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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Ghost Stories / Paranormal
- Published: 06/24/2023
Your DNA
Born 1953, F, from Auckland, New Zealand
A shrieking call from his friend prompted Ethan to stop writing his history essay and run down the alleyway two doors up from his home to visit his long time school mate.
Ethan and Jack had been friends since kindergarten, both intellectuals from a very early age. This was their big exam year and both had already earned enough credits for a pass and extra credits that would automatically go into next years marking.
He thought at first Jack might just be nervous about tonight as both of them were going to be awarded the academic achievement award at the college end of year awards ceremony and had to give a speech.
Neither of the boys were comfortable with public speaking.
The call, “ETHAN, COME NOW HURRY, I AM FREAKING OUT“
Sounding like he was almost hyperventilating as he spoke.
Down the alley way, turn left and one house up, Jack was pacing up and down on the deck waiting for backup you might say.
Ethan laughed as Jack was still in his undies. He always slept in his undies. Even when he stayed elsewhere it was always just the undies.
Then the thought went through his head with the look on Jack’s face. He’s murdered an intruder and wants me to help get rid of the body. Yes that’s it. Maybe I should phone the police now.
That thought went out the door and Ethan went back to laughing as he noticed skid marks on Jack’s undies.
He yelled out to Jack. ”For the love of mankind go and change your underwear and get that skinny white frame into some clothing”
Jack yelled out telling Ethan he was going to stay put, can you please get me some clothing from my bedroom and then come up here.
Back to his thoughts. “Hey is there a dead body in your room you haven’t told me about?”
Jack yells back, “technically no” then mumbled under his breath. “Not a fresh one anyway”
Ethan went into Jack’s room, fetched some clothing and underwear and went upstairs to Jack’s parents bedroom and out onto the deck to give him his clothing. He could not help but notice his pastie white face. Jack stripped down bare on the deck, put fresh undies on, tee shirt inside out and then jumped over the deck onto the driveway.
Something he had never done before.
Ethan walked through the house and grabbed the house keys from the hall table, locked the front door and met Jack on the driveway.
Ok, “what’s so important that I had to run from my house to rescue you?”
Jack explains to Ethan that he won’t believe him, so he had to show him.
"It’s all about the program we are writing."
Ethan and Jack were developing a computer program that would allow your iPad or iPhone to X-ray any part of the body.
Ethan had left Jack the night before with what was left to finish it. Hopefully it was all going to fall into place, and they would make their fortunes.
That was the grand plan anyway.
A quick sprint back to Ethan's house and Jack immediately jumps on Ethan's computer.
“I sent it in an email before “ he said to Ethan.
“BEFORE WHAT” demands Ethan
Jack asks Ethan if he could go and get his dad before he opened any emails.
He follows his friends instructions as he is quite concerned by his behavior.
Ethan goes upstairs and gets his dad very puzzled as to what’s going on with Jack.
He is on the phone so Ethan picked up a pad and pen and writes.
Extremely worried about Jack’s behavior. Would you come downstairs ASAP.
They often communicated like this when his dad was busy.
“Dad will be down in a minute” says Ethan.
2 minutes later Ethan's dad comes down and wants to know why they have taken him away from his work.
Jack had developed a nervous shake, was sweating and looked like he was about to cry.
Ethan's shrugs and Jack hops up from the computer and hands them the iPad that was sitting on Ethan's bed.
“Open that email Ethan and turn on our X-ray mode”
“So it works then” Ethan said with a grin.
Jack says nothing and opens X-ray mode, throws it at Ethan's dad and then jumps behind him.
“Hold the camera up and look around” When it showed nothing he asked them to walk around, keep walking you will see something shortly”
All of a sudden Ethan's dad throws the iPad back on the bed and screams,
WHAT THE F—-K
Ethan had never heard his father scream in fright nor had he heard him swear. He always said that swearing was just a waste of words.
Ethan picked up the iPad and looked at it. He repeats his fathers swear words.
“Everywhere, they are EVERYWHERE" he screams. Ethan and Jack had inadvertently built a computer program that could see spirits. It didn’t take X-rays like it was supposed to. Instead, it was picking up spirits left, right, and center.
