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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: General Interest
- Published: 11/03/2022
The Art of Prioritizing
Born 1998, M, from Bajaur, PakistanIT WAS Amar’s fifteenth birthday when his father gifted him a parrot that was fluffy and green with two hazy lines in his neck: black and red. Amar knew the hazy lines specify the stage of learning. “When there is a good teacher how can his student be dull”, he used to believe. It was unerringly so. He was clever but his student was far cleverer than him whom he called Metto. He was learning more quickly than he had thought.
Amar kept Metto’s cage in the backyard, dangling from a branch of a willow tree. The cage was yellow with a big center door and two small windows on either sides of the door. A shiny silver rod running through the cage and an enormous red ring dangling from the ceiling were Metto’s favorites in the entire cage. There were two pans behind the each window: one for almonds and peanuts and one for water. No one had ever seen them empty. They were always filled and so were Amar’s pockets with almonds and peanuts, and sometimes with pistachios.
METTO’S WORLD was fabulous but so confined: surrounded by eight-foot white walls, some willow, few apricot and plum trees alongside the walls. A lawn surrounded by multi-colour roses and a palm tree in the middle of lawn. Where they played and talked most of the time together which was Metto’s classroom likely. For Metto, it was everything: a comfortable life but unaware of the outer world.
When Amar comes back from the school, he visits Metto as soon as he could. It was likely so in the morning. Few pace away from the cage, he used to start calling “Metto, Metto”. Amar always heard the same word like an echo. He escorted the cage to the middle of lawn and slid the door up for Metto to set him free nearby the palm tree. Metto could set himself free because he knew how to slide up the door but he had never tried to do so. It was either love with Amar or, might be, he had never tasted the taste of true freedom.
Amar always talked with Metto in Pashto. He had crammed some of them. Whenever Amar fished out almonds and peanuts from his pocket, Metto talked frequently “Toti choori khore”—parrot! Wanna eat choori. He used to play with the intonation of these words, sometimes it sounded like question and sometimes order. He had learned one more sentence after meeting with his friend belonging to jungle. He always said that at the end of meal “Da wakht bam teer she”—this shall to be passed, which Amar had never taught him.
Amar saw his friend coming daily and sat in the willow tree nearby the Metto’s cage. He let them and did nothing. “He has already one teacher who has taught him everything. The new one can never succeed in enticing him. After all, I feed him well. No one can feed him better than me. He will never leave me”, Amar mumbled. But he didn’t know that the new teacher had taught him something which the old one hadn’t. It was the knowledge of freedom and outer world with untouchable horizon.
ONE EVENING, Amar was on the way to feed him. What he saw was extremely shocking for him. He saw the Metto sliding the door up to accompany the parrot of jungle. Amar’s heart sank with seeing something close to his heart was leaving. He ran toward them to catch Metto which was slow in flying as if he had forgotten flying after being in cage for long time. He managed to take wing and flew away. Amar chased them both for long distance. They finally vanished in the woods.
THE GLOOMY and thwarted Amar was coming back home after long running. His heart was still pounding. Suddenly, he reminded Metto’s words this shall to be passed which eased his grief little. After few paces, he thought that Metto had taught him the Art of Prioritizing Things. “At last, he prioritized beloved over me. At least, he prioritized freedom over comfort”, he mumbled. He thought of his own life too, in order to prioritize things. In the midway, he decided he would tell his parents, “I don’t want to be a doctor as you want me to be. I would like to be a writer”. All the half way, he was trying to gain the courage to say this to his parents who did not consider creative writing a job at all.
Written by Mr Zuhaib Ali
Zuhaib7khan@gmail.com
The Art of Prioritizing(Zuhaib Ali)
IT WAS Amar’s fifteenth birthday when his father gifted him a parrot that was fluffy and green with two hazy lines in his neck: black and red. Amar knew the hazy lines specify the stage of learning. “When there is a good teacher how can his student be dull”, he used to believe. It was unerringly so. He was clever but his student was far cleverer than him whom he called Metto. He was learning more quickly than he had thought.
Amar kept Metto’s cage in the backyard, dangling from a branch of a willow tree. The cage was yellow with a big center door and two small windows on either sides of the door. A shiny silver rod running through the cage and an enormous red ring dangling from the ceiling were Metto’s favorites in the entire cage. There were two pans behind the each window: one for almonds and peanuts and one for water. No one had ever seen them empty. They were always filled and so were Amar’s pockets with almonds and peanuts, and sometimes with pistachios.
