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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: General Interest
  • Published: 06/30/2023

He Remembered

By Martin Green
Born 1929, M, from Roseville/CA, United States
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He Remembered
2023Remembered (Approx. 200 wds.)


He Remembered

Paul Lerner, 90 years old, sat in his enclosed patio. Outside, it was a gray and gloomy day with a forecast of rain. He remembered. It was on a day like this that she had said, “Let’s go for a walk.”

This was during the onset of Covid when oldsters like them had been told to shelter in place. “It’s going to rain,” he’d said.

“Maybe it won’t. We’ll put on our hats and jackets. Let’s get out of the house.”

“Alright,” he said.

They left the house and walked to the pond that was ten minutes from their house. As they approached the pond, an egret, perhaps made aware of them, had taken flight and soared across the pond. “That was worth coming out for,” she’d said/

“Yes, it was.”

It started to rain lightly. He took her hand and they slowly walked, two old folk. He glanced at her. She was smiling. To him, she wasn’t an old lady. She was lovely. He had never loved her more. Hand in hand, they walked back in the rain. He remembered.

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Pierro

02/12/2024

Very touching and relatable story. Enjoyed reading.

Very touching and relatable story. Enjoyed reading.

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Martin Green

02/12/2024

Thanks for your comment, Pierro. Good luck with your own writing. Martin Green

Thanks for your comment, Pierro. Good luck with your own writing. Martin Green

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Gerald R Gioglio

09/07/2023

So true, Martin. Write on.

So true, Martin. Write on.

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Shirley Smothers

09/07/2023

What a sweet story. Love is love no matter what age. I especially loved the description of the pond. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!

What a sweet story. Love is love no matter what age. I especially loved the description of the pond. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!

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JD

09/06/2023

Beautiful sweet memory, Martin. Thank you for sharing it with us. Happy short story star of the day.

Beautiful sweet memory, Martin. Thank you for sharing it with us. Happy short story star of the day.

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Lillian Kazmierczak

07/10/2023

Such a sweet memory! But I was taken aback by the oldster's part. My husband and I walk in the forest and sit on our deck and watch the Egrets and Herons all the time. We are not old, Martin! LOL! We enjoy each other's company and watching the wildlife that share our slice of heaven! A sweet memory indeed!

Such a sweet memory! But I was taken aback by the oldster's part. My husband and I walk in the forest and sit on our deck and watch the Egrets and Herons all the time. We are not old, Martin! LOL! We enjoy each other's company and watching the wildlife that share our slice of heaven! A sweet memory indeed!

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Lillian Kazmierczak

09/07/2023

Martin this was such a touching story. I loved it! A moving short story star of the day!

Martin this was such a touching story. I loved it! A moving short story star of the day!

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Marla

07/01/2023

Very sweet. Good job on this story!

Very sweet. Good job on this story!

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