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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 12/13/2021
THE GIRL WITH THE PEARL EARRING
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Authors Note (This story was inspired in part by POE’S THE FALL OF THE HOUSE OF USHER, painting GIRL WITH A PEARL EARRING, artist Veemer)
My name is James and I am a Real Estate Property Manager.
Insurable gloom pervaded my being, my very soul. I knew the old House I was to visit that afternoon was just that. The old House that was in derelict condition had been abounded and neglected for many a year. Still when I got the telegram asking to evaluate the condition of the house I had shivers of ice run down my spine. I had only seen the House once many years ago when I was not yet a teenager. It was next to an old dirt road that ran along side it. Even then I had horrid visions of gruesome Death and horrors only seen in old Vincent Price movies.
Melancholy filled me with dread. I knew where this feeling originated. I also knew it would gave me Night terrors.
I had put off visiting this old House for two weeks. I got another urgent telegram urging me to visit the House. To evaluate it’s worth, to determine if it was worth fixing and salvaging, or if it should be leveled to the ground. The prospective client was in a rush to buy up the land surrounding the House. He wanted to turn the large roomy House into a Bed and Breakfast. If the House was not worth repairs he planned to build an almost exact replica, gloominess and all in hopes to attract the curious and even the creepy to this House.
That early Morn the Grey Clouds hung depressingly low. The surrounding land and the trees Grey in colour would seem to be in death throes, the barren trees held onto the dew of morn. But soon this would evaporate
I drove my small Volkswagen to the edge of the dirt road. This road was now mostly overgrown with weeds and a few straggles of grass that had not been smothered by the early winter conditions that had beset us. I tried to talk myself into returning to my car and getting the Hell out of there.
I park and walk most slowly to the porch that wrapped completely around the entire House. Stepping cautiously onto this porch I could hear the timbers moan with resistance to my lightweight frame. You see I am 5’7’ and my weight is around 9 Stones. For those of us not from Old England, this is a unit of weight. So 9 stones is approximately 126 Pounds.
I find a door. I secretly hope it is locked with no way to enter. But with a little effort the door groans and the hinges squeak most loudly as if to warn me not to enter. I enter, Heavy torch in hand expecting the House to be gloomy and my sight to need help. I am right the house is in darkness, shadows slide across the room; I am frightened by these shadows until I realize I am the one casting these.
The walls are barren. Cobwebs are the only decoration that adorns them. An occasional Spider flits its way across the walls. The small dim light that shines through the windows must filter through decades of dust and webs. This is the main living room of the house. The floors are covered in dust, but I swear I can see faint Human like footprints in the dust. Maybe a Vagabond or a Nomad has spent a few days in this house to be out of the elements.
I debate whether to climb the steep tall staircase to the second and even third level of this house. I slowly ascend these stairs, the wooden stairs once covered in carpet now only slivers of ratty material shift ever so slightly with every step I take. I make it to the second floor and find a huge room to my left. The door is missing so I enter into this room
I assume this was once a grand bedroom. The only thing left of the bed is rusty box springs. I frighten a Mouse, he frightened me more, we both jump a few inches and he scurries through a hole in the wall. I scan the walls and see an antiquated painting. This painting is faded and so dust covered I can barely make out a young beautiful Woman. I assume she was the Wife of the Manor.
I find an old dust mop and with a little effort I hold the dust mop above my head and wipe the dust away. The dust has clogged my nose and throat and I retch. Spittle and dust combine to make an ugly lump on the floor. I was right this is a painting of a Woman; she appears to be about 30 a little older than I expected but with a beauty you only see in fairy tales or unrealistic movies.
I turn to leave this room but I swear I can hear someone whispering ever so lightly, “Please don’t leave me, for you see I am so very lonely.” The whispers seem to be coming from the painting. I turn slowly and aim the Torch towards the beautiful Woman.
My heart is pounding out of my chest. A feeling that I can only describe as evilness has overcome me. Tears are falling from her eyes. She pleads, “Please take me out of here, I have been trapped in this evil house for so long.” I want to run but something is holding me in place as if someone had nailed my shoes to the floor.
It is if I am being pulled reluctantly and cautiously to this painting, but it is well above my short frame. I drag the old rusty box springs over to the painting. I cautiously climb on this. I can just reach the bottom of the painting. I try to loosen it but it holds fast. I put all my effort into this and the next thing I know I lose my balance and fall hard to the floor. The old floorboards give way and I fall onto the first floor.
I’m in a great deal of pain. I know I am bleeding internally. I look up to see this beautiful Woman from the painting standing over me. She gently pulls me up and says; “Now I will have a friend, a companion. I shall be lonely “Never More.”
THE GIRL WITH THE PEARL EARRING(Shirley Smothers)
Authors Note (This story was inspired in part by POE’S THE FALL OF THE HOUSE OF USHER, painting GIRL WITH A PEARL EARRING, artist Veemer)
My name is James and I am a Real Estate Property Manager.
