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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 01/05/2022
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Dr Kevin is a distinguished doctor who loves his job and sticks to the old ways of medicine and worships the good morals of the noble mission of medicine. He comes from an honorable medical family that has offered many doctors to their community. For him medicine is more than a job, it is a creed with its own rituals, a culture where he grew up and whose basics settled in his subconscious mind at an early age. Dr Kevin received a strict and conservative upbringing among his family.
Dr Kevin still follows the old methods to diagnose the cases and listens to his patients, while most doctors rely on robots to detect the troubles of their patients and prescribe the suitable treatment. Artificial intelligence has invaded every detail in the human way of living. However, Dr Kevin remains careful and doesn't fully trust technology despite its tremendous breakthroughs.
Dr Kevin has been working for years on some study about the quality of cases he receives and the new illnesses in order to approach the evolution of sicknesses and their symptoms. Until now the outcomes of his work are alarming and appalling and call for some deep reflection. Some cases have left a terrifying impact on him.
While receiving a patient in his office, Dr Kevin asks, 'What are you suffering from, Sir?'
The 40 year old patient answers, 'I work a lot but I don't feel physically tired and I get bored quickly. I feel lazy and useless. My schedule is so hectic that I am not able to manage my time well. I eat without appetite or taste. I just try to satisfy my basic biological needs without getting any pleasure or enjoyment. I feel complete apathy. It is a kind of dilemma, doctor.'
'I see. May I ask what kind of job you do?'
' I am a computer programmer.'
'Interesting. From my limited knowledge, I can say that your work is very consuming and creative. It requires some huge mental effort, doesn't it?'
'It used to be when programmers used to create conceptions and programmes. Now everything is available. Software is in charge of everything. We just carry out instructions. I am supposed to be a programmer but I am a simple user at heart. I am not a superhero to be among the elite who create that kind of software and it is even unthinkable and unattainable.'
'I understand. What can you add?'
'I lost my appetite. I don't sleep well. I live in constant anxiety. I usually feel agitated and I lack motivation.'
'To be honest with you. You aren't suffering from any organic sickness. You are showing some psychological troubles that I don't find severe. Therefore, I advise you to see a psychiatrist.'
'Could you recommend any one Sir?'
"Yes. I will send you to a good one.'
'Thank you.'
The second case is related to a 38 year old woman who has two children and works as a translator. She is suffering from some skin rashes and a sharp ache in the belly.
After listening to her and examining some parts of her body, the doctor asks, 'When did these rashes first appear?'
'Almost a week ago.'
'No fever?'
'During the first two days, it was not very high.'
'Do you drink enough water?'
'I think yes.'
'Do you sleep well?'
'Not really?'
'Do you follow a healthy diet?'
'I can't. Like all people. I don't have a choice. I rarely cook at home and most of the cooking is done by a robot.'
'Ok. Your medical tests show no abnormal result. Nothing to worry about.'
'Thank you doctor.'
'Is your work stressful?'
' No. Although I have a lot of work, the software does everything and helps to save time. In fact, I don't feel satisfied.'
'Why?'
'I lost the taste of many things. The relationship between my children isn't strong. I feel the more they grow the more they pull away from me as their love is fading. I don't enjoy the feeling of being a true mother. They befriend robots and maybe trust them more than they trust their mother and father. I miss my human relationships with people, I miss the chemical function of emotions. Wherever I go I find robots in front of me. It's really disgusting.'
'All what you said is true Madam. There is an urgent need for some humanization of our human relationships. The issue is so complicated that we can't predict what lies ahead. Who controls the course of events: the human being or Artificial Intelligence?'
2050(Aziz)
Dr Kevin is a distinguished doctor who loves his job and sticks to the old ways of medicine and worships the good morals of the noble mission of medicine. He comes from an honorable medical family that has offered many doctors to their community. For him medicine is more than a job, it is a creed with its own rituals, a culture where he grew up and whose basics settled in his subconscious mind at an early age. Dr Kevin received a strict and conservative upbringing among his family.
Dr Kevin still follows the old methods to diagnose the cases and listens to his patients, while most doctors rely on robots to detect the troubles of their patients and prescribe the suitable treatment. Artificial intelligence has invaded every detail in the human way of living. However, Dr Kevin remains careful and doesn't fully trust technology despite its tremendous breakthroughs.
