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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 05/03/2023
Tell Me What You Really Think
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You sat and looked at me as if,
I had lost my mind.
You told me I was crazy,
That I was unrefined.
The kind of life I offered
That you could not accept.
I think there’s just a few lines
That I may have overstepped.
You said I had a screw loose
That I was fruity as a bat.
You called me crazy as a loon
Delirious and erratic.
Deranged, demented, dingy daft.
Bonkers, crazed and cracked
Unbalanced, unglued, unhinged unzipped
Kooky, mad and whacked.
You said I was a lunatic
Psycho and berserk
Out of my freakin mind
A screwy, batty, jerk
You called me a screwball
A flaky no good fink
And I said babe why don't you tell me
What you really think.
Tell Me What You Really Think(Ricky Sholar)
You sat and looked at me as if,
I had lost my mind.
You told me I was crazy,
That I was unrefined.
The kind of life I offered
That you could not accept.
I think there’s just a few lines
That I may have overstepped.
You said I had a screw loose
That I was fruity as a bat.
You called me crazy as a loon
Delirious and erratic.
Deranged, demented, dingy daft.
Bonkers, crazed and cracked
Unbalanced, unglued, unhinged unzipped
Kooky, mad and whacked.
You said I was a lunatic
Psycho and berserk
Out of my freakin mind
A screwy, batty, jerk
You called me a screwball
A flaky no good fink
And I said babe why don't you tell me
What you really think.
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Shelly Garrod
05/15/2023Words ARE weapons that cut right through your soul. Good or bad. I absolutely loved your last line!! You slammed it right back to the character doing the name calling. Very well done Ricky.
Blessings Shelly
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Ricky Sholar
05/16/2023Thank you Shelly
Have a wonderful day
R. I. C. K. Y
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Lillian Kazmierczak
05/05/2023Words are weapons especially when wielded to hurt. The last line slayed me. It was perfect response!
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Ricky Sholar
05/05/2023Thanks, Lillian
It was a whimsical moment.
R. I. C. K. Y
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