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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Coming of Age / Initiation
- Published: 08/15/2023
Sullen Surly Sully
Born 1973, M, from Ocoee, Florida, United StatesRandal Park was a talented young football player, starter on varsity since the end of his freshman season. The boy was broad and strong. The players on the team said he was corn fed making him so massive at a young age. Randal worked hard in the gym, lifting with most of the upperclassmen on the team. The fourteen-year-old had the second highest bench press of all the players. He was an awesome left offensive tackle and nose guard.
Randal’s mama was a single parent working two, sometimes three jobs to keep a roof over their heads and bread on the table for Randal and his younger siblings. With all of her hard work, it was never quite enough. So, Randal being the oldest, went to work at a young age. He was a farm hand most of the time, digging, planting milking and mucking. The boy took on his mother’s work ethic and diligence. His work sometimes interfered with his football schedule, especially during the two-a-day summer practice schedule. Most of the coaching staff knew and understood his plight. They allowed him to miss sometimes in order to work to help his family. They admired young Randal’s maturity and responsibility at such a young age.
After Randal’s sophomore year, the head coach of his high school’s football team retired and most of his staff took coaching jobs at other institutions. In came a new administration and coaching staff. They were headed by a young hot head named Carol Sullivan. He was a hard-nosed coach from Polk County who didn’t take any mess from his players or their parents for that matter. It was always his way, or the highway and he made sure everyone knew it. Coach Sullivan or Sully as he was called was known to berate players and assistant coaches alike.
When Sully got word that the starting left tackle, he inherited, was possibly going to miss some mornings of summer practice; he called him into his office for a little chat.
“Please son, have a seat.”
Randal did as he was told.
“So, I understand that you are a hell of a left tackle, and you play a little D-line too. Do you like playing here son?”
Randal cleared his throat before answering meekly.
“Yes sir.”
Sully reared back in his chair and sucked his teeth as he twirled a toothpick around in his mouth.
“Good, good. Well, if you’re going to play here son, I am going to need you to be at every practice and meeting, understand?”
The look on young Randal’s face changed. He knew he was going to have a problem with his new coach. Randal spoke up.
“But coach I need to work in the mornings to help my mama out.”
Sully was single minded and unsympathetic.
“Son we all have responsibilities and mine is to this football program. If you want to be a part of it, you’ll find your way to practice.”
“But if I don’t work, the bills might not get paid.”
“Well, it looks like you’ve got a decision to make.”
Randal got frustrated with his coach’s insensitivity. He tried to plead his case to Sully but the man wouldn’t bend.
“All of the coaches in the past have understood and they let me play anyway. I don’t understand why…”
Sully interrupted the boy raising his voice to assert his authority.
“Well son those coaches are gone, and this is my show now! I call the shots and I say all of my players come to practice or they don’t play. No exceptions!”
“But coach.”
“I’m done with this conversation. Go talk to your mama and figure something out. If you can’t practice, you may as well turn your pads in now!”
Randal’s heart sank. He loved playing football, and it seemed that this Sully was going to rob him of his dream. As he rose from that chair and exited the coaches’ office, he knew that it was over. That night the tough boy cried after explaining to his mother that his football career was over. She apologized to her son. His mother knew just how much her son loved playing and how hard he worked to be the best he could be. Randal didn’t blame his mother, he loved her. He understood that she needed his help, and he was just happy that he could provide it. His anger was reserved for the jerk of a coach that snatched his athletic career form him for no greater reason than to assert his control and power.
Through the years Randal’s work ethic and dedication served him well in life. He put himself through college and pursued a career in education. He became the youngest high school administrator in his county. Randal devoted his life to helping the children of his community. He was well respected and well loved. Randal was charged with hiring a new junior varsity football coach. There were more than a few coaches and some of them had checkered pasts. One in particular raised an eyebrow for Randal.
This coach had been suspended twice in the past for abusive language and behavior towards players and administrators. He had been tossed out of eight games over the previous twelve seasons for verbally abusing officials on the field. Randal didn’t want a wild card in his program, around his kids but this guy he just had to call in for an interview. The aspiring coach entered his office and took a seat on his command.
