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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 03/08/2023
The Demon and the Orphan Girl
Born 2009, M, from Kerala, IndiaThis is a story about an 11-year-old orphan girl named Renji who had the power to see demons since she was born. She was so alone, and the manager of the orphanage was cruel. He used her to beg on the streets without giving her any money. He would often beat her, but one day on the street, she met a demon. At first, the demon had no interest in talking to her, but later he started coming to her every day. They became friends, but the demon did not like humans. He had a tragic story; he was in love with a human girl, but humans killed her.
After a few days, an old man came to adopt her. She was sad that her relationship with the demon would break, but he took her to his home. However, she soon discovered that the old man was a bad guy who always did bad things to girls. He started attacking her with a knife and harassed her. But that time, the demon came to rescue her. As per their rules, demons cannot help humans without making a pact with them. However, the demon was not in a pact with her, so his body started burning. That was when she suddenly made a pact with the demon. The demon was not accepting the pact, but she denied it and gave her eyesight for the pact. Now that the pact was made, the demon could protect her. He killed that old man, rescued her, and took her to his home.
Days later, the demon started developing feelings for her and protected her in every need. He also told her that when she became a woman, her hair would be like the human girl he loved. But their happiness was short-lived when the demon saw her lifespan. He saw that she only had one month left to live. He was so sad but never told her about it. He started making her happy until she died and they went on many adventures. But he had one plan to make her live, but if he did that, his life would go. As the last day of the month came, he loved her but never told her. As her death approached, he revealed the truth that she was going to die, but he would never let it happen. He was giving his life to her because he loved her so much. As he said that, he started vanishing, and his soul came to her. She cried after hearing that, realizing that her best friend had given his life for her and was gone.
Two days later, a family came to the demon's home where she was living. They told her that they came to take her to their family. Her friend named Draus had spoken about her and told them to adopt her as they didn't have kids till now. She understood that Draus was her demon friend. She cried a lot when the new family took her to their home and cared for her as their daughter. She was happy about her new family, but on the other hand, she was sad about Draus, who gave his life for her. As months passed, Draus's friend and her new father told her that Draus had one love. After he knew more about her and her parents, he found out that her mother was the one who he loved. After he knew that, he told her about it. This was a secret that he never wanted her to know, but the time had come, so he told her. After hearing that, she started crying until night.
But that night, suddenly a call came from the hospital. When her father took the phone, they told him, "Congratulations, your wife is pregnant, and it's a girl." After hearing this, he suddenly came to his daughter and told her that she was going to be a sister. After hearing that, she came out of her room to her new father and hugged him, and started thinking, "Even though Draus was a demon, he gave me happiness and a new family. I will always remember him."
PS: All demons are not bad, and they too have feelings. It also emphasizes the importance of love, friendship, and family. No matter how difficult life can be, if we have someone to care for and protect us, we can overcome any challenge.
The Demon and the Orphan Girl(Achu biju)
This is a story about an 11-year-old orphan girl named Renji who had the power to see demons since she was born. She was so alone, and the manager of the orphanage was cruel. He used her to beg on the streets without giving her any money. He would often beat her, but one day on the street, she met a demon. At first, the demon had no interest in talking to her, but later he started coming to her every day. They became friends, but the demon did not like humans. He had a tragic story; he was in love with a human girl, but humans killed her.
After a few days, an old man came to adopt her. She was sad that her relationship with the demon would break, but he took her to his home. However, she soon discovered that the old man was a bad guy who always did bad things to girls. He started attacking her with a knife and harassed her. But that time, the demon came to rescue her. As per their rules, demons cannot help humans without making a pact with them. However, the demon was not in a pact with her, so his body started burning. That was when she suddenly made a pact with the demon. The demon was not accepting the pact, but she denied it and gave her eyesight for the pact. Now that the pact was made, the demon could protect her. He killed that old man, rescued her, and took her to his home.
Days later, the demon started developing feelings for her and protected her in every need. He also told her that when she became a woman, her hair would be like the human girl he loved. But their happiness was short-lived when the demon saw her lifespan. He saw that she only had one month left to live. He was so sad but never told her about it. He started making her happy until she died and they went on many adventures. But he had one plan to make her live, but if he did that, his life would go. As the last day of the month came, he loved her but never told her. As her death approached, he revealed the truth that she was going to die, but he would never let it happen. He was giving his life to her because he loved her so much. As he said that, he started vanishing, and his soul came to her. She cried after hearing that, realizing that her best friend had given his life for her and was gone.
Two days later, a family came to the demon's home where she was living. They told her that they came to take her to their family. Her friend named Draus had spoken about her and told them to adopt her as they didn't have kids till now. She understood that Draus was her demon friend. She cried a lot when the new family took her to their home and cared for her as their daughter. She was happy about her new family, but on the other hand, she was sad about Draus, who gave his life for her. As months passed, Draus's friend and her new father told her that Draus had one love. After he knew more about her and her parents, he found out that her mother was the one who he loved. After he knew that, he told her about it. This was a secret that he never wanted her to know, but the time had come, so he told her. After hearing that, she started crying until night.
But that night, suddenly a call came from the hospital. When her father took the phone, they told him, "Congratulations, your wife is pregnant, and it's a girl." After hearing this, he suddenly came to his daughter and told her that she was going to be a sister. After hearing that, she came out of her room to her new father and hugged him, and started thinking, "Even though Draus was a demon, he gave me happiness and a new family. I will always remember him."
PS: All demons are not bad, and they too have feelings. It also emphasizes the importance of love, friendship, and family. No matter how difficult life can be, if we have someone to care for and protect us, we can overcome any challenge.
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Azira Wolf Heart
03/09/2023Very nice story, Achu Biju i liked the idea of the story and it's intention to tell people that not all demons are cruel and about how when a person loves another person anything will be possible for them in order to protect their loved one whether it is a family member, friend or the love of our life. I hope you keep writing such good stories and have a good day
-Passionately, Azira
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