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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 09/29/2023
The Haunting Fall
Adult, F, from Mianwali, Pakistan
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Charles Walter
10/15/2023Your writing has a captivating quality that keeps readers engaged from beginning to end.
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Mike
10/14/2023Very well written and framed. You created a image in my mind of how it actually was and i was even able to imagine her waking up and realising it was a nightmare. Good job!
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Mahnoor Mani
10/13/2023I absolutely agree with all the comments. You have created a masterpiece, Aleena. Well done.
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Soniya sameer
10/13/2023What a suspense tale! The writing style and the choice of words are perfect. The eerie nature of the story is excellent. I loved it.
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Taniya Verma
10/12/2023This story is full of suspense. I loved it. Wonderful piece of writing, ma'am Aleena.
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Freddie Thomas
09/30/2023A very well-written story. It's suspense element is remarkable. The combo of horror and mystery is impressive.
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Dr. Albert Hunter
09/30/2023It's a well-crafted story. The plot is intriguing. You have a great ability to craft an engaging prose. It's an incredible story!
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Charles Walter
09/30/2023Aleena, your exceptional storytelling abilities captivate the readers from the start till the end of the story. You're an amazing author.
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