They had all fled to the office upstairs to talk. Ethan's dad paces and concludes that if they are on the iPad today then they have always been there. They are not hurting anyone so none of them need to worry. Although you could see he was bothered but trying to calm both boys.
He walks down stairs alone, picks up the iPad and goes back up to the boys. Turns on the iPad and immediately sees one adult and one child spirit standing beside them that could obviously see that they could see them looking at them.
The figure was trying to talk.
Ethan's dad, a computer wiz himself, and worked as a computer technician, sits and thinks.
The boys almost sitting so close to him that they were all squashed up on the couch.
He tells Ethan to go and turn on the Bluetooth speaker in the kitchen.
Both boys get up together and turn on the Bluetooth.
Adjustments are made to the X-ray mode program to enable the spirits to have a voice. They try it and it works. Not well but it worked all the same. They were literally able to talk to ghosts, spirits or whatever anyone wants to call them.
An app that sees spirits, unbelievable.
Written by two teenage boys, unbelievable.
One year on. The boys are no longer freaked out over their discovery. They slowly got used to the idea that spirits do exist. The two boys Ethan and Jack have trade marked their app. As yet it has not hit the market as not one spirit / ghost has been at all useful.
If you have a product to sell to the public it has to be useful for something or it has to do something and this app has done nothing.
I will explain.
These spirits are just that, spirits. They have no reason to be in the place they stand and can sometimes stand in that spot for days. They have no purpose, or as far as they know they have no purpose.
Maybe this is like a purgatory or a stopover to someplace better or worse.
As yet they don’t have these answers. Not one spirit has been claimed as such by their beloved families so maybe they never belonged. Maybe they are aliens in a lost dimension that X-ray mode has picked up on.
Despite extensive advertising of the faces of all the spirits on social media, not one family has recognised any of them.
X-ray mode can pick up a spirit in any room, any outdoor area, or anywhere where one might be hanging around. However the boys have questioned many over the past year since they discovered what the x-ray Mode app could do, and although they can talk that’s it.
No information whatsoever.
Anyway, you get the picture. Despite this they have been offered a substantial undisclosed amount of money for the app from a well-recognized app company.
The boys are about to sign a contract making them extremely wealthy teens.
The boys also discovered an error in their program, it was simply two letters written the wrong way around.
Adjustments have been made and the original Mode X-ray has hit the ground running.
Sales exceeded expectations and are still soaring.
Let’s fast forward a couple of years. Ethan and Jack are two very wealthy adults. But the wealth they have made meant nothing to either of them. Their lives as masterminds kept pushing and pushing. They knew there was more to this ghost thing than met the eye.
Ethan by chance stumbled upon the answer on night while studying the so called ghost standing next to him.
He had been watching this ghost for some time and noticed a pattern. Certain times, certain dates, were repeated over and over.
He had also noticed these spirits/ ghosts were not whole. As in not a complete structure.
It was like they were made up of a billion dots. Maybe even a trillion dots.
Turns out all of these so called ghosts were left over DNA from the past. Everywhere we go we leave our DNA .
So this changes the way the entire world looks at so called ghosts. There is simply nothing there. Just left over pieces of a world that existed once upon a time. People in the moment, in their moment. Leaving pieces of themselves for the future to find.
Once we are here we never truly leave. There is always a trillion or more little dots, little pin pricks of us everywhere we have been, every thing we ever touched, every romantic moment.
Everywhere and everything you ever did, you ever saw, you ever touched, will live on forever in the ghostly spirits that surround the present day and our future.
So you see, our loved ones from the past do not come back as ghosts because they never really left in the first place. They are all around us. They left their mark everywhere.
Feel them, embrace their presence that surrounds all of us.
Your DNA(Gail Moore)
A shrieking call from his friend prompted Ethan to stop writing his history essay and run down the alleyway two doors up from his home to visit his long time school mate.
Ethan and Jack had been friends since kindergarten, both intellectuals from a very early age. This was their big exam year and both had already earned enough credits for a pass and extra credits that would automatically go into next years marking.