METTO’S WORLD was fabulous but so confined: surrounded by eight-foot white walls, some willow, few apricot and plum trees alongside the walls. A lawn surrounded by multi-colour roses and a palm tree in the middle of lawn. Where they played and talked most of the time together which was Metto’s classroom likely. For Metto, it was everything: a comfortable life but unaware of the outer world.
When Amar comes back from the school, he visits Metto as soon as he could. It was likely so in the morning. Few pace away from the cage, he used to start calling “Metto, Metto”. Amar always heard the same word like an echo. He escorted the cage to the middle of lawn and slid the door up for Metto to set him free nearby the palm tree. Metto could set himself free because he knew how to slide up the door but he had never tried to do so. It was either love with Amar or, might be, he had never tasted the taste of true freedom.
Amar always talked with Metto in Pashto. He had crammed some of them. Whenever Amar fished out almonds and peanuts from his pocket, Metto talked frequently “Toti choori khore”—parrot! Wanna eat choori. He used to play with the intonation of these words, sometimes it sounded like question and sometimes order. He had learned one more sentence after meeting with his friend belonging to jungle. He always said that at the end of meal “Da wakht bam teer she”—this shall to be passed, which Amar had never taught him.
Amar saw his friend coming daily and sat in the willow tree nearby the Metto’s cage. He let them and did nothing. “He has already one teacher who has taught him everything. The new one can never succeed in enticing him. After all, I feed him well. No one can feed him better than me. He will never leave me”, Amar mumbled. But he didn’t know that the new teacher had taught him something which the old one hadn’t. It was the knowledge of freedom and outer world with untouchable horizon.
ONE EVENING, Amar was on the way to feed him. What he saw was extremely shocking for him. He saw the Metto sliding the door up to accompany the parrot of jungle. Amar’s heart sank with seeing something close to his heart was leaving. He ran toward them to catch Metto which was slow in flying as if he had forgotten flying after being in cage for long time. He managed to take wing and flew away. Amar chased them both for long distance. They finally vanished in the woods.
THE GLOOMY and thwarted Amar was coming back home after long running. His heart was still pounding. Suddenly, he reminded Metto’s words this shall to be passed which eased his grief little. After few paces, he thought that Metto had taught him the Art of Prioritizing Things. “At last, he prioritized beloved over me. At least, he prioritized freedom over comfort”, he mumbled. He thought of his own life too, in order to prioritize things. In the midway, he decided he would tell his parents, “I don’t want to be a doctor as you want me to be. I would like to be a writer”. All the half way, he was trying to gain the courage to say this to his parents who did not consider creative writing a job at all.
Written by Mr Zuhaib Ali
Zuhaib7khan@gmail.com
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Joel Kiula
01/05/2024A great tale of love and loss and how our own decisions matters the most in life. Sometimes choosing one's own way is the best thing in life. Amar learned better.
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Cheryl Ryan
01/05/2024What a great lesson from this story.
Each of us at one point in our lives had to choose freedom over comfort by moving out of our parents' house.
Now I understand why Metto had to leave.
Thanks for sharing.
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Shirley Smothers
08/18/2023Beautiful and sad. But it hurts to let loved one go. We all have to find our own way. Well written. Congratulations on Story Star of the Day.
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Kevin Hughes
08/18/2023Aloha Zuhaib,
First, congratulations on winning StoryStar of the Day...today! Many of us have had to learn to follow our own path, instead of the one chosen for us by others, no mater how well meaning their advice or recomendations were. In the USA we call that moment of decsion, breaking the apron strings. Meaning we let go of home to find our own way.
Good luck with your writing career!
Smiles, Kevin
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BEN BROWN
08/18/2023A wonderful story. A pet can be as good a teacher as ones parents in life. Well done for being todays star.
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Zuhaib Ali
08/18/2023Thank you so much, Ben Brown. Readers' compliments motivate us to write more and more. I am glad you liked it.
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Zuhaib Ali
08/17/2023Thank you so much for being the first to surprise me with the "Short Story of the Day." I'm truly honored and grateful for it. Thanks, JD.
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Debra Jean Walsh
08/16/2023Always follow your dreams. You never know where they will take you!
Keep up the good work!
Deb
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Zuhaib Ali
08/16/2023Oh! You have read almost all my short stories and poems. Thank you so much, Debra Jean Walsh.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
11/09/2022A sad but beautiful story of friendship and freedom. Metto's freedom help Amar see what he needed to do, freeing him too! Very nice!
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Lillian Kazmierczak
08/18/2023This was a wonderful story of sacrificing for someone you love! Congratulations on short story star of the day!
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Zuhaib Ali
11/10/2022Much appreciation. I'm inspired by your compliment to write more and more. You correctly understood the story. It is fictional but the true voice of my heart.
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