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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 10/15/2023
The Endless Craving
F, from Mianwali, PakistanWhile returning from a grocery store, she stumbled upon something. It was a famished grey-coloured stray dog. Instead of feeding him something, she threw a stone at him. It hit the dog on the head, and it died.
That night, when she was sitting on her bed, watching a movie, she felt an eerie change in the atmosphere. Sinister shadows peered through the windows. Creepy whispers echoed through the walls. Suddenly, the silence of the late hours of the night was broken by the storm that battered against her windows. It intensified her fear. She hid under the blanket.
The next morning, when she woke up, she was famished. She ate a lot of food; however, nothing could satisfy her insatiable appetite. She went out of the house and started to eat whatever food she found. She even searched for food in the trash bins. She entered the bakery and ate each and every food item she saw.
Suddenly, her body started swelling and turning grey. She started running on the street like a lunatic. Out of nowhere, a stone hit her on the head, and she died instantly.
The Endless Craving(Aleena Nawaz)
While returning from a grocery store, she stumbled upon something. It was a famished grey-coloured stray dog. Instead of feeding him something, she threw a stone at him. It hit the dog on the head, and it died.
That night, when she was sitting on her bed, watching a movie, she felt an eerie change in the atmosphere. Sinister shadows peered through the windows. Creepy whispers echoed through the walls. Suddenly, the silence of the late hours of the night was broken by the storm that battered against her windows. It intensified her fear. She hid under the blanket.
The next morning, when she woke up, she was famished. She ate a lot of food; however, nothing could satisfy her insatiable appetite. She went out of the house and started to eat whatever food she found. She even searched for food in the trash bins. She entered the bakery and ate each and every food item she saw.
Suddenly, her body started swelling and turning grey. She started running on the street like a lunatic. Out of nowhere, a stone hit her on the head, and she died instantly.
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Shirley Smothers
11/13/2023Karma has a way of visiting everyone and everything. Creepy, cool story. Enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!
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Lillian Kazmierczak
11/13/2023That is some rough karma! Nicely written horror story!Much different from some of your other pieces. Congratulations on short story star of the day!
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Mahnoor Mani
11/13/2023Happy short story star of the day! Aleena. A well deserved recognition.
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Mike
11/12/2023Whoa, didn't expect the killing of a dog will turn out like this. Karma is a bitch. Really good Aleena, just wow.
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Zahid Ahmad
10/20/2023Ma'am, you are an excellent writer. The way you paint a perfect picture through your words is phenomenal. This story is fantastic.
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Soniya sameer
10/20/2023It's an amazing story. From the start till the very end, the story is amazing.
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