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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Loneliness / Solitude
- Published: 09/20/2023
Solitude's Tears: Crying Alone
Born 2000, M, from KARAK, KPK, PakistanIn a quiet, forgotten corner of a bustling city, there was a small park where a gnarled willow tree stood sentinel. Its branches, like the arms of an old friend, stretched out towards a weathered wooden bench beneath its shadow. This park was not known for its beauty, nor for its lush greenery. Instead, it was famous for something far more poignant—it was a sanctuary for those who needed to cry alone.
The park had earned its name, "Solitude's Tears," because it was where people came when they couldn't bear to cry in front of anyone else. Whether overwhelmed by grief, sadness, or the weight of their own thoughts, the park was their refuge.
One such person who found solace beneath the willow's tender embrace was Sarah. She was a young woman with a heart that had weathered more storms than most. Her life had been a tapestry of struggles, woven with threads of heartbreak and loss. But she always found comfort in the solitude of the park.
One cool, autumn evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows over the city, Sarah found herself at the park once again. She had just received news of her grandmother's passing, a woman who had been her anchor in the turbulent sea of life. Sarah felt the tears welling up inside her, a tempest of emotions threatening to engulf her.
As she sat down on the worn bench, the willow's branches gently swayed in the evening breeze, whispering secrets to the world. Sarah closed her eyes, allowing the memories of her grandmother to wash over her. A tear escaped from the corner of her eye and splashed onto her trembling hand.
Sarah's silent cry echoed through the park. She wasn't alone in her sorrow, for Solitude's Tears had seen countless tears shed on its sacred ground. Birds sang melancholic tunes in the trees, as if mourning alongside her. The rustling leaves offered their own brand of comfort, as if they understood the depth of her pain.
As she wept, a sense of release washed over her. The tears that had been bottled up for so long flowed freely, like a river carving its path through the heartache. Each tear was a tribute to her grandmother, a testament to the love they had shared.
Slowly, as the night deepened, Sarah's cries subsided. The pain remained, but it had found an outlet, a way to be expressed and shared with the silent, understanding companionship of the park.
In that moment, Sarah realized the beauty of crying alone. It wasn't about isolation; it was about finding a space where emotions could be raw, where vulnerability was embraced, and where the willow tree stood as a sentinel, guarding the stories of those who had sought refuge beneath its branches.
As she rose from the bench, Sarah wiped away her tears, feeling lighter and more at peace than she had in a long time. Solitude's Tears had once again lived up to its name, providing her with the solace and release she needed.
She walked away from the park with a renewed spirit, knowing that whenever life became too heavy to bear, she had a place where her tears were not only welcome but cherished—a place where she could cry alone, yet never truly be alone.
Solitude's Tears: Crying Alone(Waseem Ahmed Khattak)
In a quiet, forgotten corner of a bustling city, there was a small park where a gnarled willow tree stood sentinel. Its branches, like the arms of an old friend, stretched out towards a weathered wooden bench beneath its shadow. This park was not known for its beauty, nor for its lush greenery. Instead, it was famous for something far more poignant—it was a sanctuary for those who needed to cry alone.
The park had earned its name, "Solitude's Tears," because it was where people came when they couldn't bear to cry in front of anyone else. Whether overwhelmed by grief, sadness, or the weight of their own thoughts, the park was their refuge.
One such person who found solace beneath the willow's tender embrace was Sarah. She was a young woman with a heart that had weathered more storms than most. Her life had been a tapestry of struggles, woven with threads of heartbreak and loss. But she always found comfort in the solitude of the park.
One cool, autumn evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows over the city, Sarah found herself at the park once again. She had just received news of her grandmother's passing, a woman who had been her anchor in the turbulent sea of life. Sarah felt the tears welling up inside her, a tempest of emotions threatening to engulf her.
As she sat down on the worn bench, the willow's branches gently swayed in the evening breeze, whispering secrets to the world. Sarah closed her eyes, allowing the memories of her grandmother to wash over her. A tear escaped from the corner of her eye and splashed onto her trembling hand.
Sarah's silent cry echoed through the park. She wasn't alone in her sorrow, for Solitude's Tears had seen countless tears shed on its sacred ground. Birds sang melancholic tunes in the trees, as if mourning alongside her. The rustling leaves offered their own brand of comfort, as if they understood the depth of her pain.
As she wept, a sense of release washed over her. The tears that had been bottled up for so long flowed freely, like a river carving its path through the heartache. Each tear was a tribute to her grandmother, a testament to the love they had shared.
Slowly, as the night deepened, Sarah's cries subsided. The pain remained, but it had found an outlet, a way to be expressed and shared with the silent, understanding companionship of the park.
In that moment, Sarah realized the beauty of crying alone. It wasn't about isolation; it was about finding a space where emotions could be raw, where vulnerability was embraced, and where the willow tree stood as a sentinel, guarding the stories of those who had sought refuge beneath its branches.
As she rose from the bench, Sarah wiped away her tears, feeling lighter and more at peace than she had in a long time. Solitude's Tears had once again lived up to its name, providing her with the solace and release she needed.
She walked away from the park with a renewed spirit, knowing that whenever life became too heavy to bear, she had a place where her tears were not only welcome but cherished—a place where she could cry alone, yet never truly be alone.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
11/24/2023Wassem, that was beautiful! Very nicely written and comforting in its simple message! A well deserved short story star of the day!
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Shirley Smothers
11/24/2023A beautifully crafted story. I think we all need the solitude of tears. A poignant lovely tale. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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