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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Flash / Mini / Very Short
- Published: 06/12/2023
Rome
Adult, F, from Mianwali, PakistanRome invariably wore a hat on his glossy, medium-length hair. He was proud of his hair. He always endeavoured to make others jealous.
One stormy day, Rome stepped outside. It was raining heavily.
"Fantastic," Rome thought, "I love rain."
He walked down the street and saw a man selling umbrellas for $7.
"No way," Rome said to himself, "I am not paying $7 for an umbrella."
Immediately, a gust of wind blew his hat off, exposing his bald head.
Feeling embarrassed, he muttered, "Hurry, take this $7 and give me an umbrella."
The man selling umbrellas smirked.
From that day on, Rome stayed humble.
Rome(Aleena Nawaz)
Rome invariably wore a hat on his glossy, medium-length hair. He was proud of his hair. He always endeavoured to make others jealous.
One stormy day, Rome stepped outside. It was raining heavily.
"Fantastic," Rome thought, "I love rain."
He walked down the street and saw a man selling umbrellas for $7.
"No way," Rome said to himself, "I am not paying $7 for an umbrella."
Immediately, a gust of wind blew his hat off, exposing his bald head.
Feeling embarrassed, he muttered, "Hurry, take this $7 and give me an umbrella."
The man selling umbrellas smirked.
From that day on, Rome stayed humble.
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BEN BROWN
06/21/2023A wonderful and amusing story. A classic comedy it would make. Well done.
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Mahnoor Mani
06/12/2023Absolutely fantastic! It is a brilliant write. I loved it.
Happy short story writer of the month, Aleena.
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