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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
  • Theme: Horror
  • Subject: Revenge / Poetic Justice / Karma
  • Published: 06/17/2023

This Is War

By Aadiv
Born 2012, M, from Lindfield, United Kingdom
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This Is War

"JACOB! JACOB! YOU FORGOT YOUR BAG!" His mom screamed as Jacob leaving for holiday with his friends. He rushed to go and get the bag. "You better not drive with auto pilot on. I don't trust the Elon's software in the car. What do you say it? Tesla." his mom warned him. And as always, he didn't listen. He put the destination in the Tesla and put on auto pilot. 5 hours later, Jake his friend woke them up" Eh? Guys wake up. You sure this is the Hawaii?" Jacob woke up"What? No this is not. Where are we?What we are at the Great Basin Desert? But how? No way Tesla failed us. Guys, it's also out of battery. We are stuck. There is no nearby electric charge stations. It's a desert." They got out of the Tesla and walked for hours for a sign of people. After 3 hours of walking, they found a sign saying ("Do not enter this village if you are with 3 friends! If you enter, your fate will be decided by the monsters") and followed by another sign saying ("Total population of humans, 178") Without fear, Jacob and his friends stepped into the village. This was the beginning of a killing spree.They saw lots of African people living there and The only one that spoke english was an Indian. They went to him and and asked if he could help them. And the Indian yelled "NO! YOU HAVE DECIDED OUR FATE! WE ARE GONNA DIE! YOU WON'T LEAVE UNTIL YOU PUT PEACE TO THIS VILLAGE!" And then they asked "What fate?" And then the guy explained "A African soothsayer once came to our village and have said that 4 teens would come to this village and bring the monsters back. All the monsters were slain a century ago by a legend called Mark Robert. The only way you can fix this by killing the monsters by the HART. The HART is a sword with many powers. But only one of you will have the power to have it and kill all of them. If I remember correctly, the one who has the powers to use it is Jacob."Shocked Jacob with this information asked him "Where is the HART though?" then the man took a shiny yellow sword from his shelf and gave it to him. When Jacob held it, lightning struck. Lots of HARTS started appearing in each hut. It seemed like war. Actually, it is war. The man explained it to everyone each hut. At night that day, they prepared for war. Lots of monsters suddenly appeared. And with the power of these HARTS, even if you don't know martial arts it will give you the martial arts talent. But, the real power was with Jacob. He had the power to slay 10 monsters in one go. With power came fear. As Jacob was slaying 100's of Monster's in one go, some villagers started getting killed. After a while, only 78 villagers were left and 100 monsters. With madness, Jacob's eyes became yellow and he used the power of lightning. He killed all the monsters but, he died. There was a thing that when you use the power of lightning, the power will be too powerful for any legend. His friends cried in pain. But, they got to go back home because there were rings that gave them one wish after they killed monsters. And, they wished to teleport back home. After the mom heard this news, the mom laughed in joy because she knew that he would put auto pilot so she changed the map into the desert. And wondering why the mom wanted to do this cruel thing? Because the mom was not a human. She was one of the monsters.

This Is War(Aadiv) "JACOB! JACOB! YOU FORGOT YOUR BAG!" His mom screamed as Jacob leaving for holiday with his friends. He rushed to go and get the bag. "You better not drive with auto pilot on. I don't trust the Elon's software in the car. What do you say it? Tesla." his mom warned him. And as always, he didn't listen. He put the destination in the Tesla and put on auto pilot. 5 hours later, Jake his friend woke them up" Eh? Guys wake up. You sure this is the Hawaii?" Jacob woke up"What? No this is not. Where are we?What we are at the Great Basin Desert? But how? No way Tesla failed us. Guys, it's also out of battery. We are stuck. There is no nearby electric charge stations. It's a desert." They got out of the Tesla and walked for hours for a sign of people. After 3 hours of walking, they found a sign saying ("Do not enter this village if you are with 3 friends! If you enter, your fate will be decided by the monsters") and followed by another sign saying ("Total population of humans, 178") Without fear, Jacob and his friends stepped into the village. This was the beginning of a killing spree.They saw lots of African people living there and The only one that spoke english was an Indian. They went to him and and asked if he could help them. And the Indian yelled "NO! YOU HAVE DECIDED OUR FATE! WE ARE GONNA DIE! YOU WON'T LEAVE UNTIL YOU PUT PEACE TO THIS VILLAGE!" And then they asked "What fate?" And then the guy explained "A African soothsayer once came to our village and have said that 4 teens would come to this village and bring the monsters back. All the monsters were slain a century ago by a legend called Mark Robert. The only way you can fix this by killing the monsters by the HART. The HART is a sword with many powers. But only one of you will have the power to have it and kill all of them. If I remember correctly, the one who has the powers to use it is Jacob."Shocked Jacob with this information asked him "Where is the HART though?" then the man took a shiny yellow sword from his shelf and gave it to him. When Jacob held it, lightning struck. Lots of HARTS started appearing in each hut. It seemed like war. Actually, it is war. The man explained it to everyone each hut. At night that day, they prepared for war. Lots of monsters suddenly appeared. And with the power of these HARTS, even if you don't know martial arts it will give you the martial arts talent. But, the real power was with Jacob. He had the power to slay 10 monsters in one go. With power came fear. As Jacob was slaying 100's of Monster's in one go, some villagers started getting killed. After a while, only 78 villagers were left and 100 monsters. With madness, Jacob's eyes became yellow and he used the power of lightning. He killed all the monsters but, he died. There was a thing that when you use the power of lightning, the power will be too powerful for any legend. His friends cried in pain. But, they got to go back home because there were rings that gave them one wish after they killed monsters. And, they wished to teleport back home. After the mom heard this news, the mom laughed in joy because she knew that he would put auto pilot so she changed the map into the desert. And wondering why the mom wanted to do this cruel thing? Because the mom was not a human. She was one of the monsters.

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Achu biju

06/18/2023

Thrilling story, bro! It was an entertaining read with a twist at the end.
Thank you.
Best regards, Achu

Thrilling story, bro! It was an entertaining read with a twist at the end.
Thank you.
Best regards, Achu

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Aadiv

08/22/2023

Thanks for the support dude. Wish u luck in ur stories
Best regards, Aadiv

Thanks for the support dude. Wish u luck in ur stories
Best regards, Aadiv

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