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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 07/25/2022
John organized a party for his friend's from university. Everything was going fine until they heard the screams coming from outside. They got scared but they were still curious. So, they went outside to see who was screaming. John lived in a place which was surrounded by a forest. It was really dark outside. So, everyone got separated from eachother. There were total 11 people who attended the party; Jessica, Monica , Ali, Aphomia, Jacob, Jonas, Haris, Tina, Linda, Sara and Benjamin. Jessica and Monica went to the eastern side of the forest while Ali, Jacob, Jonas, Haris went to the western side. John, Linda, Benjamin, Tina, Aphomia and Sara went to the Northern side.
After a few moments, they heard someone screaming:"Help! He's going to kill me. Help!". Jessica and Monica ran towards the house while everyone else started walking towards that sound. Jessica and Monica locked themselves in the house. Suddenly, Ali saw a shadow and told everyone:"Guys! There's a shadow". No one believed while Ali was sure that he saw someone there. A tall person covered in blood started walking towards them with a chainsaw. Everyone just ran for their life while that person with chainsaw following Ali.
As the other group of John and others was still trying to figure out where did the sound come from? They came across the dead body of Ali covered in blood and having marks all over his body. They screamed at the top of lungs, out of fear. Linda saw the tall man behind the tree. She couldn't see his face as it was pitch black. She pointed at it but she wasn't sure. She called for him but he just disappeared. Everyone was looking at here thinking who was she calling for? They buried Ali's body but were still crying. Linda was sure that she was something but wasn't sure that she saw something. She said to herself:"Linda! Stop overthinking about it. It was just the tree". She was busy talking to herself that she didn't realize that she was separated from others. She screamed:"Guys! John! Hello guys where are you? I am here". She started running. She ran into the tall man. She looked at him from toe to head. When she was the chain saw she screamed and ran for her life. Tall man started following. Linda could hear him starting the chainsaw to kill her but she was determined not to get killed by her. She ran as far as she could but she knew, she would get tired at some point. She saw Haris and screamed:"Haris! Help me!". Haris looked at her with confusion. She flew in his(Haris) arms. Haris asked her:"what happened?who were you running from?". Linda pointed towards the place she saw the tall man standing,lastly but she couldn't believe her eyes to see that there was no one. She turned to Haris and said:"I am sure I saw a tall man who was following me, Believe me!". "I do believe you. I saw him too". They both looked at eachother, got up and started following their group. Haris's group decided to find the other group. As they were walking they saw Aphomia crying with her head down. They went to her and asked her what happened? Aphomia looked up and everyone was staring at her in shock. Aphomia's left eye was hanging out while her right eye was not even there. Aphomia got up and cut Jacob's throat leaving him to death. They didn't realized that she had a blade in her hand. They screamed and started running away from her. They didn't where were they running and whom they were running with? They screamed but there was no use of it. Jonas got separated from Haris and Linda. Aphomia followed Jonas. After some time, he looked backwards, Aphomia wasn't there. He was relieved. He looked forward and peed his pants. Aphomia was standing right behind the tall man. He couldn't move, he was paralyzed with fear. The tall man stepped forward and separated his head from his body. Jonas didn't even realized that his neck was cut. John's group was walking but they stopped, John screamed:"Where is Linda and Aphomia?". They all looked at eachother wih confusion and with full concern. John saw the tall man. He said politely:"What....is.....that?". The tall man wasn't visible but as he came to light, they were shocked. Aphomia was standing on left side and Jonas was standing on his right side, holding his head in his right hand. They ran as fast as they could but Benjamin couldn't move finger. He collapsed and died not because Aphomia or Jonas killed . He died because of fear. Sara and Tina hid behind a bush and John ran away. The tall man cut the bush which also cut their heads into two pieces. They died on the spot. John ran as fast as he could crying because he loved Sara. He ran into Haris. He was stuttering while Haris asked him:"What happened,John?". John replied:"They......gggot.....kkkkilllled". Haris asked:"Who?". John replied:"Evvveryonnnee". Haris looked shocked and consoled him while Linda was standing behind him, crying. They heard someone walking towards them. They were determined to kill the tall man. John was the most determined one to kill him and get revenge of Sara. Haris picked up a stone and threw it at Jonas but there was no effect. Soon John remembered Aphomia's biggest fear was bugs. He picked up a worm and threw it at her. They saw the soul of Aphomia. John said:"The only way we can beat them is to show them their fears". Haris and Linda nodded. John lit up a fire, lit a wooden stick from it and threw it at Jonas. They saw his soul flying away. Suddenly Linda fell to her knees, she was having a headache then, she saw a man attacking a little boy with a chainsaw. The boy totally resembled the tall man. John was having the memories of Sara. He was in full rage. He stepped forward to attack the tall man with his fist. The tall man cut his body into two pieces. Linda screamed:"Nooooooooooooooo!". She picked up some water from the rain puddles and threw it at the tall man. The tall man's soul flew away just like the other's soul. As his soul was flying away, they saw hundreds of soul flying in the sky. Haris asked her:"How did you know that he was afraid of water?". She replied:"I saw his memories. He was afraid to touch the water, that is when someone cut his throat with the chainsaw." They cried for their friends, buried John's dead body and left the forest. They went to the house to find the blood everywhere. They saw the heads of Jessica and Monica hanging in the living room.
