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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 12/14/2021
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It's cold down here, no one
can hear me.
I know you are there, I smell
your foulness.
Is there a reason, you're here,
why are you just standing there?
It's wet and moist down here,
where am I, where have you taken me?
I'm "alive, please" "sweetheart, don't" bury me.
It's wet down here I can't breathe, help me!
I need "water, there's" a pungent taste and its hard swallow.
"No, "sweetheart" I didn't
do anything, that's not me laughing.
You can trust me just let me out,
so I can kiss you again.
It should be you down here,
you pathetic cry baby.
Bury me alive, I still will not die
I will haunt you awake or dreaming.
Dig my grave 6 feet deep and
I still will claw my way out of here.
They will find us in my grave with a suicide note you wrote.
Bury me alive(Candra Creviston)
It's cold down here, no one
can hear me.
I know you are there, I smell
your foulness.
Is there a reason, you're here,
why are you just standing there?
It's wet and moist down here,
where am I, where have you taken me?
I'm "alive, please" "sweetheart, don't" bury me.
It's wet down here I can't breathe, help me!
I need "water, there's" a pungent taste and its hard swallow.
"No, "sweetheart" I didn't
do anything, that's not me laughing.
You can trust me just let me out,
so I can kiss you again.
It should be you down here,
you pathetic cry baby.
Bury me alive, I still will not die
I will haunt you awake or dreaming.
Dig my grave 6 feet deep and
I still will claw my way out of here.
They will find us in my grave with a suicide note you wrote.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
12/14/2021Candra, you tapped into my worst fear...being buried alive. My mouth went dry and I literally had trouble breathing. Great job on describing so well that you illicited a response !
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Candra Creviston
12/14/2021If you ever want to just chat feel free too message me. You can find me on Facebook Candra Creviston.
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Candra Creviston
12/14/2021Thank you! But I did not want to cause anyone anxiety. I hope you are okay!
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