Insurable gloom pervaded my being, my very soul. I knew the old House I was to visit that afternoon was just that. The old House that was in derelict condition had been abounded and neglected for many a year. Still when I got the telegram asking to evaluate the condition of the house I had shivers of ice run down my spine. I had only seen the House once many years ago when I was not yet a teenager. It was next to an old dirt road that ran along side it. Even then I had horrid visions of gruesome Death and horrors only seen in old Vincent Price movies.
Melancholy filled me with dread. I knew where this feeling originated. I also knew it would gave me Night terrors.
I had put off visiting this old House for two weeks. I got another urgent telegram urging me to visit the House. To evaluate it’s worth, to determine if it was worth fixing and salvaging, or if it should be leveled to the ground. The prospective client was in a rush to buy up the land surrounding the House. He wanted to turn the large roomy House into a Bed and Breakfast. If the House was not worth repairs he planned to build an almost exact replica, gloominess and all in hopes to attract the curious and even the creepy to this House.
That early Morn the Grey Clouds hung depressingly low. The surrounding land and the trees Grey in colour would seem to be in death throes, the barren trees held onto the dew of morn. But soon this would evaporate
I drove my small Volkswagen to the edge of the dirt road. This road was now mostly overgrown with weeds and a few straggles of grass that had not been smothered by the early winter conditions that had beset us. I tried to talk myself into returning to my car and getting the Hell out of there.
I park and walk most slowly to the porch that wrapped completely around the entire House. Stepping cautiously onto this porch I could hear the timbers moan with resistance to my lightweight frame. You see I am 5’7’ and my weight is around 9 Stones. For those of us not from Old England, this is a unit of weight. So 9 stones is approximately 126 Pounds.
I find a door. I secretly hope it is locked with no way to enter. But with a little effort the door groans and the hinges squeak most loudly as if to warn me not to enter. I enter, Heavy torch in hand expecting the House to be gloomy and my sight to need help. I am right the house is in darkness, shadows slide across the room; I am frightened by these shadows until I realize I am the one casting these.
The walls are barren. Cobwebs are the only decoration that adorns them. An occasional Spider flits its way across the walls. The small dim light that shines through the windows must filter through decades of dust and webs. This is the main living room of the house. The floors are covered in dust, but I swear I can see faint Human like footprints in the dust. Maybe a Vagabond or a Nomad has spent a few days in this house to be out of the elements.
I debate whether to climb the steep tall staircase to the second and even third level of this house. I slowly ascend these stairs, the wooden stairs once covered in carpet now only slivers of ratty material shift ever so slightly with every step I take. I make it to the second floor and find a huge room to my left. The door is missing so I enter into this room
I assume this was once a grand bedroom. The only thing left of the bed is rusty box springs. I frighten a Mouse, he frightened me more, we both jump a few inches and he scurries through a hole in the wall. I scan the walls and see an antiquated painting. This painting is faded and so dust covered I can barely make out a young beautiful Woman. I assume she was the Wife of the Manor.
I find an old dust mop and with a little effort I hold the dust mop above my head and wipe the dust away. The dust has clogged my nose and throat and I retch. Spittle and dust combine to make an ugly lump on the floor. I was right this is a painting of a Woman; she appears to be about 30 a little older than I expected but with a beauty you only see in fairy tales or unrealistic movies.
I turn to leave this room but I swear I can hear someone whispering ever so lightly, “Please don’t leave me, for you see I am so very lonely.” The whispers seem to be coming from the painting. I turn slowly and aim the Torch towards the beautiful Woman.
My heart is pounding out of my chest. A feeling that I can only describe as evilness has overcome me. Tears are falling from her eyes. She pleads, “Please take me out of here, I have been trapped in this evil house for so long.” I want to run but something is holding me in place as if someone had nailed my shoes to the floor.
It is if I am being pulled reluctantly and cautiously to this painting, but it is well above my short frame. I drag the old rusty box springs over to the painting. I cautiously climb on this. I can just reach the bottom of the painting. I try to loosen it but it holds fast. I put all my effort into this and the next thing I know I lose my balance and fall hard to the floor. The old floorboards give way and I fall onto the first floor.
I’m in a great deal of pain. I know I am bleeding internally. I look up to see this beautiful Woman from the painting standing over me. She gently pulls me up and says; “Now I will have a friend, a companion. I shall be lonely “Never More.”
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Lillian Kazmierczak
12/14/2021Shirley, that was great story. I will never look at that painting the same again! I didn't see that ending coming either! Great job!
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Shirley Smothers
12/15/2021Thank you Lillian. I do like tales with a twist.
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Gail Moore
12/13/2021A horror or a masterpiece, I'm thinking both. Well written. Loved it :-)
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Shirley Smothers
12/14/2021Thank you Gail. I like tales with a twist.
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