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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Western / Wild West
- Published: 12/31/2022
The Outlaw And The Boy
Born 1950, M, from Sparta, il, United StatesThe deputy delivered the boy to the Giddings, Texas jail. The outlaw in the cell had requested to see him. That man was William Langley. A man with a reputation for killing many men, just because he could.
Langley didn’t know what to expect when he confronted the boy. They had never met.
The deputy pointed the boy to the outlaw’s cell.
“Langley, the boy’s here. And so am I. I’ll be watchin’!”
The boy, standing as tall as he could stretch his nine-year-old frame, took up a stance squarely in front of the outlaw. His arms were folded across his chest with his feet slightly spread apart and firmly planted on the floor. The boy looked straight up into the outlaw’s eyes.
Langley could tell the boy was scared but yet determined not to let the him know it. Perhaps it was an act of defiance or maybe youthful ego?
Langley studied the boy and determined Lizzy was keeping a secret from him. There had to be a reason, Langley thought, why Lizzy hadn’t told ‘em yet. The boy needs to know. He can’t grow up like me!
After a deafening silence, he spoke.
“What’s ya name boy?”
“John Smith.”
“Your Lizzy Smith’s boy, Ain’t cha?”
“Yes I am.”
For the boy, everything about the visit was unexpected. All nine-year-old boys have an active imagination, but no make-believe world would have concocted what happened next.
The boy thought he saw a small drop of moisture in the outlaw’s right eye. Is that a tear? he thought.
“Son, you have sure grown up straight and tall. Your Ma must be very proud of you. I am too."
Suddenly the boy’s head was spinning. “What? Did he just tell me he knows my Ma? How could that be?"
"I'm gonna hang in a couple days, son. I can't go to dyin’ without lettin’ you know. I'm not sure your Ma will tell you. But you need to know. Son, your name is William Preston Langley, Jr. You're my son. You're Ma’s was my wife. She was the love of my life. I've been watchin’ you and your Ma. I'm appreciative of how you turned out. Both of you. I wish it could have been different. Now go back to your ma and tell her I'm sorry. Tell her I never stopped lovin' her."
The outlaw turned and walked to the back of his cell.
The boy, of course, had so many questions. And he wasn’t going to get the answers from that outlaw. Hopefully, his mother would explain the outlaw’s claim.
“Come on John”, the deputy said. “Looks like the conversation’s over. It’s time to go home.”
When the boy was gone, Langley wiped away a tear.
“He looks like a fine boy. The boy, he faced me like a man!”
Langley laid down on his bunk and smiled. “Yes Sir! He’s gonna be OK. They’re both gonna be OK! My Lizzy done a fine job.”
Langley gave some thought to his past. “I just wish I…”
There was no need to finish the thought. The past can’t be changed.
The boy walked out of the Giddings jail as calmly as he could. Once safely out of sight, he ran for home.
“He he can’t be my father? He has to be lying. Ma told me my dad was killed in a bank robbery the day I was born. Why was this man telling me he’s, my father? Could it be? Is he really my father? Did he really know my Ma? They were husband and wife? How could my Ma know such an evil man?”
Mary Smith gathered her teary-eyed son up into her arms. “Honey, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?”
It was a few minutes before the boy could finally tell his mother about his visit with the outlaw in jail about to be hung.
His mother began to cry. "John", she started. "It's time to tell you about your dad."
The outlaw had no way of knowing that the boy would have his own earned reputation with the help of “Wild Bill” Langley’s Dance .44 revolver.
As a lawman.
The Outlaw And The Boy(Ed DeRousse)
The deputy delivered the boy to the Giddings, Texas jail. The outlaw in the cell had requested to see him. That man was William Langley. A man with a reputation for killing many men, just because he could.
Langley didn’t know what to expect when he confronted the boy. They had never met.
The deputy pointed the boy to the outlaw’s cell.
“Langley, the boy’s here. And so am I. I’ll be watchin’!”
The boy, standing as tall as he could stretch his nine-year-old frame, took up a stance squarely in front of the outlaw. His arms were folded across his chest with his feet slightly spread apart and firmly planted on the floor. The boy looked straight up into the outlaw’s eyes.
Langley could tell the boy was scared but yet determined not to let the him know it. Perhaps it was an act of defiance or maybe youthful ego?
