Congratulations !
You have been awarded points.
Thank you for !
- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Revenge / Poetic Justice / Karma
- Published: 02/04/2023
She Who Found Peace In Revenge
Born 2008, F, from Hydrabad, Indiablood dripping from the knife flowing through her bruised hand that held the knife's handle tightly, while she looked at the dead body of a sinner lying in a pool of his own blood and she suddenly felt the urge to grab him by the collar and yell at him, about dying so quickly because she knew that he deserved even more than a stab in the chest with a knife because he's the reason Isabella killed herself.
She remembered all those bad memories of her dear older sister Isabella getting abused by her husband, Blake. she shook out of it, trying her best to get it out of her system, she killed him and that's the end of that. no more nightmares. she looked at the mirror and found that her outfit was stained with a lot of blood, she wiped some of the blood of her face with her sleeve and sat down at the white sofa and let out a breath, "wow....it happened so fast...." she sighed staring at the dead jerk's body "I never thought I would wind up like this..." she lamented "guess I have to thank him for it" she smirked and looked straight in to those blue soulless eyes of that jerk and then she stared at the knife that she held with her wounded hand that was dripping with his blood.
Usually when people get revenge, later on they either regret it or feel like was it was useless. But in Imelda's story, that's not the case, she felt at peace, she felt like she had finally become complete for a moment. And Imelda was sure that she would never regret murdering Blake, neither will she try to hide from the authorities and lie that she didn't kill him, Because to her, this is something she needed to do and she wont give a damn about the consequences.
peace and violence or revenge in this case, never worked out well. But in this story, in Imelda's story it worked out pretty well. the victim is avenged by the victim's little sister with the death of the culprit, the culprit was able to finally escape his sinful life (whether he likes it or not) and the victim's sister finally ended her years of nightmares.
"You Cant Find Peace In Revenge" said the world "I did" she said.
She Who Found Peace In Revenge(Azira Wolf Heart)
blood dripping from the knife flowing through her bruised hand that held the knife's handle tightly, while she looked at the dead body of a sinner lying in a pool of his own blood and she suddenly felt the urge to grab him by the collar and yell at him, about dying so quickly because she knew that he deserved even more than a stab in the chest with a knife because he's the reason Isabella killed herself.
She remembered all those bad memories of her dear older sister Isabella getting abused by her husband, Blake. she shook out of it, trying her best to get it out of her system, she killed him and that's the end of that. no more nightmares. she looked at the mirror and found that her outfit was stained with a lot of blood, she wiped some of the blood of her face with her sleeve and sat down at the white sofa and let out a breath, "wow....it happened so fast...." she sighed staring at the dead jerk's body "I never thought I would wind up like this..." she lamented "guess I have to thank him for it" she smirked and looked straight in to those blue soulless eyes of that jerk and then she stared at the knife that she held with her wounded hand that was dripping with his blood.
Usually when people get revenge, later on they either regret it or feel like was it was useless. But in Imelda's story, that's not the case, she felt at peace, she felt like she had finally become complete for a moment. And Imelda was sure that she would never regret murdering Blake, neither will she try to hide from the authorities and lie that she didn't kill him, Because to her, this is something she needed to do and she wont give a damn about the consequences.
peace and violence or revenge in this case, never worked out well. But in this story, in Imelda's story it worked out pretty well. the victim is avenged by the victim's little sister with the death of the culprit, the culprit was able to finally escape his sinful life (whether he likes it or not) and the victim's sister finally ended her years of nightmares.
"You Cant Find Peace In Revenge" said the world "I did" she said.
- Share this story on
- 14
Achu biju
03/05/2023The line "You Cant Find Peace In Revenge" is a powerful and thought-provoking statement that is expertly demonstrated in this story. Its really true that we cant find peace by making a revenge.
Very good story sis, Have A joyfull day !
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Azira Wolf Heart
03/12/2023I understand your perspective, Achu Biju and I agree.
Though your story talks about revenge as well, the cause of revenge is different from your story and mine. Deadly Love Story it talks about getting revenge due to break up which is wrong and I agree with that but She Who Found Peace In Revenge talks about getting revenge for your loved ones, because they couldn't stand up for themselves. The story indirectly points out the reason behind vigilantism.
Have you watched the malayalam movie Christopher? in the movie it explains why sometimes, the law will to be ignored in order to do what is morally correct to the human mindset at the time.
By the way, I did like Deadly Love Story and I agree with the fact that, that sort of revenge is neither morally correct nor reasonable.
-Passionately, Azira
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Achu biju
03/09/2023It's true that Imelda's experience is unique, and while revenge may have brought her temporary peace, it's important to remember that it's not a sustainable solution to finding inner peace. This is my point of view. You can check out a similar revenge story by me named 'Deadly Love Story.' I hope you will like it.
Thank you, Have a wonderful day, sis
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Azira Wolf Heart
03/09/2023I agree with you, Achu Biju that we cant fine peace in revenge but that's the case for most people, here the story talks about Imelda's story who is not like other people.
she had a strong desire to get revenge which was sort of an addiction or something that she felt the need to do because she cant forget the incident and was really angry that she couldn't do anything to prevent it or get Blake arrested for abusing her sister for this long so in her case she was able to find peace.
Thankyou, I am glad that you liked the story and I hope you have good day too
-Passionately, Azira
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Shelly Garrod
02/06/2023Thank you Azira for your wonderfully inspiring comment. I try to write stories I hope readers will enjoy. Currently though I am dealing with writer's block. I'm finding it very difficult to create a story. Thanks again for reading my stories.
Blessings Shelly
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Azira Wolf Heart
02/05/2023Thankyou Shelly Garrod!, I am very thrilled that an amazing story writer like you, have liked and commented on my story. i hope to impress writers like you even more in the future .
- Passionately, Azira
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Radrook
02/04/2023There was blood dripping....
That is a very interesting and powerful way to start a story!e, True, there are many moments in which we feel like taking revenge. We probably would if there were not laws that punish taking the law into our own hands. So that detains us. Another thing that stops us is is our belief that we should imitate Jesus as Christians and not return evil for evil. In any case, if indeed we all ignored the law and went berserk whenever we felt revenge was justified then, society would crumble into chaos.
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Radrook
02/05/2023Yes, I understand your viewpoint. Yes, I agree, there can be a moment in life where we simply don't care about what anyone thinks about our actions including God and that if we don't we might feel we are not at peace.
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Azira Wolf Heart
02/05/2023Indeed, Radrook it is true that if we all ignored the law and order of the our world, our society will truly crumble into chaos.
This story is just to show that there can be a moment in a person's life where they don't care about what other people think or about the rules and consequences of the world, and just want to get the job done so that their mind, heart and soul can be finally at peace.
This story is written to prove the fact that we have to fight for what or who we love even if we need to break some rules.
-Passionately, Azira
COMMENTS (3)