He thought at first Jack might just be nervous about tonight as both of them were going to be awarded the academic achievement award at the college end of year awards ceremony and had to give a speech.
Neither of the boys were comfortable with public speaking.
The call, “ETHAN, COME NOW HURRY, I AM FREAKING OUT“
Sounding like he was almost hyperventilating as he spoke.
Down the alley way, turn left and one house up, Jack was pacing up and down on the deck waiting for backup you might say.
Ethan laughed as Jack was still in his undies. He always slept in his undies. Even when he stayed elsewhere it was always just the undies.
Then the thought went through his head with the look on Jack’s face. He’s murdered an intruder and wants me to help get rid of the body. Yes that’s it. Maybe I should phone the police now.
That thought went out the door and Ethan went back to laughing as he noticed skid marks on Jack’s undies.
He yelled out to Jack. ”For the love of mankind go and change your underwear and get that skinny white frame into some clothing”
Jack yelled out telling Ethan he was going to stay put, can you please get me some clothing from my bedroom and then come up here.
Back to his thoughts. “Hey is there a dead body in your room you haven’t told me about?”
Jack yells back, “technically no” then mumbled under his breath. “Not a fresh one anyway”
Ethan went into Jack’s room, fetched some clothing and underwear and went upstairs to Jack’s parents bedroom and out onto the deck to give him his clothing. He could not help but notice his pastie white face. Jack stripped down bare on the deck, put fresh undies on, tee shirt inside out and then jumped over the deck onto the driveway.
Something he had never done before.
Ethan walked through the house and grabbed the house keys from the hall table, locked the front door and met Jack on the driveway.
Ok, “what’s so important that I had to run from my house to rescue you?”
Jack explains to Ethan that he won’t believe him, so he had to show him.
"It’s all about the program we are writing."
Ethan and Jack were developing a computer program that would allow your iPad or iPhone to X-ray any part of the body.
Ethan had left Jack the night before with what was left to finish it. Hopefully it was all going to fall into place, and they would make their fortunes.
That was the grand plan anyway.
A quick sprint back to Ethan's house and Jack immediately jumps on Ethan's computer.
“I sent it in an email before “ he said to Ethan.
“BEFORE WHAT” demands Ethan
Jack asks Ethan if he could go and get his dad before he opened any emails.
He follows his friends instructions as he is quite concerned by his behavior.
Ethan goes upstairs and gets his dad very puzzled as to what’s going on with Jack.
He is on the phone so Ethan picked up a pad and pen and writes.
Extremely worried about Jack’s behavior. Would you come downstairs ASAP.
They often communicated like this when his dad was busy.
“Dad will be down in a minute” says Ethan.
2 minutes later Ethan's dad comes down and wants to know why they have taken him away from his work.
Jack had developed a nervous shake, was sweating and looked like he was about to cry.
Ethan's shrugs and Jack hops up from the computer and hands them the iPad that was sitting on Ethan's bed.
“Open that email Ethan and turn on our X-ray mode”
“So it works then” Ethan said with a grin.
Jack says nothing and opens X-ray mode, throws it at Ethan's dad and then jumps behind him.
“Hold the camera up and look around” When it showed nothing he asked them to walk around, keep walking you will see something shortly”
All of a sudden Ethan's dad throws the iPad back on the bed and screams,
WHAT THE F—-K
Ethan had never heard his father scream in fright nor had he heard him swear. He always said that swearing was just a waste of words.
Ethan picked up the iPad and looked at it. He repeats his fathers swear words.
“Everywhere, they are EVERYWHERE" he screams. Ethan and Jack had inadvertently built a computer program that could see spirits. It didn’t take X-rays like it was supposed to. Instead, it was picking up spirits left, right, and center.
They had all fled to the office upstairs to talk. Ethan's dad paces and concludes that if they are on the iPad today then they have always been there. They are not hurting anyone so none of them need to worry. Although you could see he was bothered but trying to calm both boys.
He walks down stairs alone, picks up the iPad and goes back up to the boys. Turns on the iPad and immediately sees one adult and one child spirit standing beside them that could obviously see that they could see them looking at them.
