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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Horror
  • Subject: Creatures & Monsters
  • Published: 01/24/2022

The Invictae

By Jason James Parker
Born 1976, M, from Whitechapel, Australia
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The Invictae
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It’s funny the things that pop into your mind when you’re about to die horribly—the buttery texture of full-blood wagyu beef; the wave of berry flavor from an ensuing swig of Bordeaux; the primal smoke of the Cuban after that.

I haven’t enjoyed any such pleasure for six months, twelve days, and twenty-one hours. It may seem like a trivial thing to whoever reads this. If anyone. It doesn’t seem particularly trivial when I’m choking down the flesh of whatever slimy creature happens under my pile-house in the swamp. I wasn’t born here. I don’t feel nostalgic for a childhood brimming with Huck-Finn-style adventures. Most nights I sit up listening for intruders while desperately trying to recall the saltiness of Berkshire bacon.

But that’s all about to end.

We were a great species once, but arrogant, belligerent, and beset by hubris with it. When nature had had enough and tried to snuff us out with plagues of Biblical proportion, we just grinned and changed the equation.

To this day, no one can agree whether the medical marvels began in Asia or Europe. Either way, one thing I recall with vivid precision is the feeling in the pit of my stomach when I saw my first Invicta. I was late for a doctor’s appointment, so I bolted down the lane adjacent to the clinic. I then collided with something that barely registered my existence let alone my momentum.

At first, I was unsure what exactly it was I was looking at. It was tall, maybe seven-foot, with long raven hair and eyes that glowed with all the heat of Promethean fire. It nodded before ascending into the shadows—bouncing from wall to wall with all the ease of a cat leaping up onto a coffee table. I miss cats. If you’re unfamiliar, you should look them up on Share-Con, if that’s still a thing.

Turns out they were the New Coke of humanity (look that up too). The Invictae were us, so we were told, but with all the weakness plucked out by the scientific elite. Immune to the lusts, addictions, and diseases that make us what we are. They boasted greater intelligence, physical dexterity, and on paper at least, it appeared that they would live forever. They told us it was an exciting new epoch for the world at large. But things are never that simple, are they?

The first human family to be brutally slaughtered by their Invictae neighbors came as a shock to most. Not to me, however, as I’ve always been a cynical son-of-a-bitch. It seems that in our haste to immigrate to the heavens we’d created a whole new level of hell. Our bastard children, dissatisfied with the idea of coexisting among such genetic inferiority, had marked us for elimination.

The creatures shared none of our shortfalls—they also lacked the things that make humans halfway decent. Creativity. Curiosity. Empathy. Compassion. Mother Nature could take the day off: as per usual we’d designed our own apocalypse. And we’d done it right this time.

I don’t know how many survivors are out there; there’s precious little functioning technology left. Yesterday at sundown, with the aid of my telescope, I spotted the horde moving steadily south, annihilating anything and anyone in its path. Figured I had maybe twenty-four hours until they noticed the lonesome shack just barely illuminated by frantic swarms of torch bugs. They gave me twenty-three.

Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have to face off against a league of murderous monsters with nothing more than a pointed stick.

You better believe I’m going down swinging.

Victor Harker

January 25th, 2042

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Madhu Mangal Sinha

08/25/2022

A picture within the story, really we move toward that end. Thank you, dear.

A picture within the story, really we move toward that end. Thank you, dear.

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Jason James Parker

08/26/2022

Thank you for your insightful appraisal, Madhu

Thank you for your insightful appraisal, Madhu

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Lillian Kazmierczak

01/31/2022

Jason, that was creepy as hell! Too real for me...that picture is just..ugh! Not a horror fan but that was pretty realistic in a Dean Kontz way. Very well written. Congratulations on short story star of the day!

Jason, that was creepy as hell! Too real for me...that picture is just..ugh! Not a horror fan but that was pretty realistic in a Dean Kontz way. Very well written. Congratulations on short story star of the day!

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Jason James Parker

02/01/2022

Thank you so much, Lillian. : )

Thank you so much, Lillian. : )

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Kevin Hughes

01/31/2022

Well that's just hunky-dory Jason,

Now not only can I not sleep well but I keep appointed stick next to my bed so I can go down swinging. Thank you for this horrible believable future event. I guess when they built the Invictus they did not build in remorse compassion or forgiveness. I guess humans do have a few qualities that are worth saving

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Well that's just hunky-dory Jason,

Now not only can I not sleep well but I keep appointed stick next to my bed so I can go down swinging. Thank you for this horrible believable future event. I guess when they built the Invictus they did not build in remorse compassion or forgiveness. I guess humans do have a few qualities that are worth saving

I would not want to spend an evening in your brain while you're thinking stuff up I would die of fright.

