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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Nature & Wildlife
  • Published: 12/08/2021

Look of Love

By Gerald R Gioglio
Born 1947, M, from Colorado Springs, CO, United States
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Look of Love

“Besides love and sympathy, animals exhibit other qualities connected with the social instincts which in us would be called moral.” --Charles Darwin--

It was a Red Mountain Day. One of those rare daybreaks when the eager morning sun casts a warm scarlet glow over Colorado’s Blodgett Mountain, a little piece of heaven visible from our kitchen window. You look for this scene every sleepy morning. If it arrives it is wise to stay in the minute and connect with it all —Brother Sun and Sister Mountain--siblings arriving for one of their collective, awe-inspiring visits.

And so, you make the coffee, not really transcendent, but finding an excuse to linger by the window to take it all in. It only lasts a short time until the sun changes trajectory and chameleonlike, the mountain assumes its familiar hews of light-rust brown and flora-green.

But now you are awake and aware. So, each time you go by that window you survey the area. After all, it is late fall. One might catch the rare black bear sauntering through before settling on a place to hibernate. But mostly you’ll see Mule Deer, especially the arrival of the bucks who normally hang out on the mountains. Some are large, stately oldsters with many pointed antlers, others fully-grown muscular adults. Then too the young ones, shedding fur from their promising racks, marking passage into adulthood. They all come down to join the females; both are looking to mate.

It’s a timeless ritual. The males are aggressive and not so choosy, relentlessly following the essence driving their desire. The females more selective—there are offspring to consider. It’s a casual affair at best… one pregnant with the promise of new life in the spring. Oh yes, both are hungry, and the survival of their kind is at stake.

Suddenly, my eyes are drawn to the “Square Foot” gardens I built in the backyard. These above-ground, wooden boxes are surrounded by PVC structures wrapped in green vinyl “chicken wire” shielding crops from ravenous wildlife. They work. Today they serve a different purpose. The cages are being used as a barrier by one of the ladies to put distance between her and a prospective suitor.

The hesitant female and the anxious male make prolonged eye contact, taking each other’s purchase even as they keep their distance. When the male makes a move to come around the cage the female makes an equivalent move in the opposite direction. She does not run away. He does not close the chase. Aware of their vulnerability, they stop periodically to scope the area; ears up, alert for potential human or four-legged predators, they seem momentarily distracted from the sexual tension each is broadcasting.

All at once, another doe eyes the male. With a welcoming wave of her short, snowy tail she begins strutting her stuff as if to say, “Breathe it all in big boy; come to mama.”

From the safety of her side of the cage the original object of the male’s attention watches anxiously as that relationship-busting-hussy puts on a show. One imagines her thinking, “What’s she got that I ain’t got? Is he ready to commit? Or is he tired of our dance and keen to engage that bold, brassy, femme fatale?”

No. Antlers down, he lingers. He does not take the bait. Eventually, a woman scorned, the second gal lopes away. She knows there are too many boys on the block and all too many hungry eyes willing to take a good look and give it a go.

Soon, the two love birds begin moving in unison around the cage, the buck slowly left, the doe approaching on the right. Face-to-face, they relax; she suddenly leans down to nuzzle him on his side. He is patient. She seems pleased. They walk off together into the grove next to our home.

A timeless ritual-- surviving and thriving, coupling and multiplying—Divine love resurrected again and again on earth.

And so, the dance continues this glorious red-mountain day; as it always has, and always will. I seize the moment, blessed again, trying once more to connect with it all.

THE END

Postscript. For a related story see Animal Attraction at: https://www.storystar.com/story/20548/gerald-r-gioglio/true-life/family-friends

© 2021, Gerald R Gioglio

Look of Love(Gerald R Gioglio) “Besides love and sympathy, animals exhibit other qualities connected with the social instincts which in us would be called moral.” --Charles Darwin--

It was a Red Mountain Day. One of those rare daybreaks when the eager morning sun casts a warm scarlet glow over Colorado’s Blodgett Mountain, a little piece of heaven visible from our kitchen window. You look for this scene every sleepy morning. If it arrives it is wise to stay in the minute and connect with it all —Brother Sun and Sister Mountain--siblings arriving for one of their collective, awe-inspiring visits.

