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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Ghost Stories / Paranormal
- Published: 09/28/2023
The Night Shift at Hope Hospital
Adult, F, from Mianwali, PakistanDr. Kate was a gynaecologist at Hope Hospital. One night, she had a night shift. While walking in the hallway, she heard painful screams that she ignored, thinking they were coming from the patients in ward number 13. As she opened the door of ward number 13, she was shocked to find that there wasn't even a single patient in the ward. It was completely empty. Suddenly, she saw blue lights floating around the ward. Someone pushed her. She saw a woman sitting in the corner, wearing a patient gown. Her face was towards the wall, while her back faced Dr. Kate.
Dr. Kate, with her shivering hands, tapped on the shoulder of that woman. It was Emma, a woman, who died because of Dr. Kate's negligence and wrong procedure.
Emma said, "You will pay for what you have done."
Dr. Kate's forehead was drenched with sweat. She trembled with fear. As she stepped back, she stumbled upon something. It was Kitty, a woman, who died because Dr. Kate had prescribed her the wrong medicines during her pregnancy. Dr. Kate tried to flee, but the ghosts of all the innocent women whom she had killed because of her wrong methods blocked her way. Dr. Kate's heart raced. Eventually, she collapsed. When she woke up, she found herself in the police station. She was informed that her medical licence had been suspended and she would receive an appropriate punishment for the murder of innocent women.
The story of Dr. Kate served as a cautionary tale for other gynaecologists, and they vowed to fulfil their duties with devotion, diligence, and vigilance.
The Night Shift at Hope Hospital(Aleena Nawaz)
Dr. Kate was a gynaecologist at Hope Hospital. One night, she had a night shift. While walking in the hallway, she heard painful screams that she ignored, thinking they were coming from the patients in ward number 13. As she opened the door of ward number 13, she was shocked to find that there wasn't even a single patient in the ward. It was completely empty. Suddenly, she saw blue lights floating around the ward. Someone pushed her. She saw a woman sitting in the corner, wearing a patient gown. Her face was towards the wall, while her back faced Dr. Kate.
Dr. Kate, with her shivering hands, tapped on the shoulder of that woman. It was Emma, a woman, who died because of Dr. Kate's negligence and wrong procedure.
Emma said, "You will pay for what you have done."
Dr. Kate's forehead was drenched with sweat. She trembled with fear. As she stepped back, she stumbled upon something. It was Kitty, a woman, who died because Dr. Kate had prescribed her the wrong medicines during her pregnancy. Dr. Kate tried to flee, but the ghosts of all the innocent women whom she had killed because of her wrong methods blocked her way. Dr. Kate's heart raced. Eventually, she collapsed. When she woke up, she found herself in the police station. She was informed that her medical licence had been suspended and she would receive an appropriate punishment for the murder of innocent women.
The story of Dr. Kate served as a cautionary tale for other gynaecologists, and they vowed to fulfil their duties with devotion, diligence, and vigilance.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
10/05/2023The Hypocratic oath is sacred! Do no harm...all Drs. should heed this! Nicely written tale of caution! Congratulations on short story star of the day!
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Aleena Nawaz
10/05/2023Thank you for your kind words and recognition. I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiment that the Hippocratic oath holds great importance for all doctors. The principle of doing no harm is indeed sacred and should be at the forefront of every medical professional's mind. I am glad you found the cautionary tale well-written and worthy of praise.
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Mahnoor Mani
09/28/2023A masterpiece indeed. Such an awesome story! It's incredible. The way the story is written is amazing. Well done. You have written a brilliant story, Aleena.
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Charles Walter
09/28/2023A very well-written story. The message is amazing. The horror element is amazing. From the start till the end, the story has been excellently written. It delivers a perfect message. Good work, Aleena.
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