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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 06/30/2022
Rhyme without reason
Born 1959, M, from Stoke, United KingdomIt’s a cold and wet night in a dismal part of town
In the yellowing streetlights a drunk staggers home
From the multi-storey car park a man is looking down
Waiting, to be sure he’s alone
He’s listening to the voice that’s all in his head
Telling him that all hope is lost
Filling his heart with despair and with dread
Knowing a line has been crossed
The shadows in the street call for his release
The rhythm of the rain beats a song
Only in the shadows can he find that final peace
Seeking a right from a wrong
When depression falls there comes a time
the soul enters the darker season
There’s no rhythm in life’s rhyme
Rhyme without a reason
The car parks empty, but still it rains
The flashing blues long gone
Rainwater washes away what remains
Of another life gone wrong
Rhyme without reason(Tallisman)
It’s a cold and wet night in a dismal part of town
In the yellowing streetlights a drunk staggers home
From the multi-storey car park a man is looking down
Waiting, to be sure he’s alone
He’s listening to the voice that’s all in his head
Telling him that all hope is lost
Filling his heart with despair and with dread
Knowing a line has been crossed
The shadows in the street call for his release
The rhythm of the rain beats a song
Only in the shadows can he find that final peace
Seeking a right from a wrong
When depression falls there comes a time
the soul enters the darker season
There’s no rhythm in life’s rhyme
Rhyme without a reason
The car parks empty, but still it rains
The flashing blues long gone
Rainwater washes away what remains
Of another life gone wrong
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Shelly Garrod
04/21/2024Sad for sure. Depression harbors so many cries which are rarely heard by the unaware. Well done Tallisman.
Blessings, Shelly
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Cheryl Ryan
04/21/2024A very engrossing poem covering poignant depression moments and the varied emotions surrounding it.
Thank you for sharing!
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Joel Kiula
04/19/2024A great short poem. Life has many challenges and sometimes a little help is all we need.
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