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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Loneliness / Solitude
- Published: 12/05/2021
The End.
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United StatesAuthor's Note: I have been told that saying this is Flash Fiction- isn't always the right thing to do. For this story, I think it is. Is it a sad story? Or is it the same old story? Or...is it a new beginning? You choose.
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“You can’t hurt me anymore. I am old. I am done. Words that used to brew in me, now fall with you.
I can’t tell you what you want to hear…I’m not you. I can tell you this tho. We…are…through.”
He didn’t yell. He didn’t scream. He didn’t cry. His words were colored with the neutrality that only indifference can bring.
She stared at him. Wondering where he thought he was going to go. Without her had had nothing. With her, he was nothing. She knew his buttons, she knew his needs, she knew her power. He would be back. She never heard the sound of “I don’t care”…anymore.
The door closed quietly. Barely a click. He took nothing with him. She missed the clue.
Even tho he told her.
They were through.
The End.(Kevin Hughes)
Author's Note: I have been told that saying this is Flash Fiction- isn't always the right thing to do. For this story, I think it is. Is it a sad story? Or is it the same old story? Or...is it a new beginning? You choose.
*****
“You can’t hurt me anymore. I am old. I am done. Words that used to brew in me, now fall with you.
I can’t tell you what you want to hear…I’m not you. I can tell you this tho. We…are…through.”
He didn’t yell. He didn’t scream. He didn’t cry. His words were colored with the neutrality that only indifference can bring.
She stared at him. Wondering where he thought he was going to go. Without her had had nothing. With her, he was nothing. She knew his buttons, she knew his needs, she knew her power. He would be back. She never heard the sound of “I don’t care”…anymore.
The door closed quietly. Barely a click. He took nothing with him. She missed the clue.
Even tho he told her.
They were through.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
12/06/2021That was really sad. The nurse in me is screaming he may kill himself! No takes nothing! That is so different from your usual Kevin. It is a well written piece. It really makes you think!
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Kevin Hughes
12/07/2021Aloha Lillian,
Tell the nurse in you that it’s OK. It’s not about that at all. It’s about the ability to close down a relationship where you literally don’t care anymore but you stay because you’re comfortable or habit. Sadly I got to witness that with a Friend marriage. It takes a lot of courage to step away from someplace where neither of you are happy smiles, Kevin.
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Kevin Hughes
12/06/2021Aloha Gail
Not my usual story but I was having a conversation about breaking up. And how many people stay in a relationship because you’re comfortable, or out of habit.
Luckily I don’t know anybody in that position. But I do remember seeing lots of that when I was younger. Hence the horrible story. LOL
Smiles Kevin
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