The figure was trying to talk.
Ethan's dad, a computer wiz himself, and worked as a computer technician, sits and thinks.
The boys almost sitting so close to him that they were all squashed up on the couch.
He tells Ethan to go and turn on the Bluetooth speaker in the kitchen.
Both boys get up together and turn on the Bluetooth.
Adjustments are made to the X-ray mode program to enable the spirits to have a voice. They try it and it works. Not well but it worked all the same. They were literally able to talk to ghosts, spirits or whatever anyone wants to call them.
An app that sees spirits, unbelievable.
Written by two teenage boys, unbelievable.
One year on. The boys are no longer freaked out over their discovery. They slowly got used to the idea that spirits do exist. The two boys Ethan and Jack have trade marked their app. As yet it has not hit the market as not one spirit / ghost has been at all useful.
If you have a product to sell to the public it has to be useful for something or it has to do something and this app has done nothing.
I will explain.
These spirits are just that, spirits. They have no reason to be in the place they stand and can sometimes stand in that spot for days. They have no purpose, or as far as they know they have no purpose.
Maybe this is like a purgatory or a stopover to someplace better or worse.
As yet they don’t have these answers. Not one spirit has been claimed as such by their beloved families so maybe they never belonged. Maybe they are aliens in a lost dimension that X-ray mode has picked up on.
Despite extensive advertising of the faces of all the spirits on social media, not one family has recognised any of them.
X-ray mode can pick up a spirit in any room, any outdoor area, or anywhere where one might be hanging around. However the boys have questioned many over the past year since they discovered what the x-ray Mode app could do, and although they can talk that’s it.
No information whatsoever.
Anyway, you get the picture. Despite this they have been offered a substantial undisclosed amount of money for the app from a well-recognized app company.
The boys are about to sign a contract making them extremely wealthy teens.
The boys also discovered an error in their program, it was simply two letters written the wrong way around.
Adjustments have been made and the original Mode X-ray has hit the ground running.
Sales exceeded expectations and are still soaring.
Let’s fast forward a couple of years. Ethan and Jack are two very wealthy adults. But the wealth they have made meant nothing to either of them. Their lives as masterminds kept pushing and pushing. They knew there was more to this ghost thing than met the eye.
Ethan by chance stumbled upon the answer on night while studying the so called ghost standing next to him.
He had been watching this ghost for some time and noticed a pattern. Certain times, certain dates, were repeated over and over.
He had also noticed these spirits/ ghosts were not whole. As in not a complete structure.
It was like they were made up of a billion dots. Maybe even a trillion dots.
Turns out all of these so called ghosts were left over DNA from the past. Everywhere we go we leave our DNA .
So this changes the way the entire world looks at so called ghosts. There is simply nothing there. Just left over pieces of a world that existed once upon a time. People in the moment, in their moment. Leaving pieces of themselves for the future to find.
Once we are here we never truly leave. There is always a trillion or more little dots, little pin pricks of us everywhere we have been, every thing we ever touched, every romantic moment.
Everywhere and everything you ever did, you ever saw, you ever touched, will live on forever in the ghostly spirits that surround the present day and our future.
So you see, our loved ones from the past do not come back as ghosts because they never really left in the first place. They are all around us. They left their mark everywhere.
Feel them, embrace their presence that surrounds all of us.
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Barry Doughty
11/06/2024Interesting theory. I thought the Idea could have been developed into a more interesting thriller. All the same the Mobile App theory is the stuff best sellers are made of, Gale, so keep the Ideas coming and good luck, Regards, Barry
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Cheryl Ryan
11/05/2024This is a very satisfying science fiction about DNA turning into spirits we can communicate with through a computer program.
This is great. Thank you for sharing!
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Joel Kiula
11/03/2024This is an amazing story. I took another great perspective about life and the people who are no longer her. We leave our DNA to all places we have been.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
04/02/2024I really liked this, Gail. Not only was it thought provoking, I enjoyed the story because you followed through on what happened to the boys later! A great subject from a terrific Author of the month!
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