Great job. You scared the crap out of all of us.

Smiles, Kevin

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Jason James Parker

01/31/2022

Thank you so much, Kevin. If all else fails, I may be able to establish a future-ready Pointed Stick business! Believe me, I used to have trouble being trapped in my skull (a lot of trouble sleeping even well into my twenties). Twenty plus years late... Read More

Thank you so much, Kevin. If all else fails, I may be able to establish a future-ready Pointed Stick business! Believe me, I used to have trouble being trapped in my skull (a lot of trouble sleeping even well into my twenties). Twenty plus years later and I'm finally at peace with it. Your pointed stick is in the mail. : )

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Martha Hume

01/31/2022

Nice work. I agree I hope this remains fiction for forever.

Nice work. I agree I hope this remains fiction for forever.

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Jason James Parker

01/31/2022

Thank you, Martha. Me too! : )

Thank you, Martha. Me too! : )

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Gerald R Gioglio

01/31/2022

And just when I thought I was getting over living through a plague for the last two years. Yikes! Nice work, thanks. jg

And just when I thought I was getting over living through a plague for the last two years. Yikes! Nice work, thanks. jg

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Jason James Parker

01/31/2022

My apologies, Gerald. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind comments. : )

My apologies, Gerald. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind comments. : )

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Shirley Smothers

01/31/2022

Let's hope this stays a tale of fiction. Vivid imagary and well written. Scarry stuff.

Let's hope this stays a tale of fiction. Vivid imagary and well written. Scarry stuff.

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Jason James Parker

01/31/2022

Agreed! Thank you, Shirley. : )

Agreed! Thank you, Shirley. : )

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Martha Huett

01/26/2022

That was just superb Jason. You writing is so descriptive I can just see our 'bastard children' (lol) coming after all us 'half-way decent' humans. I love how you describe us and the shit we do - 'This time we got it right'. So spot on. Wow. Excellent! :)

That was just superb Jason. You writing is so descriptive I can just see our 'bastard children' (lol) coming after all us 'half-way decent' humans. I love how you describe us and the shit we do - 'This time we got it right'. So spot on. Wow. Excellent! :)

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Jason James Parker

01/27/2022

Thank you so much, Martha. I'm always inspired by your thoughtful and beautiful comments. : )

Thank you so much, Martha. I'm always inspired by your thoughtful and beautiful comments. : )

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Hazel Dow

01/26/2022

And again our minds run in the same direction. No bright futures for us! Lol

And again our minds run in the same direction. No bright futures for us! Lol

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Jason James Parker

01/27/2022

Right on, Hazel. Bring on the beasties! : )

Right on, Hazel. Bring on the beasties! : )

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Douglas Richards

01/25/2022

Loved it, Jason! Your imagery is, as always, amazing! I was drawn right in and could not stop reading. Hope all is well. Take care!

Loved it, Jason! Your imagery is, as always, amazing! I was drawn right in and could not stop reading. Hope all is well. Take care!

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Jason James Parker

01/25/2022

Thank you so much, Douglas, for your excellent and very kind comments. : )

Thank you so much, Douglas, for your excellent and very kind comments. : )

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Gail Moore

01/25/2022

Jason, A definite winner here. Great piece my friend.
Q: Are you the reason I have night terrors? Hehe. :-)

Jason, A definite winner here. Great piece my friend.
Q: Are you the reason I have night terrors? Hehe. :-)

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Jason James Parker

01/25/2022

Thank you very much, Gail. And, yes. Lol. : )

Thank you very much, Gail. And, yes. Lol. : )

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JD

01/24/2022

Beautifully written and told horrific tale, Jason! A brutally unflinching vision of a future none of us want to see... just 20 years from now. Not too far... yet it seems like some distant galaxy somewhere else... not here. Truthfully I had no idea what was really going on or why, but I liked it. Great storytelling! Thanks for entering the Future Challenge! : )

Beautifully written and told horrific tale, Jason! A brutally unflinching vision of a future none of us want to see... just 20 years from now. Not too far... yet it seems like some distant galaxy somewhere else... not here. Truthfully I had no idea what was really going on or why, but I liked it. Great storytelling! Thanks for entering the Future Challenge! : )

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Jason James Parker

01/31/2022

Thanks so much, Jd! : )

Thanks so much, Jd! : )

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JD

01/30/2022

Happy short story STAR of the day! : )

Happy short story STAR of the day! : )

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Jason James Parker

01/25/2022

Thank you, Jd. I really appreciate it. : )

Thank you, Jd. I really appreciate it. : )

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