---Fawad Waheed
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The Tall Man(Fawad Waheed)
John organized a party for his friend's from university. Everything was going fine until they heard the screams coming from outside. They got scared but they were still curious. So, they went outside to see who was screaming. John lived in a place which was surrounded by a forest. It was really dark outside. So, everyone got separated from eachother. There were total 11 people who attended the party; Jessica, Monica , Ali, Aphomia, Jacob, Jonas, Haris, Tina, Linda, Sara and Benjamin. Jessica and Monica went to the eastern side of the forest while Ali, Jacob, Jonas, Haris went to the western side. John, Linda, Benjamin, Tina, Aphomia and Sara went to the Northern side.
After a few moments, they heard someone screaming:"Help! He's going to kill me. Help!". Jessica and Monica ran towards the house while everyone else started walking towards that sound. Jessica and Monica locked themselves in the house. Suddenly, Ali saw a shadow and told everyone:"Guys! There's a shadow". No one believed while Ali was sure that he saw someone there. A tall person covered in blood started walking towards them with a chainsaw. Everyone just ran for their life while that person with chainsaw following Ali.
As the other group of John and others was still trying to figure out where did the sound come from? They came across the dead body of Ali covered in blood and having marks all over his body. They screamed at the top of lungs, out of fear. Linda saw the tall man behind the tree. She couldn't see his face as it was pitch black. She pointed at it but she wasn't sure. She called for him but he just disappeared. Everyone was looking at here thinking who was she calling for? They buried Ali's body but were still crying. Linda was sure that she was something but wasn't sure that she saw something. She said to herself:"Linda! Stop overthinking about it. It was just the tree". She was busy talking to herself that she didn't realize that she was separated from others. She screamed:"Guys! John! Hello guys where are you? I am here". She started running. She ran into the tall man. She looked at him from toe to head. When she was the chain saw she screamed and ran for her life. Tall man started following. Linda could hear him starting the chainsaw to kill her but she was determined not to get killed by her. She ran as far as she could but she knew, she would get tired at some point. She saw Haris and screamed:"Haris! Help me!". Haris looked at her with confusion. She flew in his(Haris) arms. Haris asked her:"what happened?who were you running from?". Linda pointed towards the place she saw the tall man standing,lastly but she couldn't believe her eyes to see that there was no one. She turned to Haris and said:"I am sure I saw a tall man who was following me, Believe me!". "I do believe you. I saw him too". They both looked at eachother, got up and started following their group. Haris's group decided to find the other group. As they were walking they saw Aphomia crying with her head down. They went to her and asked her what happened? Aphomia looked up and everyone was staring at her in shock. Aphomia's left eye was hanging out while her right eye was not even there. Aphomia got up and cut Jacob's throat leaving him to death. They didn't realized that she had a blade in her hand. They screamed and started running away from her. They didn't where were they running and whom they were running with? They screamed but there was no use of it. Jonas got separated from Haris and Linda. Aphomia followed Jonas. After some time, he looked backwards, Aphomia wasn't there. He was relieved. He looked forward and peed his pants. Aphomia was standing right behind the tall man. He couldn't move, he was paralyzed with fear. The tall man stepped forward and separated his head from his body. Jonas didn't even realized that his neck was cut. John's group was walking but they stopped, John screamed:"Where is Linda and Aphomia?". They all looked at eachother wih confusion and with full concern. John saw the tall man. He said politely:"What....is.....that?". The tall man wasn't visible but as he came to light, they were shocked. Aphomia was standing on left side and Jonas was standing on his right side, holding his head in his right hand. They ran as fast as they could but Benjamin couldn't move finger. He collapsed and died not because Aphomia or Jonas killed . He died because of fear. Sara and Tina hid behind a bush and John ran away. The tall man cut the bush which also cut their heads into two pieces. They died on the spot. John ran as fast as he could crying because he loved Sara. He ran into Haris. He was stuttering while Haris asked him:"What happened,John?". John replied:"They......gggot.....kkkkilllled". Haris asked:"Who?". John replied:"Evvveryonnnee". Haris looked shocked and consoled him while Linda was standing behind him, crying. They heard someone walking towards them. They were determined to kill the tall man. John was the most determined one to kill him and get revenge of Sara. Haris picked up a stone and threw it at Jonas but there was no effect. Soon John remembered Aphomia's biggest fear was bugs. He picked up a worm and threw it at her. They saw the soul of Aphomia. John said:"The only way we can beat them is to show them their fears". Haris and Linda nodded. John lit up a fire, lit a wooden stick from it and threw it at Jonas. They saw his soul flying away. Suddenly Linda fell to her knees, she was having a headache then, she saw a man attacking a little boy with a chainsaw. The boy totally resembled the tall man. John was having the memories of Sara. He was in full rage. He stepped forward to attack the tall man with his fist. The tall man cut his body into two pieces. Linda screamed:"Nooooooooooooooo!". She picked up some water from the rain puddles and threw it at the tall man. The tall man's soul flew away just like the other's soul. As his soul was flying away, they saw hundreds of soul flying in the sky. Haris asked her:"How did you know that he was afraid of water?". She replied:"I saw his memories. He was afraid to touch the water, that is when someone cut his throat with the chainsaw." They cried for their friends, buried John's dead body and left the forest. They went to the house to find the blood everywhere. They saw the heads of Jessica and Monica hanging in the living room.
---Fawad Waheed
Blog:www.fawadthepoetarticle.blogspot.com
Follow me at storywrite
Account:Fawad110910
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