And so, you make the coffee, not really transcendent, but finding an excuse to linger by the window to take it all in. It only lasts a short time until the sun changes trajectory and chameleonlike, the mountain assumes its familiar hews of light-rust brown and flora-green.

But now you are awake and aware. So, each time you go by that window you survey the area. After all, it is late fall. One might catch the rare black bear sauntering through before settling on a place to hibernate. But mostly you’ll see Mule Deer, especially the arrival of the bucks who normally hang out on the mountains. Some are large, stately oldsters with many pointed antlers, others fully-grown muscular adults. Then too the young ones, shedding fur from their promising racks, marking passage into adulthood. They all come down to join the females; both are looking to mate.

It’s a timeless ritual. The males are aggressive and not so choosy, relentlessly following the essence driving their desire. The females more selective—there are offspring to consider. It’s a casual affair at best… one pregnant with the promise of new life in the spring. Oh yes, both are hungry, and the survival of their kind is at stake.

Suddenly, my eyes are drawn to the “Square Foot” gardens I built in the backyard. These above-ground, wooden boxes are surrounded by PVC structures wrapped in green vinyl “chicken wire” shielding crops from ravenous wildlife. They work. Today they serve a different purpose. The cages are being used as a barrier by one of the ladies to put distance between her and a prospective suitor.

The hesitant female and the anxious male make prolonged eye contact, taking each other’s purchase even as they keep their distance. When the male makes a move to come around the cage the female makes an equivalent move in the opposite direction. She does not run away. He does not close the chase. Aware of their vulnerability, they stop periodically to scope the area; ears up, alert for potential human or four-legged predators, they seem momentarily distracted from the sexual tension each is broadcasting.

All at once, another doe eyes the male. With a welcoming wave of her short, snowy tail she begins strutting her stuff as if to say, “Breathe it all in big boy; come to mama.”

From the safety of her side of the cage the original object of the male’s attention watches anxiously as that relationship-busting-hussy puts on a show. One imagines her thinking, “What’s she got that I ain’t got? Is he ready to commit? Or is he tired of our dance and keen to engage that bold, brassy, femme fatale?”

No. Antlers down, he lingers. He does not take the bait. Eventually, a woman scorned, the second gal lopes away. She knows there are too many boys on the block and all too many hungry eyes willing to take a good look and give it a go.

Soon, the two love birds begin moving in unison around the cage, the buck slowly left, the doe approaching on the right. Face-to-face, they relax; she suddenly leans down to nuzzle him on his side. He is patient. She seems pleased. They walk off together into the grove next to our home.

A timeless ritual-- surviving and thriving, coupling and multiplying—Divine love resurrected again and again on earth.

And so, the dance continues this glorious red-mountain day; as it always has, and always will. I seize the moment, blessed again, trying once more to connect with it all.

THE END

Postscript. For a related story see Animal Attraction at: https://www.storystar.com/story/20548/gerald-r-gioglio/true-life/family-friends

© 2021, Gerald R Gioglio

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Shelly Garrod

02/02/2022

Oh wow Gerald. That story was absolutely beautiful! You were lucky to get that once in a lifetime picture. So precious, I love their faces. Your story is full of deep discripions and detail. Beautifully written.

Oh wow Gerald. That story was absolutely beautiful! You were lucky to get that once in a lifetime picture. So precious, I love their faces. Your story is full of deep discripions and detail. Beautifully written.

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Gerald R Gioglio

02/02/2022

Thank you, Shelly. So kind of you to leave such wonderful comments. Take care.

Thank you, Shelly. So kind of you to leave such wonderful comments. Take care.

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Lillian Kazmierczak

01/03/2022

Gerald that was a great animal story, I love that you find such pleasure in watching the deer. They are such fascinating creatures. I think your next story should be a hot to on those marvelous foot gardens you make. Lol!
You give such beautiful description to your mountain surroundings! I feel as if I'm there at the window with you. Thank you for sharing the splendor you see daily!
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Gerald that was a great animal story, I love that you find such pleasure in watching the deer. They are such fascinating creatures. I think your next story should be a hot to on those marvelous foot gardens you make. Lol!
You give such beautiful description to your mountain surroundings! I feel as if I'm there at the window with you. Thank you for sharing the splendor you see daily!
I understand why you are the story star of the week. Please continue sharing your mountain springs with us!

