favorite is the Venus De Milo in the Louvre - I must have stared at that for an hour.
But my story isn't very well written. So far, nobody has figured out that the little girl is actually: Mother Nature herself. Sigh. I thought I gave enough hints...but no. LOL
Thanks for the kind words. Smiles Kevin
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