“So, tell me about yourself Mr. … ah Sullivan.”
“You can just call me Sully if you want.
“Okay Sully, tell me about yourself.”
“Well, I’ve been coaching for twenty-five years. I started in Pop Warner and eventually I made it up to high school. I’ve won two district and three conference championships over my long career coaching this game. I am very passionate about it and unfortunately it has gotten me into hot water a time or two.”
Randal looked through the man’s file while listening to him.
“Yes, I see here a few suspensions and ejections. That’s a little more than just passion for the game.”
Sully tried to quickly explain away his transgressions, but Randal knew he was full of it. Still, he listened intently to the man’s weak excuses.
“You know some of these refs think they’re God. You can’t question them without them trying to toss you out of the game. A lot of these kids are mama’s boys too. Mama come in and say my baby don’t play enough and then she expects me to change my game plan to accommodate her. When she don’t get her way, she goes to the athletic director and vice principal. They call me in and we get into it because I run my team, not some twerp behind a desk.”
Sully knew that he had just put his foot in his mouth.
“Really, twerp behind the desk, you mean like me?”
“No, no sir what I meant was…”
“Let’s just cut to the chase Mr. Sullivan. You haven’t changed much over the years, have you? It’s still all about you, the tough guy, throwing his weight around. Damn the kids, parents, administrators and officials. You just want the win, at any cost. The only thing that matters is that you get your win, credit and praise.”
Sully was taken aback. How could this guy that he just met say these things about him?
“Wait a minute Mr. Park. I think you have got me all wrong.”
“No sir, I’ve got you all right. I know that you are bad for youth sports, and I also know that you have no business coaching, teaching or mentoring children. Your presence has been a destructive one in many young lives. You don’t remember me do you Carol?”
A puzzled look covered Sully’s face.
“You don’t remember me, but I certainly remember you, Carol. I was a kid that had to work to help support my family and you stole my dream of playing high school football because of it, real classy.”
Sully tried to recall, he had done so many horrible things over the years to so many kids, one incident could easily be forgotten. Randal continued on.
“Way to look out for the kid's, coach! I thought I would still be objective and bring you in for an interview nonetheless, everyone can change right? Apparently not you, it seems you’ve only gotten worse. So, you will not be hired today or any other day in this or any of the surrounding counties. People are tired of your act and so am I. I will be reaching out to my colleagues in Orange, Seminole, Osceola, Polk, Volusia, Lake, Hillsboro, Brevard and Marion Counties. Most of them know about you and your history but I will be there to make sure it stays fresh in their memories.”
Sully now showed his true colors. He let his fury out.
“So, you little chicken shit you’re going to try to black ball me all because I kicked you off my team almost twenty years ago? You’re what’s wrong with sports and all the other weak mama’s boys who can’t hack it! I ought to kick your ass!”
Sully took a swing at Randal while he was seated. Randal pushed back from his desk then quickly stood offering Sully a one two combo to the nose and throat. Sully’s broken nose gushed blood and his airway swelled, narrowing, making it difficult for him to breathe. Randal reached down and pressed his intercom asking for security to be sent into his office and for someone to call the police. Then he turned his attention back to the now disgraced Sully.
“You know I didn’t want revenge on you or to harm you in any way. I was actually hoping that you had changed. I was hoping that I would see something in you that would restore my faith in humanity. No matter what kind of jerk you are, you can always change for the better. Remorse should fill your heart for all of the harm you have caused. People can change if they choose to. But you sir, haven’t changed and also, you’re just a bunch of hot air because you certainly can’t fight. Now please get your sorry surely ass out of my office Sully. Oh, and good luck finding a coaching job after this.”
Just then security walked into Randal's office and helped Sully out into the hallway. The nurse came in to put ice on Randal’s hands and then attend to the sullen Sully’s injuries. Within minutes the Orange County Sheriffs came to take statements and arrest Sully. Randal watched out of his window as the police car pulled off with Sully in the back seat. He thought out loud to himself.
“Now that’s karma, later Sully.”
