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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Ethics / Morality
- Published: 06/04/2022
The secret weavers of Barrack
Born 2010, F, from River state, NigeriaTHE SECRET WEAVERS OF BARRACK
CHAPTER1(BEGINNING OF A LIFETIME)
It all began when some people migrated from ESTONAISIA. The reason why they left that place because water dried out and the water dried because they disobeyed their god by not giving it the GOLDEN ARROW. The god warned them that they should bring the GOLDEN ARROW within three days or else. While they were searching a man named Aero collected the Golden Arrow from the temple and hid it in his house.
Then on the third day, the god asked for them for the Golden Arrow and they said “ We have searched everywhere for it but no prevail". Then the god said” I shall curse you people for not finding the Golden Arrow your land will be destroyed by another village and there will not be water in the land and you shall die of hunger and then you will leave this land and become wanderers”.
CHAPTER 2(WELCOME TO MISERY)
So exactly what the God said came to past another kingdom took over their land and made them slaves then a few years later there was drought in the land that also created famine and then the king that took over the land left the land and went back to their land and made the people suffer of hunger many people died of the result . But everyday they will go to their shrine and ask their God to stop all this mess but their God did not listen and said “ I will not remove you or save you from this pain unless you bring me the Golden Arrow .” Then everyday they cried to their God but then one day the God said I will give you a little pity and gave them a place to go and live and the name of the place was Barrack . That most people there are weavers but he wants them to be secret weavers because there is a person that weaves cloth that makes them golden . He is the one that has it so I want you to collect it from him and bring it to me after I’ll use it to touch the land so it can be fruitful again.
CHAPTER3(ARRIVING AT BARRACK)
Off they went to the city ,Barrack looking for a place to stay it was like they were migrates everyone was looking at them like if they were mad people .So lucky some of them got some job as farmers and some as weavers . So every night after work shift they’ll go to the person ‘s shop that their God told them that has the Golden Arrow. But one day, one of them had gotten a job has a sale clerks in the critic’s shop . And every night after everyone has gone they will check the shop for the Golden arrow so they will check every spot but if they didn’t find it they will dismiss the shop but even thou they couldn’t find it they were able to thrive in the community for three good years.
CHAPTER 4(A DISCOVERY)
But one day , one of the Estonisians was going to work then he noticed that he saw his master putting a golden object in his suitcase and he asked his master what was the object in his bag and said please if he could see it and the master gave him willingly and when it entered his palm he started studying the object while the master said he bought it from a man called Aero from Estonaisia and then the worker asked him “please can you repeat where his from” . The master said Estonaisia and he said the reason why he’s selling at high price was because it from a God . Then the master checked the time and said he better be going for it is getting late he now told the worker close the shop and then he left with the object, after the servant closed the shop he hurried home in a scurry to tell his family about his discovery.
CHAPTER 5(CAPTURED CULPRIT)
After that discovery every Estonaisian has been on the hunt to find the culprit that caused their misery ,but days passed they still couldn't find the culprit. But one day, one of them was heading home and then he saw a sign leading to a shop and on the sign it said AERO’S AMAZING ATTRACTIONS then he entered the shop because he remembered the name from what his master told him and when he entered he greeted the shop owner and asked him is your name is Aero the keeper replied Yes I am . The servant asked again are you from Estonaisia he said yes I am once more . The servant asked again did you remember selling a golden object to a man last week . The keeper replied I remember doing so. The servant told the keeper it belonged to my people the keeper asked how and the servant explained his story and after the guy said his story .Aero said in a teary voice I’m the one that stole the golden object because I heard it grants wishes so I stole it for my family’s sake because we were so poor I’m sorry please forgive me. That it was our only hope of survival but the servant replied I have forgiven you but you will have to go through the judgement of my people but we need to get that Golden arrow but did the man tell you his house address or where he was taking it to. Aero replied I think he said he was taking it to the palace to the king, as a royal gift to the king for his birthday also since he’s a close relative, he’s going tomorrow.The servant said Let’s go home.
