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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 11/23/2022
Unforgettable Day
Born 1987, M, from Salem / Tamilnadu, IndiaEight legs of four people are moving towards an adventure. They belong to different societies; Jimmy is white, Otsobi is black, Ibrahim is North Indian, and Arasu is a local boy of Tamilnadu. Week-end makes them bored from the month when they joined that college. So Jimmy asks Otsobi to go anywhere, but he doesn’t know any places in Tamilnadu. Jimmy and Otsobi are only best friends. So, Otsobi asks a boy, Arasu, the boy who is his next room in the hostel, to get them away for an adventure. Arasu calls his friend Ibrahim. They planned to go to Siraj-din-Basha fort. Though it is an old belief that the king’s soul still roams there.
Now the story continues from the introduction of the characters and eight legs moving toward the fort. But the place is on the hill. Mostly people avoid going there.
Otsobi said, “I feel it will be a great moment for us; I’m ready to climb on."
Jimmy: "I don’t think so."
But Jimmy climbs unwillingly. Arasu leads them. Otsobi tries to overtake Arasu. Ibrahim and Jimmy’s legs are shivering to step up. On the ground, hawks are circling in the sky, and some hawks and crows are having lunch on the dead body of a dog on the heavy sunny day. That moment makes a scare to Ibrahim and Jimmy.
Ibrahim and Jimmy chorally: “We should be back. It’s not good for us."
Arasu: “We have come a part of a hill; we still have a mile distance. So, let’s forward and will be back down soon”. Some monkeys are playing in the trees, and the funny monkeys impress them enough to welcome them on the hill. A great mystery is waiting for them. Arasu, the boy who leads the other boys, reaches the top of the hill first. Otsobi is jealous of Arasu, but others are encouraging him for showing such a better place. A tiny snake enters there, and Otsobi catches it and makes them scared.
(Screaming voice) “Oh shit, throw the Satan, throw it off...”
Ibrahim is hiding near a tomb, and later he realizes that it is a tomb, and he shouts: “Come here, I have found something."
He says the history of the hill fort: “It is the tomb of the king Siraj-din-Basha and his wife Sahidha." Ibrahim and Jimmy feel so happy to hear the history, but it makes them shocked because they missed Otsobi in the midst of the story. They search for him and shout, "Otsobi, where are you?" Don’t play, dude” —
They are searching and there are lots of caves. They are creeping like reptiles. They reached near a water fall, which was a place for the queen to bathe. The place is covered with huge rocks, and the pond is at full depth. Arasu doesn’t think anything and he jumps into the pond, but he doesn’t back on. Then Ibrahim and Jimmy also jump into the pond. It's going deep and so deep, but they don’t feel the breathy problem. After the deep journey into the water, they reach a place that is like a cave, with no water there. (It was a place for the queen to change her dress after taking a bath.)
Two soldiers catch them and hook them with cleavage. They push them to a large hall, where Arasu and Otsobi are locked in by two other soldiers. The soldiers call for the queen in a gruff voice. A rock door opens and she explains why they have been caught. “The King died three hundred years ago because he made the poor people suffer and he had a habit of hunting." When he went away, no one crossed him. If they did so, he would kill them. Once, he saw a Hindu sage praying to God for fortune, and the king, Siraj, got angry and slashed him through the sward. So the sage cursed the king before he died, “Your soul will get off from you for three hundred years and three hundred days.” If he was in the open space, his body would be damaged. Then he begged him for his mistake and requested for the solution, and the sage Rishi said: "On the same day, after three hundred years and three hundredth days, you will get a chance to retain your soul,” and he died. So the queen, Sahidha, took him to the cave for three hundred years. In the mean time, I prayed to God for the solution and I received the solution from God that if any person gives his last drop of blood to the empty body, he will be back. And she says that this is the three hundred year’s three hundredth day.
Ibrahim: “Then what about the tomb?"
That one is fake to make the people fool and we have a living facility here," Haha, the king will be coming back with his lost life." He has four souls now. Who is ready to "sacrifice”?
Otsobi is hurrying to escape, and his character is like that, so he pulls and attacks the soldier who catches him behind, so the soldier inserts the sword into his naval. The rest of the soldiers leave their other friends and save the last drops of Otsobi’s blood to retain the king’s life. When the soldiers leave them, they have a chance to think of a solution to the problem. For that, Jimmy takes a sword, and Arsau and Ibrahim follow him and poke Queen Sahidha and the soldiers. Jimmy punches the sword into the king, Siraj-din-Basha’s empty body. Otsobi’s soul gets back to him. After the king’s body has been destroyed, the place has broken as a hole and they escape from there. When they reach the bottom of the hill, they join their hands on each other’s shoulders, and this day is “an unforgettable day” for them. They will never forget this adventure, and the Otsobi realizes the urge sense that made such a dangerous situation, so he abandons his urge sense and they will be the best friends ever.