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Gerald R Gioglio

01/04/2022

Oh, Lillian. Thanks so much for your kind and extensive comments on this piece. I am honored by your thoughts about reading it. Many, many thanks. All the best, Jerry

Oh, Lillian. Thanks so much for your kind and extensive comments on this piece. I am honored by your thoughts about reading it. Many, many thanks. All the best, Jerry

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Kevin Hughes

01/03/2022

Congrats on the StoryStar of the week award, and I had just as much fun reading this as I did the first time! And with a real picture to boot!

Smiles, Kevin

Congrats on the StoryStar of the week award, and I had just as much fun reading this as I did the first time! And with a real picture to boot!

Smiles, Kevin

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Gerald R Gioglio

01/03/2022

Kevin, you're #1. I got lucky taking that image and it was great fun watching it play out and writing it up. Thanks for giving it another look. Peace, Jerry

Kevin, you're #1. I got lucky taking that image and it was great fun watching it play out and writing it up. Thanks for giving it another look. Peace, Jerry

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Christopher Long

12/21/2021

lovely

lovely

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Gerald R Gioglio

12/21/2021

Many thanks, Christopher; it's so kind of you to read and comment. Merry and Happy, Jerry

Many thanks, Christopher; it's so kind of you to read and comment. Merry and Happy, Jerry

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JD

12/09/2021

How blessed you are to witness it all. Thanks for sharing your experience and the pic to go with it too! : )

How blessed you are to witness it all. Thanks for sharing your experience and the pic to go with it too! : )

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Gerald R Gioglio

01/03/2022

Yay! Many thanks. A happy and blessed New Year to you and yours. Jerry

Yay! Many thanks. A happy and blessed New Year to you and yours. Jerry

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JD

01/02/2022

Happy New Year and Happy short story STAR of the week, Jerry! : )

Happy New Year and Happy short story STAR of the week, Jerry! : )

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Gerald R Gioglio

12/10/2021

Thanks, JD. Yes, it was very special as was sneaking out on the deck to get that image. They were locked in, and right, I was blessed.
Tidings of comfort and joy, Jerry

Thanks, JD. Yes, it was very special as was sneaking out on the deck to get that image. They were locked in, and right, I was blessed.
Tidings of comfort and joy, Jerry

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Gerald R Gioglio

12/08/2021

Now, Kevin...this sounds like the beginning of a new Kevin Hughes Fiction story. "Film at 11."

Anyway, yeah, when I saw this happening, I eased out on the deck and took the shot. Then right, after taking it all in, it just had to be written up.

As always, I appreciate you contact and comments. The mall...blue faces, huh. Hmmm...

Now, Kevin...this sounds like the beginning of a new Kevin Hughes Fiction story. "Film at 11."

Anyway, yeah, when I saw this happening, I eased out on the deck and took the shot. Then right, after taking it all in, it just had to be written up.

As always, I appreciate you contact and comments. The mall...blue faces, huh. Hmmm...

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Kevin Hughes

12/08/2021

Wow! And a picture to boot! How I wish humans had a true estrus cycle, and all you would have to do is go to the Mall and look for bright blue faces (sign of being in heat). And then when natural color returns, and all the blue heads are gone, we can be friends again. LOL

Wonderful. Smiles, Kevin

Wow! And a picture to boot! How I wish humans had a true estrus cycle, and all you would have to do is go to the Mall and look for bright blue faces (sign of being in heat). And then when natural color returns, and all the blue heads are gone, we can be friends again. LOL

Wonderful. Smiles, Kevin

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JD

12/09/2021

Hi Kevin, please note that Gerald responded to you outside this comment thread and that is why you did not receive a notice about it.

Hi Kevin, please note that Gerald responded to you outside this comment thread and that is why you did not receive a notice about it.

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