Dr Kevin has been working for years on some study about the quality of cases he receives and the new illnesses in order to approach the evolution of sicknesses and their symptoms. Until now the outcomes of his work are alarming and appalling and call for some deep reflection. Some cases have left a terrifying impact on him.
While receiving a patient in his office, Dr Kevin asks, 'What are you suffering from, Sir?'
The 40 year old patient answers, 'I work a lot but I don't feel physically tired and I get bored quickly. I feel lazy and useless. My schedule is so hectic that I am not able to manage my time well. I eat without appetite or taste. I just try to satisfy my basic biological needs without getting any pleasure or enjoyment. I feel complete apathy. It is a kind of dilemma, doctor.'
'I see. May I ask what kind of job you do?'
' I am a computer programmer.'
'Interesting. From my limited knowledge, I can say that your work is very consuming and creative. It requires some huge mental effort, doesn't it?'
'It used to be when programmers used to create conceptions and programmes. Now everything is available. Software is in charge of everything. We just carry out instructions. I am supposed to be a programmer but I am a simple user at heart. I am not a superhero to be among the elite who create that kind of software and it is even unthinkable and unattainable.'
'I understand. What can you add?'
'I lost my appetite. I don't sleep well. I live in constant anxiety. I usually feel agitated and I lack motivation.'
'To be honest with you. You aren't suffering from any organic sickness. You are showing some psychological troubles that I don't find severe. Therefore, I advise you to see a psychiatrist.'
'Could you recommend any one Sir?'
"Yes. I will send you to a good one.'
'Thank you.'
The second case is related to a 38 year old woman who has two children and works as a translator. She is suffering from some skin rashes and a sharp ache in the belly.
After listening to her and examining some parts of her body, the doctor asks, 'When did these rashes first appear?'
'Almost a week ago.'
'No fever?'
'During the first two days, it was not very high.'
'Do you drink enough water?'
'I think yes.'
'Do you sleep well?'
'Not really?'
'Do you follow a healthy diet?'
'I can't. Like all people. I don't have a choice. I rarely cook at home and most of the cooking is done by a robot.'
'Ok. Your medical tests show no abnormal result. Nothing to worry about.'
'Thank you doctor.'
'Is your work stressful?'
' No. Although I have a lot of work, the software does everything and helps to save time. In fact, I don't feel satisfied.'
'Why?'
'I lost the taste of many things. The relationship between my children isn't strong. I feel the more they grow the more they pull away from me as their love is fading. I don't enjoy the feeling of being a true mother. They befriend robots and maybe trust them more than they trust their mother and father. I miss my human relationships with people, I miss the chemical function of emotions. Wherever I go I find robots in front of me. It's really disgusting.'
'All what you said is true Madam. There is an urgent need for some humanization of our human relationships. The issue is so complicated that we can't predict what lies ahead. Who controls the course of events: the human being or Artificial Intelligence?'
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Kevin Hughes
12/07/2022Aloha Aziz,
I don't know how I missed this story, but it was profound. There is much "food for thought" in this story. I wanted to also add my Congratulations for Morroco making it to the Quarter Finals of the World Cup! And you beat Spain to do it. I bet the Sports fans in your country are thrilled with that success. The Goal Keeper is probably being treated to dinner by strangers. LOL
Have a great week, and good luck with your Next Match.
Smiles, Kevin
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Aziz
12/08/2022Thank you, sir. People are very happy here. They draw some positive energy and they celebrated the victory. Thank you again sir.
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Henry Vinicio Valerio Madriz
05/25/2022Interesting perspective! Unfortunately, there's no need to wait until 2050 since we're living it somehow... You're right, we need to preserve the human touch, keep talking to each other, person to person, not before a screen. A nicely presented story. Ther's still hope.
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Aziz
05/26/2022Thank you Sir. I appreciate your time and considetation. I do agree with you about the crucial need for face to face communication and human interraction.
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Makinsey Brewer
04/15/2022The format of the writing is incorrect. (also, I mean all of this out of the kindness of my heart to help you improve as a writer!) Try indenting when you start a new paragraph. Use quotation marks when people talk, and keep writing down the amazing bursts of creativity you so obviously get/have! Otherwise, amazing story! :)
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Aziz
04/16/2022Thank you for your pieces of advice. I appreciate your generous comment and I will be grateful to receive your feedback whenever it is possible.
Thank you for your precious time.
