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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Poems & Songs
  • Published: 04/15/2023

Sky Heart

By Gordon England
Born 1954, M, from Viera/FL, United States
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Sky Heart

At Lone Cabbage Fish Camp one afternoon
With crackers and cowgirls overlooking a river,
Where airboats roared while looking for gators,
I would not have expected romance to strike.

Watching the Just Us band play tunes
For aging rock and rollers.
I wandered through the crowd watching for ladies
Dancing in their chairs with smiles and wiggles.

Approached a table of bobbing ladies my age
Asked who wanted to dance.
Melissa spoke first, “I’ll dance with you.”
And thus, our unexpected love story began.

She smiled as I danced every twist and spin I knew,
She kept up with me, flirting with smiles.
Her gorgeous eyes pulsated like none before.
At the end of the song, I knew she was special.

A whirlwind romance began the next night,
As we kissed under a full moon on the beach.
Intensity made me back away with caution.
I wasn’t ready for a Godfather lightning bolt.

Down my interview list I went
Box after box checked, no faults were found
With this blond country girl from Indiana.
Coincidental similarities amazed us over and over.

Strong and smart, Melissa had a will of her own,
Dancing far better than I, she pleased me.
Her teases and smiles were amazing,
Her pulsating eyes melted me over and over.

Caution made me separate several times,
My walls would not let love in.
Melissa waited for me to come back,
Each time deeper and more passionate.

Too far too fast! I put on my brakes again,
Walking away from romance without a word.
Shredding Melissa with pain.
She cried, “Why did you do this again?”

I had an age problem I thought would hurt her
Like happened with a previous love.
I cared too much to put her through that
And quit before any hurt began.

She called days later to vent her pain,
I shed tears in agony deserved.
Abruptly she said, ”Stop. A plane is outside.”
I have to you send a picture.”

I melted again to see a skywriting plane
Had made a heart in the sky.
At the same time a lightbulb near me
Blew out putting me into darkness.

Tears rolled down my cheeks
As these messages filled my heart.
“I’ll soon be at your door,” I said.
“The story isn’t over,” she quietly said.

Sky Heart(Gordon England) At Lone Cabbage Fish Camp one afternoon
With crackers and cowgirls overlooking a river,
Where airboats roared while looking for gators,
I would not have expected romance to strike.

Watching the Just Us band play tunes
For aging rock and rollers.
I wandered through the crowd watching for ladies
Dancing in their chairs with smiles and wiggles.

Approached a table of bobbing ladies my age
Asked who wanted to dance.
Melissa spoke first, “I’ll dance with you.”
And thus, our unexpected love story began.

She smiled as I danced every twist and spin I knew,
She kept up with me, flirting with smiles.
Her gorgeous eyes pulsated like none before.
At the end of the song, I knew she was special.

A whirlwind romance began the next night,
As we kissed under a full moon on the beach.
Intensity made me back away with caution.
I wasn’t ready for a Godfather lightning bolt.

Down my interview list I went
Box after box checked, no faults were found
With this blond country girl from Indiana.
Coincidental similarities amazed us over and over.

Strong and smart, Melissa had a will of her own,
Dancing far better than I, she pleased me.
Her teases and smiles were amazing,
Her pulsating eyes melted me over and over.

Caution made me separate several times,
My walls would not let love in.
Melissa waited for me to come back,
Each time deeper and more passionate.

Too far too fast! I put on my brakes again,
Walking away from romance without a word.
Shredding Melissa with pain.
She cried, “Why did you do this again?”

I had an age problem I thought would hurt her
Like happened with a previous love.
I cared too much to put her through that
And quit before any hurt began.

She called days later to vent her pain,
I shed tears in agony deserved.
Abruptly she said, ”Stop. A plane is outside.”
I have to you send a picture.”

I melted again to see a skywriting plane
Had made a heart in the sky.
At the same time a lightbulb near me
Blew out putting me into darkness.