Unforgettable Day(Saravanan jaa)
Eight legs of four people are moving towards an adventure. They belong to different societies; Jimmy is white, Otsobi is black, Ibrahim is North Indian, and Arasu is a local boy of Tamilnadu. Week-end makes them bored from the month when they joined that college. So Jimmy asks Otsobi to go anywhere, but he doesn’t know any places in Tamilnadu. Jimmy and Otsobi are only best friends. So, Otsobi asks a boy, Arasu, the boy who is his next room in the hostel, to get them away for an adventure. Arasu calls his friend Ibrahim. They planned to go to Siraj-din-Basha fort. Though it is an old belief that the king’s soul still roams there.
Now the story continues from the introduction of the characters and eight legs moving toward the fort. But the place is on the hill. Mostly people avoid going there.
Otsobi said, “I feel it will be a great moment for us; I’m ready to climb on."
Jimmy: "I don’t think so."
But Jimmy climbs unwillingly. Arasu leads them. Otsobi tries to overtake Arasu. Ibrahim and Jimmy’s legs are shivering to step up. On the ground, hawks are circling in the sky, and some hawks and crows are having lunch on the dead body of a dog on the heavy sunny day. That moment makes a scare to Ibrahim and Jimmy.
Ibrahim and Jimmy chorally: “We should be back. It’s not good for us."
Arasu: “We have come a part of a hill; we still have a mile distance. So, let’s forward and will be back down soon”. Some monkeys are playing in the trees, and the funny monkeys impress them enough to welcome them on the hill. A great mystery is waiting for them. Arasu, the boy who leads the other boys, reaches the top of the hill first. Otsobi is jealous of Arasu, but others are encouraging him for showing such a better place. A tiny snake enters there, and Otsobi catches it and makes them scared.
(Screaming voice) “Oh shit, throw the Satan, throw it off...”
Ibrahim is hiding near a tomb, and later he realizes that it is a tomb, and he shouts: “Come here, I have found something."
He says the history of the hill fort: “It is the tomb of the king Siraj-din-Basha and his wife Sahidha." Ibrahim and Jimmy feel so happy to hear the history, but it makes them shocked because they missed Otsobi in the midst of the story. They search for him and shout, "Otsobi, where are you?" Don’t play, dude” —
They are searching and there are lots of caves. They are creeping like reptiles. They reached near a water fall, which was a place for the queen to bathe. The place is covered with huge rocks, and the pond is at full depth. Arasu doesn’t think anything and he jumps into the pond, but he doesn’t back on. Then Ibrahim and Jimmy also jump into the pond. It's going deep and so deep, but they don’t feel the breathy problem. After the deep journey into the water, they reach a place that is like a cave, with no water there. (It was a place for the queen to change her dress after taking a bath.)
Two soldiers catch them and hook them with cleavage. They push them to a large hall, where Arasu and Otsobi are locked in by two other soldiers. The soldiers call for the queen in a gruff voice. A rock door opens and she explains why they have been caught. “The King died three hundred years ago because he made the poor people suffer and he had a habit of hunting." When he went away, no one crossed him. If they did so, he would kill them. Once, he saw a Hindu sage praying to God for fortune, and the king, Siraj, got angry and slashed him through the sward. So the sage cursed the king before he died, “Your soul will get off from you for three hundred years and three hundred days.” If he was in the open space, his body would be damaged. Then he begged him for his mistake and requested for the solution, and the sage Rishi said: "On the same day, after three hundred years and three hundredth days, you will get a chance to retain your soul,” and he died. So the queen, Sahidha, took him to the cave for three hundred years. In the mean time, I prayed to God for the solution and I received the solution from God that if any person gives his last drop of blood to the empty body, he will be back. And she says that this is the three hundred year’s three hundredth day.
Ibrahim: “Then what about the tomb?"
That one is fake to make the people fool and we have a living facility here," Haha, the king will be coming back with his lost life." He has four souls now. Who is ready to "sacrifice”?
Otsobi is hurrying to escape, and his character is like that, so he pulls and attacks the soldier who catches him behind, so the soldier inserts the sword into his naval. The rest of the soldiers leave their other friends and save the last drops of Otsobi’s blood to retain the king’s life. When the soldiers leave them, they have a chance to think of a solution to the problem. For that, Jimmy takes a sword, and Arsau and Ibrahim follow him and poke Queen Sahidha and the soldiers. Jimmy punches the sword into the king, Siraj-din-Basha’s empty body. Otsobi’s soul gets back to him. After the king’s body has been destroyed, the place has broken as a hole and they escape from there. When they reach the bottom of the hill, they join their hands on each other’s shoulders, and this day is “an unforgettable day” for them. They will never forget this adventure, and the Otsobi realizes the urge sense that made such a dangerous situation, so he abandons his urge sense and they will be the best friends ever.
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