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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Action & Adventure
  • Subject: Western / Wild West
  • Published: 12/31/2022

The Outlaw And The Boy

By Ed DeRousse
Born 1950, M, from Sparta, il, United States
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The Outlaw And The Boy

The deputy delivered the boy to the Giddings, Texas jail. The outlaw in the cell had requested to see him. That man was William Langley. A man with a reputation for killing many men, just because he could.
Langley didn’t know what to expect when he confronted the boy. They had never met.
The deputy pointed the boy to the outlaw’s cell.
“Langley, the boy’s here. And so am I. I’ll be watchin’!”
The boy, standing as tall as he could stretch his nine-year-old frame, took up a stance squarely in front of the outlaw. His arms were folded across his chest with his feet slightly spread apart and firmly planted on the floor. The boy looked straight up into the outlaw’s eyes.
Langley could tell the boy was scared but yet determined not to let the him know it. Perhaps it was an act of defiance or maybe youthful ego?
Langley studied the boy and determined Lizzy was keeping a secret from him. There had to be a reason, Langley thought, why Lizzy hadn’t told ‘em yet. The boy needs to know. He can’t grow up like me!
After a deafening silence, he spoke.
“What’s ya name boy?”
“John Smith.”
“Your Lizzy Smith’s boy, Ain’t cha?”
“Yes I am.”

For the boy, everything about the visit was unexpected. All nine-year-old boys have an active imagination, but no make-believe world would have concocted what happened next.
The boy thought he saw a small drop of moisture in the outlaw’s right eye. Is that a tear? he thought.
“Son, you have sure grown up straight and tall. Your Ma must be very proud of you. I am too."
Suddenly the boy’s head was spinning. “What? Did he just tell me he knows my Ma? How could that be?"
"I'm gonna hang in a couple days, son. I can't go to dyin’ without lettin’ you know. I'm not sure your Ma will tell you. But you need to know. Son, your name is William Preston Langley, Jr. You're my son. You're Ma’s was my wife. She was the love of my life. I've been watchin’ you and your Ma. I'm appreciative of how you turned out. Both of you. I wish it could have been different. Now go back to your ma and tell her I'm sorry. Tell her I never stopped lovin' her."
The outlaw turned and walked to the back of his cell.

The boy, of course, had so many questions. And he wasn’t going to get the answers from that outlaw. Hopefully, his mother would explain the outlaw’s claim.
“Come on John”, the deputy said. “Looks like the conversation’s over. It’s time to go home.”
When the boy was gone, Langley wiped away a tear.
“He looks like a fine boy. The boy, he faced me like a man!”
Langley laid down on his bunk and smiled. “Yes Sir! He’s gonna be OK. They’re both gonna be OK! My Lizzy done a fine job.”
Langley gave some thought to his past. “I just wish I…”
There was no need to finish the thought. The past can’t be changed.

The boy walked out of the Giddings jail as calmly as he could. Once safely out of sight, he ran for home.
“He he can’t be my father? He has to be lying. Ma told me my dad was killed in a bank robbery the day I was born. Why was this man telling me he’s, my father? Could it be? Is he really my father? Did he really know my Ma? They were husband and wife? How could my Ma know such an evil man?”

Mary Smith gathered her teary-eyed son up into her arms. “Honey, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?”
It was a few minutes before the boy could finally tell his mother about his visit with the outlaw in jail about to be hung.
His mother began to cry. "John", she started. "It's time to tell you about your dad."

The outlaw had no way of knowing that the boy would have his own earned reputation with the help of “Wild Bill” Langley’s Dance .44 revolver.

As a lawman.

The Outlaw And The Boy(Ed DeRousse) The deputy delivered the boy to the Giddings, Texas jail. The outlaw in the cell had requested to see him. That man was William Langley. A man with a reputation for killing many men, just because he could.
Langley didn’t know what to expect when he confronted the boy. They had never met.
The deputy pointed the boy to the outlaw’s cell.
“Langley, the boy’s here. And so am I. I’ll be watchin’!”
The boy, standing as tall as he could stretch his nine-year-old frame, took up a stance squarely in front of the outlaw. His arms were folded across his chest with his feet slightly spread apart and firmly planted on the floor. The boy looked straight up into the outlaw’s eyes.
Langley could tell the boy was scared but yet determined not to let the him know it. Perhaps it was an act of defiance or maybe youthful ego?
Langley studied the boy and determined Lizzy was keeping a secret from him. There had to be a reason, Langley thought, why Lizzy hadn’t told ‘em yet. The boy needs to know. He can’t grow up like me!
After a deafening silence, he spoke.
“What’s ya name boy?”
“John Smith.”
“Your Lizzy Smith’s boy, Ain’t cha?”
“Yes I am.”

For the boy, everything about the visit was unexpected. All nine-year-old boys have an active imagination, but no make-believe world would have concocted what happened next.
The boy thought he saw a small drop of moisture in the outlaw’s right eye. Is that a tear? he thought.
“Son, you have sure grown up straight and tall. Your Ma must be very proud of you. I am too."
Suddenly the boy’s head was spinning. “What? Did he just tell me he knows my Ma? How could that be?"
"I'm gonna hang in a couple days, son. I can't go to dyin’ without lettin’ you know. I'm not sure your Ma will tell you. But you need to know. Son, your name is William Preston Langley, Jr. You're my son. You're Ma’s was my wife. She was the love of my life. I've been watchin’ you and your Ma. I'm appreciative of how you turned out. Both of you. I wish it could have been different. Now go back to your ma and tell her I'm sorry. Tell her I never stopped lovin' her."
The outlaw turned and walked to the back of his cell.