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Wilbur Arron
04/05/2022My comments are as follows. Less explaination like in the first three paragraphs. Bring out these qualities of the doctor in the conversations with his patients. As Ben Bova once told me, 'show, don't tell.'
Second point is more of a suggestion. Your character sounds like a GP. What if you switched the story to the psychiatrist office trying to treat these people for mental disorder. Your point about future AI assisted programs doing most of the hard thinking for us is correct. We stand in danger of being servents to the machine rather than the other way around which is a concept that has been around a while i.e. Fritz Lang's Metropolis.
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Aziz
04/05/2022Thank you Sir for the time dedicated for my story. I also appreciate your accurate feedback that led me to rethink some points and wonder about many questions.
Thank you
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Gail Moore
04/02/2022Congratulations Aziz,
A well deserve title. Enjoy the accolades my friend.
Great writing :-)
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Aziz
04/03/2022Thank you my dear Gail. Always grateful for your constant motivating and lovely words.
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JD
03/31/2022Congratulations on your selection as the short story writer of the month, Aziz. Thank you for all the outstanding stories you have contributed over the years, and your support and encouragement of other writers also. Happy April! :-)
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Aziz
04/04/2022Unable to express my gratitude dear Julie. What a great motivation I have recently gotten.
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JD
04/02/2022You have most certainly added a great deal of 'value' to Storystar, and I'm sure to your own community and endeavors as well. Thank you for your many contributions to the world, Aziz! : )
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Kevin Hughes
01/29/2022Aloha Aziz,
This is a typical brilliant thought-provoking story from you. You can tell by the thread I'm not the only one to be impacted by it. It certainly will make the final selection for the future challenge. And you did it in such a compact and concise way. How do we restore humanity? That's a good question. Congratulations and have a great day smiles Kevin
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Aziz
01/29/2022Thank you Sir. It is always with immense delight that I read your motivating feedback. I agree that t major question that imposes itself is how to we restore humanity? Or is humanity achieving some insights we aren't able to apprehend?
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Martha Huett
01/26/2022Oh gosh Aziz. That's a realistic sounding future already here in the now. "I crave the human connection," said a 16-year-old to me a few months ago. I was shocked. I thought the younger set loved their phones and computers and cryptocurrency and the metaverse and all. But now I'm realizing by reading your story that there's a fraction of resistance(?) that can come with the awareness of the negative impacts of AI. That's the cool thing about your writing that I really appreciate. It kind of makes me look around and think how closely your storyline relate to real life. Thanks for your story, Aziz. Loved it :)
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Aziz
01/26/2022Thank you Martha for your precious time and appreciation. I do agree that a horrifying future lies ahead if we aren't aware of the deep impact of AI and we don't show the necessary resistance. My respect
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Lillian Kazmierczak
01/23/2022Amen Aziz, less AI and robotics more human contact! I couldn't have said it better!
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Jason James Parker
01/15/2022I admire the amount of thought that goes into your writing, Aziz. You have both an astoundingly analytical and supremely creative mind, which makes your work fascinating to read. : )
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Aziz
01/17/2022Thank you Jason. Your feedback is always appreciated as well as your priceless time. Geateful to you
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Gail Moore
01/05/2022Fabulous story Aziz, you hit the nail on the head. How true this will be in out future as you see it happening now.
Kids glued to an artificial intelligence and gosh they throw a good old tantrum when they have to put them down.
A winning story for sure my friend :-)
I'm going to find this challenge very hard :-)
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Aziz
01/05/2022Thank you dear Gail for your lovely comment. I do believe that you can write something more beautiful and interesting. You are amazingly humble my dear.
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Aziz
01/10/2022I do agree with your interpretation Julie. My predictions seem to be realistic because I chose a year that doesn't seem to be far from nowadays and 29 years in history isn't a considerable length of time. Sir Kevin has suggested the challenge so I have to write something without delay. I really enjoyed writing it. Grateful for your huge effort Julie.
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JD
01/09/2022Well done, Aziz. It does seems as though AI is taking over more and more of our lives and we are being given fewer and fewer opportunities to be creative and inventive and solve problems ourselves. The more choices and freedoms that are taken from us, the more monotonous and inhuman our lives will become. So the future case scenarios you describe seem very realistic and believable indeed. I hope we can stop this future from happening by recognizing the destructive path AI reliance can take us down if we are not careful.... Thanks for rising to the challenge, Aziz! :-)
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