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Silent

By Tallisman
Born 1959, M, from Stoke, United Kingdom
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Silent
Filled with echoes of what could be
The silence sounds so loud to me
Echoed thoughts that hurt my heart
Ripping the veil on my life apart
My energy spent
Silent
So quiet, my heartbeat is all
A metronome measuring my fall
A beat in my head
That fills me with dread
And a desperate intent
Silent
The rushing of blood through my veins
Precursing inevitable migraines
Screaming my fears
But nobody hears
My descent
Silent

So silent.

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Valerie Allen

09/04/2023

Wow! Overpowering emotions, yet a feeling of emptiness. A cause to think deeply ~

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Marla

08/18/2023

There is a lot of feeling in this poem. You did well on this.

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Shelly Garrod

08/16/2023

Wow, intense Tallisman.
Blessings Shelly

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JD

08/15/2023

sad

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