Tears rolled down my cheeks
As these messages filled my heart.
“I’ll soon be at your door,” I said.
“The story isn’t over,” she quietly said.

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Melissa Kellogg

10/08/2023

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Zuhaib Ali

09/01/2023

The vivid descriptions and emotions make it a heartfelt and engaging narrative. Well done!

Congratulations on Story Star of the week!

The vivid descriptions and emotions make it a heartfelt and engaging narrative. Well done!

Congratulations on Story Star of the week!

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Gordon England

09/02/2023

Thank you and most eloquent comment

Thank you and most eloquent comment

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Stephanie Egbert

08/30/2023

Stephanie Egbert
I am positive you stirred up the memories of romances in all our lives. Well written and thanks for the
memory. Congratulations!!!
Always,
Stephanie

Stephanie Egbert
I am positive you stirred up the memories of romances in all our lives. Well written and thanks for the
memory. Congratulations!!!
Always,
Stephanie

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Gordon England

09/02/2023

Thank you and well written

Thank you and well written

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Kevin Hughes

08/29/2023

Gordon,

I hope this story is current! I think it may be....and finding love through walls is not an easy thing to do. I am glad she pounded them down.

Smiles, Kevin

Gordon,

I hope this story is current! I think it may be....and finding love through walls is not an easy thing to do. I am glad she pounded them down.

Smiles, Kevin

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Kevin Hughes

08/30/2023

Gordon, This made my day! Taking the hard blows of grief as you did a few years back, and being brave enough to overcome the fear of losing love again...and reach out for it. That, my friend is Hero level stuff. And you tell her (while giving her a... Read More

Gordon, This made my day! Taking the hard blows of grief as you did a few years back, and being brave enough to overcome the fear of losing love again...and reach out for it. That, my friend is Hero level stuff. And you tell her (while giving her a hug!) she is a real strong kind woman, to stick around until that thick Engineering/Texan wall could be torn down. So happy for you both! An Engineer writing a beautiful love poem...will miracles never cease?!

Smiles, Kevin

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Yes Kevin it is current. That is why you have not heard from me lately

Yes Kevin it is current. That is why you have not heard from me lately

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JD

08/27/2023

Introspectively poetic lines about relationships and love... complex! Thanks for sharing this with us, Gordon. Happy short story star of the week.

Introspectively poetic lines about relationships and love... complex! Thanks for sharing this with us, Gordon. Happy short story star of the week.

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Been too distracted lately to write stories. Ha

Been too distracted lately to write stories. Ha

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Gerald R Gioglio

04/23/2023

Sweet, Gordon. Thanks. grg

Sweet, Gordon. Thanks. grg

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Thank you

Thank you

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Shirley Smothers

04/23/2023

A lovely story. She didn't give up on you. Good for her. Enjoyed reading this.

A lovely story. She didn't give up on you. Good for her. Enjoyed reading this.

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Glad she wont give up

Glad she wont give up

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BEN BROWN

04/23/2023

A wonderful piece of writing. Well done for being todays star.

A wonderful piece of writing. Well done for being todays star.

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Thank you sir

Thank you sir

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Lillian Kazmierczak

04/17/2023

That was so heartwarming! I hope you'll write its sequel, I’d love to know how it ends!

That was so heartwarming! I hope you'll write its sequel, I’d love to know how it ends!

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Gordon England

08/29/2023

Sequel. Hmmm

Sequel. Hmmm

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Lillian Kazmierczak

08/28/2023

Gordon, I loved this story. I am still waiting for its sequel! A heartwarming short story star of the week!

Gordon, I loved this story. I am still waiting for its sequel! A heartwarming short story star of the week!

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Lillian Kazmierczak

04/22/2023

This poem is wonderful! A well deserved short story star of the day! Congratulations!

This poem is wonderful! A well deserved short story star of the day! Congratulations!

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BK

04/15/2023

Mine and Kevin's fav place after being on the St. John's

Mine and Kevin's fav place after being on the St. John's

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Gordon England

04/16/2023

Real Florida down there

Real Florida down there

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