The boy, of course, had so many questions. And he wasn’t going to get the answers from that outlaw. Hopefully, his mother would explain the outlaw’s claim.
“Come on John”, the deputy said. “Looks like the conversation’s over. It’s time to go home.”
When the boy was gone, Langley wiped away a tear.
“He looks like a fine boy. The boy, he faced me like a man!”
Langley laid down on his bunk and smiled. “Yes Sir! He’s gonna be OK. They’re both gonna be OK! My Lizzy done a fine job.”
Langley gave some thought to his past. “I just wish I…”
There was no need to finish the thought. The past can’t be changed.

The boy walked out of the Giddings jail as calmly as he could. Once safely out of sight, he ran for home.
“He he can’t be my father? He has to be lying. Ma told me my dad was killed in a bank robbery the day I was born. Why was this man telling me he’s, my father? Could it be? Is he really my father? Did he really know my Ma? They were husband and wife? How could my Ma know such an evil man?”

Mary Smith gathered her teary-eyed son up into her arms. “Honey, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?”
It was a few minutes before the boy could finally tell his mother about his visit with the outlaw in jail about to be hung.
His mother began to cry. "John", she started. "It's time to tell you about your dad."

The outlaw had no way of knowing that the boy would have his own earned reputation with the help of “Wild Bill” Langley’s Dance .44 revolver.

As a lawman.

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Laceyhopkins

08/29/2024

I read this story outloud to my brother who loves western stuff. He loved it so much!! Great job.

I read this story outloud to my brother who loves western stuff. He loved it so much!! Great job.

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Laceyhopkins

08/30/2024

Thank you I will. Please write more stories, they are awesome. You have such talent.

Thank you I will. Please write more stories, they are awesome. You have such talent.

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Ed DeRousse

08/29/2024

Thank you for your comment. I am glad you and your brother enjoyed the story. BTW I read your bio and noticed you like exploring your imagination through written words. Have fun exploring.

Thank you for your comment. I am glad you and your brother enjoyed the story. BTW I read your bio and noticed you like exploring your imagination through written words. Have fun exploring.

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Christopher Long

07/01/2023

That was a great read

That was a great read

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Shelly Garrod

07/01/2023

Congratulations Ed on being Short Story Writer of the Month.
Blessings Shelly

Congratulations Ed on being Short Story Writer of the Month.
Blessings Shelly

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you!

Thank you!

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Lillian Kazmierczak

07/01/2023

Another great piece to this wonderful series! Thank God that child learned from his fathers mistakes. As always a terrific read, A much deserved short story star of the week!

Another great piece to this wonderful series! Thank God that child learned from his fathers mistakes. As always a terrific read, A much deserved short story star of the week!

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you for reading another one of my stories.

Thank you for reading another one of my stories.

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Lillian Kazmierczak

07/01/2023

Congratulations on Author of the Month! Your writing is most worthy of this accolade!

Congratulations on Author of the Month! Your writing is most worthy of this accolade!

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Valerie Allen

07/01/2023

Good story; good message. Well written with strong characterization. Thanks ~

Good story; good message. Well written with strong characterization. Thanks ~

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you! Your comments are greatly appreciated. Westerns are not my usual type of stories.

Thank you! Your comments are greatly appreciated. Westerns are not my usual type of stories.

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Marla

07/01/2023

Well done!

Well done!

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you!

Thank you!

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Aleena Nawaz

06/30/2023

Congratulations on being chosen as the short story writer of the month. Bravo!

Congratulations on being chosen as the short story writer of the month. Bravo!

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you!

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JD

06/30/2023

Hi Ed, One of these days you'll have to put together a book with all these short wild west stories melded together into one. Happy short story star of the day, AND Writer of the Month! THANK YOU for all the outstanding stories you've shared on Storystar over the years.

Hi Ed, One of these days you'll have to put together a book with all these short wild west stories melded together into one. Happy short story star of the day, AND Writer of the Month! THANK YOU for all the outstanding stories you've shared on Storystar over the years.

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JD

07/02/2023

I hope u do well with it, Ed. Congratulations on getting it all put together.

I hope u do well with it, Ed. Congratulations on getting it all put together.

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you for selecting this story for Story of the Day and the honor for being Writer of the Month. I actually just released "Cheyenne Circumstance a chance to escape his troubled past" last month. It is collection of short stories about this troub... Read More

Thank you for selecting this story for Story of the Day and the honor for being Writer of the Month. I actually just released "Cheyenne Circumstance a chance to escape his troubled past" last month. It is collection of short stories about this troubled Texas outlaw. Many of those stories I have shared here on StoryStar.

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Ricky Sholar

04/12/2023

Cool piece amigo. Very enjoyable.

Cool piece amigo. Very enjoyable.

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you!

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Aleena Nawaz

01/10/2023

Good one!

Good one!

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Ed DeRousse

07/01/2023

Thank you!

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