The secret weavers of Barrack(JackbackPakaye)
THE SECRET WEAVERS OF BARRACK
CHAPTER1(BEGINNING OF A LIFETIME)
It all began when some people migrated from ESTONAISIA. The reason why they left that place because water dried out and the water dried because they disobeyed their god by not giving it the GOLDEN ARROW. The god warned them that they should bring the GOLDEN ARROW within three days or else. While they were searching a man named Aero collected the Golden Arrow from the temple and hid it in his house.
Then on the third day, the god asked for them for the Golden Arrow and they said “ We have searched everywhere for it but no prevail". Then the god said” I shall curse you people for not finding the Golden Arrow your land will be destroyed by another village and there will not be water in the land and you shall die of hunger and then you will leave this land and become wanderers”.
CHAPTER 2(WELCOME TO MISERY)
So exactly what the God said came to past another kingdom took over their land and made them slaves then a few years later there was drought in the land that also created famine and then the king that took over the land left the land and went back to their land and made the people suffer of hunger many people died of the result . But everyday they will go to their shrine and ask their God to stop all this mess but their God did not listen and said “ I will not remove you or save you from this pain unless you bring me the Golden Arrow .” Then everyday they cried to their God but then one day the God said I will give you a little pity and gave them a place to go and live and the name of the place was Barrack . That most people there are weavers but he wants them to be secret weavers because there is a person that weaves cloth that makes them golden . He is the one that has it so I want you to collect it from him and bring it to me after I’ll use it to touch the land so it can be fruitful again.
CHAPTER3(ARRIVING AT BARRACK)
Off they went to the city ,Barrack looking for a place to stay it was like they were migrates everyone was looking at them like if they were mad people .So lucky some of them got some job as farmers and some as weavers . So every night after work shift they’ll go to the person ‘s shop that their God told them that has the Golden Arrow. But one day, one of them had gotten a job has a sale clerks in the critic’s shop . And every night after everyone has gone they will check the shop for the Golden arrow so they will check every spot but if they didn’t find it they will dismiss the shop but even thou they couldn’t find it they were able to thrive in the community for three good years.
CHAPTER 4(A DISCOVERY)
But one day , one of the Estonisians was going to work then he noticed that he saw his master putting a golden object in his suitcase and he asked his master what was the object in his bag and said please if he could see it and the master gave him willingly and when it entered his palm he started studying the object while the master said he bought it from a man called Aero from Estonaisia and then the worker asked him “please can you repeat where his from” . The master said Estonaisia and he said the reason why he’s selling at high price was because it from a God . Then the master checked the time and said he better be going for it is getting late he now told the worker close the shop and then he left with the object, after the servant closed the shop he hurried home in a scurry to tell his family about his discovery.
CHAPTER 5(CAPTURED CULPRIT)
After that discovery every Estonaisian has been on the hunt to find the culprit that caused their misery ,but days passed they still couldn't find the culprit. But one day, one of them was heading home and then he saw a sign leading to a shop and on the sign it said AERO’S AMAZING ATTRACTIONS then he entered the shop because he remembered the name from what his master told him and when he entered he greeted the shop owner and asked him is your name is Aero the keeper replied Yes I am . The servant asked again are you from Estonaisia he said yes I am once more . The servant asked again did you remember selling a golden object to a man last week . The keeper replied I remember doing so. The servant told the keeper it belonged to my people the keeper asked how and the servant explained his story and after the guy said his story .Aero said in a teary voice I’m the one that stole the golden object because I heard it grants wishes so I stole it for my family’s sake because we were so poor I’m sorry please forgive me. That it was our only hope of survival but the servant replied I have forgiven you but you will have to go through the judgement of my people but we need to get that Golden arrow but did the man tell you his house address or where he was taking it to. Aero replied I think he said he was taking it to the palace to the king, as a royal gift to the king for his birthday also since he’s a close relative, he’s going tomorrow.The servant said Let’s go home.
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