Sullen Surly Sully
Sullen Surly Sully(Cam Rascoe)
Randal Park was a talented young football player, starter on varsity since the end of his freshman season. The boy was broad and strong. The players on the team said he was corn fed making him so massive at a young age. Randal worked hard in the gym, lifting with most of the upperclassmen on the team. The fourteen-year-old had the second highest bench press of all the players. He was an awesome left offensive tackle and nose guard.
Randal’s mama was a single parent working two, sometimes three jobs to keep a roof over their heads and bread on the table for Randal and his younger siblings. With all of her hard work, it was never quite enough. So, Randal being the oldest, went to work at a young age. He was a farm hand most of the time, digging, planting milking and mucking. The boy took on his mother’s work ethic and diligence. His work sometimes interfered with his football schedule, especially during the two-a-day summer practice schedule. Most of the coaching staff knew and understood his plight. They allowed him to miss sometimes in order to work to help his family. They admired young Randal’s maturity and responsibility at such a young age.
After Randal’s sophomore year, the head coach of his high school’s football team retired and most of his staff took coaching jobs at other institutions. In came a new administration and coaching staff. They were headed by a young hot head named Carol Sullivan. He was a hard-nosed coach from Polk County who didn’t take any mess from his players or their parents for that matter. It was always his way, or the highway and he made sure everyone knew it. Coach Sullivan or Sully as he was called was known to berate players and assistant coaches alike.
When Sully got word that the starting left tackle, he inherited, was possibly going to miss some mornings of summer practice; he called him into his office for a little chat.
“Please son, have a seat.”
Randal did as he was told.
“So, I understand that you are a hell of a left tackle, and you play a little D-line too. Do you like playing here son?”
Randal cleared his throat before answering meekly.
“Yes sir.”
Sully reared back in his chair and sucked his teeth as he twirled a toothpick around in his mouth.
“Good, good. Well, if you’re going to play here son, I am going to need you to be at every practice and meeting, understand?”
The look on young Randal’s face changed. He knew he was going to have a problem with his new coach. Randal spoke up.
“But coach I need to work in the mornings to help my mama out.”
Sully was single minded and unsympathetic.
“Son we all have responsibilities and mine is to this football program. If you want to be a part of it, you’ll find your way to practice.”
“But if I don’t work, the bills might not get paid.”
“Well, it looks like you’ve got a decision to make.”
Randal got frustrated with his coach’s insensitivity. He tried to plead his case to Sully but the man wouldn’t bend.
“All of the coaches in the past have understood and they let me play anyway. I don’t understand why…”
Sully interrupted the boy raising his voice to assert his authority.
“Well son those coaches are gone, and this is my show now! I call the shots and I say all of my players come to practice or they don’t play. No exceptions!”
“But coach.”
“I’m done with this conversation. Go talk to your mama and figure something out. If you can’t practice, you may as well turn your pads in now!”
Randal’s heart sank. He loved playing football, and it seemed that this Sully was going to rob him of his dream. As he rose from that chair and exited the coaches’ office, he knew that it was over. That night the tough boy cried after explaining to his mother that his football career was over. She apologized to her son. His mother knew just how much her son loved playing and how hard he worked to be the best he could be. Randal didn’t blame his mother, he loved her. He understood that she needed his help, and he was just happy that he could provide it. His anger was reserved for the jerk of a coach that snatched his athletic career form him for no greater reason than to assert his control and power.
Through the years Randal’s work ethic and dedication served him well in life. He put himself through college and pursued a career in education. He became the youngest high school administrator in his county. Randal devoted his life to helping the children of his community. He was well respected and well loved. Randal was charged with hiring a new junior varsity football coach. There were more than a few coaches and some of them had checkered pasts. One in particular raised an eyebrow for Randal.
This coach had been suspended twice in the past for abusive language and behavior towards players and administrators. He had been tossed out of eight games over the previous twelve seasons for verbally abusing officials on the field. Randal didn’t want a wild card in his program, around his kids but this guy he just had to call in for an interview. The aspiring coach entered his office and took a seat on his command.
“So, tell me about yourself Mr. … ah Sullivan.”
“You can just call me Sully if you want.
“Okay Sully, tell me about yourself.”