Langley studied the boy and determined Lizzy was keeping a secret from him. There had to be a reason, Langley thought, why Lizzy hadn’t told ‘em yet. The boy needs to know. He can’t grow up like me!
After a deafening silence, he spoke.
“What’s ya name boy?”
“John Smith.”
“Your Lizzy Smith’s boy, Ain’t cha?”
“Yes I am.”
For the boy, everything about the visit was unexpected. All nine-year-old boys have an active imagination, but no make-believe world would have concocted what happened next.
The boy thought he saw a small drop of moisture in the outlaw’s right eye. Is that a tear? he thought.
“Son, you have sure grown up straight and tall. Your Ma must be very proud of you. I am too."
Suddenly the boy’s head was spinning. “What? Did he just tell me he knows my Ma? How could that be?"
"I'm gonna hang in a couple days, son. I can't go to dyin’ without lettin’ you know. I'm not sure your Ma will tell you. But you need to know. Son, your name is William Preston Langley, Jr. You're my son. You're Ma’s was my wife. She was the love of my life. I've been watchin’ you and your Ma. I'm appreciative of how you turned out. Both of you. I wish it could have been different. Now go back to your ma and tell her I'm sorry. Tell her I never stopped lovin' her."
The outlaw turned and walked to the back of his cell.
The boy, of course, had so many questions. And he wasn’t going to get the answers from that outlaw. Hopefully, his mother would explain the outlaw’s claim.
“Come on John”, the deputy said. “Looks like the conversation’s over. It’s time to go home.”
When the boy was gone, Langley wiped away a tear.
“He looks like a fine boy. The boy, he faced me like a man!”
Langley laid down on his bunk and smiled. “Yes Sir! He’s gonna be OK. They’re both gonna be OK! My Lizzy done a fine job.”
Langley gave some thought to his past. “I just wish I…”
There was no need to finish the thought. The past can’t be changed.
The boy walked out of the Giddings jail as calmly as he could. Once safely out of sight, he ran for home.
“He he can’t be my father? He has to be lying. Ma told me my dad was killed in a bank robbery the day I was born. Why was this man telling me he’s, my father? Could it be? Is he really my father? Did he really know my Ma? They were husband and wife? How could my Ma know such an evil man?”
Mary Smith gathered her teary-eyed son up into her arms. “Honey, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?”
It was a few minutes before the boy could finally tell his mother about his visit with the outlaw in jail about to be hung.
His mother began to cry. "John", she started. "It's time to tell you about your dad."
The outlaw had no way of knowing that the boy would have his own earned reputation with the help of “Wild Bill” Langley’s Dance .44 revolver.
As a lawman.
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Laceyhopkins
08/29/2024I read this story outloud to my brother who loves western stuff. He loved it so much!! Great job.
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Laceyhopkins
08/30/2024Thank you I will. Please write more stories, they are awesome. You have such talent.
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Ed DeRousse
08/29/2024Thank you for your comment. I am glad you and your brother enjoyed the story. BTW I read your bio and noticed you like exploring your imagination through written words. Have fun exploring.
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Shelly Garrod
07/01/2023Congratulations Ed on being Short Story Writer of the Month.
Blessings Shelly
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Lillian Kazmierczak
07/01/2023Another great piece to this wonderful series! Thank God that child learned from his fathers mistakes. As always a terrific read, A much deserved short story star of the week!
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Lillian Kazmierczak
07/01/2023Congratulations on Author of the Month! Your writing is most worthy of this accolade!
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Valerie Allen
07/01/2023Good story; good message. Well written with strong characterization. Thanks ~
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Ed DeRousse
07/01/2023Thank you! Your comments are greatly appreciated. Westerns are not my usual type of stories.
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Aleena Nawaz
06/30/2023Congratulations on being chosen as the short story writer of the month. Bravo!
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JD
06/30/2023Hi Ed, One of these days you'll have to put together a book with all these short wild west stories melded together into one. Happy short story star of the day, AND Writer of the Month! THANK YOU for all the outstanding stories you've shared on Storystar over the years.
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Ed DeRousse
07/01/2023Thank you for selecting this story for Story of the Day and the honor for being Writer of the Month. I actually just released "Cheyenne Circumstance a chance to escape his troubled past" last month. It is collection of short stories about this troubled Texas outlaw. Many of those stories I have shared here on StoryStar.
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