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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: Ethics / Morality
  • Published: 05/19/2023

The Insolent Flame

By Aleena Nawaz
Adult, F, from Mianwali, Pakistan
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The Insolent Flame
Flame was a bad-mannered, impolite woman who always quarrelled with others and had disgusting behaviour. She insulted people quite often, scolded them for being different, and repudiated to see their point of view.

One fine morning, the insolent woman walked down the street when she saw a group of goons who fled away after snatching the money of a very aged man.
Flame was agitated. She yelled—not at the goons but at the old man. She told him that no one should be standing on the pavement and that he should go away.

The old man was a man of wisdom. He told her, "Senora, it seems to me that you are a very sad person. Have you ever wondered why you are so dejected? I think it is because you are so rude to everybody around you."

Flame was astounded. She gave deep thought to his words. Soon, she perceived that her rotten attitude made her disconsolate and that she had been treating others very clumsily.

From that day on, Flame changed her behaviour. She neither humiliated others nor picked fights with them. Instead, she endeavoured to be benevolent and sympathetic. Soon, she began to feel joy in her life.


The moral lesson is that one's own happiness is directly affected by the way one treats others. So, if one wants to be jubilant, one must be benign and compassionate towards others.
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JD

05/20/2023

The kind of life change u mention is truly rare, but always worth celebrating and hoping for....

The kind of life change u mention is truly rare, but always worth celebrating and hoping for....

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Aleena Nawaz

05/21/2023

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Life can change in a moment, and rudeness can become kindness. Life is unpredictable and ever-changing. When a rude person becomes kind, it is a remarkable transformation. By treating others kindly, one can create... Read More

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Life can change in a moment, and rudeness can become kindness. Life is unpredictable and ever-changing. When a rude person becomes kind, it is a remarkable transformation. By treating others kindly, one can create a more positive and enjoyable life for oneself.

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Aziz

05/19/2023

Thanks to the man's shocking blow, she had the courage to review herself and discover the right fight. Luckily m, the man's words were the turning point of her behaviour. Beautifully written Aleena.

Thanks to the man's shocking blow, she had the courage to review herself and discover the right fight. Luckily m, the man's words were the turning point of her behaviour. Beautifully written Aleena.

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Aleena Nawaz

05/20/2023

Thank you for writing a glowing review. It is always a pleasure to know your valuable thoughts about the story.

Thank you for writing a glowing review. It is always a pleasure to know your valuable thoughts about the story.

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Soniya sameer

05/19/2023

I am really impressed with your writing style. Well-done.

I am really impressed with your writing style. Well-done.

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Aleena Nawaz

05/20/2023

Thank you so much.

Thank you so much.

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Mahnoor Mani

05/19/2023

A fantastic story with a great moral lesson.

A fantastic story with a great moral lesson.

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Aleena Nawaz

05/20/2023

Thanks a million.

Thanks a million.

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Dr. Albert Hunter

05/19/2023

Wow! That was majestic.
Brilliant work! I really liked the moral lesson.

Wow! That was majestic.
Brilliant work! I really liked the moral lesson.

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Aleena Nawaz

05/20/2023

Many thanks.

Many thanks.

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Charles Walter

05/19/2023

Amazing story. A great moral lesson for all.

Amazing story. A great moral lesson for all.

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Aleena Nawaz

05/20/2023

Thank you.

Thank you.

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