“Well, I’ve been coaching for twenty-five years. I started in Pop Warner and eventually I made it up to high school. I’ve won two district and three conference championships over my long career coaching this game. I am very passionate about it and unfortunately it has gotten me into hot water a time or two.”
Randal looked through the man’s file while listening to him.
“Yes, I see here a few suspensions and ejections. That’s a little more than just passion for the game.”
Sully tried to quickly explain away his transgressions, but Randal knew he was full of it. Still, he listened intently to the man’s weak excuses.
“You know some of these refs think they’re God. You can’t question them without them trying to toss you out of the game. A lot of these kids are mama’s boys too. Mama come in and say my baby don’t play enough and then she expects me to change my game plan to accommodate her. When she don’t get her way, she goes to the athletic director and vice principal. They call me in and we get into it because I run my team, not some twerp behind a desk.”
Sully knew that he had just put his foot in his mouth.
“Really, twerp behind the desk, you mean like me?”
“No, no sir what I meant was…”
“Let’s just cut to the chase Mr. Sullivan. You haven’t changed much over the years, have you? It’s still all about you, the tough guy, throwing his weight around. Damn the kids, parents, administrators and officials. You just want the win, at any cost. The only thing that matters is that you get your win, credit and praise.”
Sully was taken aback. How could this guy that he just met say these things about him?
“Wait a minute Mr. Park. I think you have got me all wrong.”
“No sir, I’ve got you all right. I know that you are bad for youth sports, and I also know that you have no business coaching, teaching or mentoring children. Your presence has been a destructive one in many young lives. You don’t remember me do you Carol?”
A puzzled look covered Sully’s face.
“You don’t remember me, but I certainly remember you, Carol. I was a kid that had to work to help support my family and you stole my dream of playing high school football because of it, real classy.”
Sully tried to recall, he had done so many horrible things over the years to so many kids, one incident could easily be forgotten. Randal continued on.
“Way to look out for the kid's, coach! I thought I would still be objective and bring you in for an interview nonetheless, everyone can change right? Apparently not you, it seems you’ve only gotten worse. So, you will not be hired today or any other day in this or any of the surrounding counties. People are tired of your act and so am I. I will be reaching out to my colleagues in Orange, Seminole, Osceola, Polk, Volusia, Lake, Hillsboro, Brevard and Marion Counties. Most of them know about you and your history but I will be there to make sure it stays fresh in their memories.”
Sully now showed his true colors. He let his fury out.
“So, you little chicken shit you’re going to try to black ball me all because I kicked you off my team almost twenty years ago? You’re what’s wrong with sports and all the other weak mama’s boys who can’t hack it! I ought to kick your ass!”
Sully took a swing at Randal while he was seated. Randal pushed back from his desk then quickly stood offering Sully a one two combo to the nose and throat. Sully’s broken nose gushed blood and his airway swelled, narrowing, making it difficult for him to breathe. Randal reached down and pressed his intercom asking for security to be sent into his office and for someone to call the police. Then he turned his attention back to the now disgraced Sully.
“You know I didn’t want revenge on you or to harm you in any way. I was actually hoping that you had changed. I was hoping that I would see something in you that would restore my faith in humanity. No matter what kind of jerk you are, you can always change for the better. Remorse should fill your heart for all of the harm you have caused. People can change if they choose to. But you sir, haven’t changed and also, you’re just a bunch of hot air because you certainly can’t fight. Now please get your sorry surely ass out of my office Sully. Oh, and good luck finding a coaching job after this.”
Just then security walked into Randal's office and helped Sully out into the hallway. The nurse came in to put ice on Randal’s hands and then attend to the sullen Sully’s injuries. Within minutes the Orange County Sheriffs came to take statements and arrest Sully. Randal watched out of his window as the police car pulled off with Sully in the back seat. He thought out loud to himself.
“Now that’s karma, later Sully.”
Sullen Surly Sully
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Kevin Hughes
01/27/2024Hey Cam,
This story has so many angles to it. Without that Coach, he may never of become a Teacher. He may have gone Pro and followed a Path that tore up his body and gave him riches and fame. And that Coach...well, any of us who played Sports have met that guy. I am short. And basketball was my Sport. I was quick, but not fast. So back in the day with Half court plays, I could be a good Point Guard, but once transition basketball, where every play is a "fast break" my lack of speed made my quickness moot.
I played on a CYO team that was pretty good. Our Coach had a Heart Attack. The new Coach kicked everyone under five foot ten off the Team. "I don't coach midgets." Well, I had been the starting Point Guard for two seasons. Folks liked me, especially the Shooters. Because they knew if they were in the Flow, I would feed them the ball. So when he kicked me off the team (I was not only under five ten, I was under five feet!) the whole team quit.
It made me feel good. But I didn't want those guys to miss a season. So I played AAU ball for the rest of the Summer. Never did like that Coach. LOL
Smiles, Kevin
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Kevin Hughes
01/29/2024Aloha Cam,
I played a lot of sports, I won lots of Ribbons, Trophies, and Certificates and always with the Caveat: "He is a good athlete, for his size." LOL I didn't care, I just liked having fun. When I got older, I didn't even care about trophies, I ran because I loved running, playing basketball, swimming, etc. ....
Now, well, I don't often talk about my athletic background, because as my daughter say (with love): "Dad, Sports were good for your memory, because now you can remember things that didn't happen." That made me laugh out loud. I guess we all think we were better than we were, when looked through the filter of old age.
In basketball (My favorite sport, and I played on my first team when I was eight, my last when I was thirty eight) I could pass better than anyone except famous people. LOL Every Team I ever played on, or for, I was the assist Leader. But my shot was horrible. My left eye doesn't work right, so I have no depth perception. I was a streak shooter, and those streaks were separated by weeks and months. LOL My best friend Ed, used to say: "I know there is a God, because your shot went in!" Ed, of course, had a sweet little 20 foot jumper, and he garnered me a lot of Assists. LOL
Smiles, Kevin
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024That breaks and warms my heart, Kevin. There are so many "coaches" that are in it for all of the wrong reasons, they often ruin athletic careers and rob young people of their love for the game. Then there are the bonds formed between the players, there is a brother or sisterhood there. They go to war for one another and in your case, stand up and sacrifice for their brother. I agree with JD, you should certainly write that story, I would love to read it Brother.
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Cheryl Ryan
01/24/2024Karma is real. I learned from this story that a little act of niceness and encouragement can bring satisfaction and fulfilment in a child's life and otherwise ruin a whole career.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024As coaches, mentors and educators, we are entrusted with something precious, the shaping and molding of a young person. Kindness is most necessary when offering correction or redirection, toughness can be offered with love. I agree Cheryl, karma is real, and life is a rollercoaster, sometimes you're up, later you may be down. If we treat people kindly, most likely we will be offered assistance in our time of need. If you're always punching down, when you are down, somebody might stomp you out. Thank you for the encouragement.
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Joel Kiula
01/23/2024A very good story and a great lesson to take in life. Thank you for sharing
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024Thank Joel, it's based loosely on a friend's story that saddened me, so I had to offer the bit of karma at the end.
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024Gerald my friend, that is why I try to always offer the world far more love and joy than despair and strife. I truly believe that what we put out into the world eventually comes back to us.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
01/22/2024I love a good karma story...and you delivered! Great story, Cam. I love that Randall chose the high road and did the interview. Too bad the guy was still a jackass. Too many of those in this world! An inspirational short story star of the week!
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024Thank you, Lillian, I am proud to receive the honor. I just love t when bad guys get it in the end and the principal takes the high road like you said. I appreciate you always being so insightful and encouraging.
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JD
01/21/2024I would think many such coaches actually exist, so I'd bet that this story is based on the truth, mostly. Thanks for all the great stories you've shared on Storystar, Cam. Happy short story star of the week.
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JD
01/29/2024You really made my day, Cam. THANK YOU for your kind and generous words of encouragement. It really feeds my spirit.
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Cam Rascoe
01/29/2024Thank you once again JD for this awesome platform and I am flattered by the honor. This is truly a beautiful community of talented writers that you've assembled here. I'm sure that I speak for many of them when I say, we really appreciate you and are grateful for what Story Star offers to us all.
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