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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: General Interest
- Published: 10/30/2023
"The Lost Feeling"
Born 2000, M, from KARAK, KPK, PakistanIn a quaint coastal town named Serenitopia, a young woman named Lily lived a life that seemed perfect to the outside world. She had a loving family, supportive friends, and a promising career as a marine biologist. Yet, beneath her cheerful facade, a peculiar sensation had been gnawing at her for as long as she could remember—the feeling of being lost.
It was an indistinct, elusive emotion, like trying to catch wind with a net. Lily couldn't pinpoint the source of this emotion; it simply existed, lingering in the background of her life. As a child, she'd often stare out at the vast ocean, wondering if it held answers to the questions that plagued her.
One sunny afternoon, as she walked along the beach, she spotted an old, washed-up message in a bottle. Curiosity piqued, and she uncorked the bottle and unfurled the note. It read, "To the Lost Seeker, may your journey begin by embracing the unknown."
Lily found herself drawn to the message, sensing an inexplicable connection. She decided to embark on a quest to understand her "lost feeling" and to find her true purpose in life.
Her journey took her to distant lands, where she encountered people from various walks of life who shared their own stories of feeling lost. There was a nomadic artist who had lost her muse, a retired sea captain who longed for the thrill of the open ocean, and a disillusioned city dweller who yearned for the simplicity of rural life.
In her travels, Lily discovered that the "lost feeling" was a common thread that connected people from all corners of the world. It was the sensation of drifting without direction, of yearning for something elusive, and of searching for meaning in a vast, chaotic universe.
As she listened to these stories, Lily began to realize that the "lost feeling" was not a curse but a catalyst for change. It was the spark that ignited a journey of self-discovery, leading individuals to explore new horizons, embrace the unfamiliar, and seek out their true passions.
One day, as she sat on a cliff overlooking a serene valley, Lily experienced a moment of clarity. She realized that her "lost feeling" had guided her to this very point, where she felt a deep sense of belonging. Serenitopia, with its breathtaking coastal beauty, was the place she had been searching for all along.
Returning to her hometown, Lily continued her career as a marine biologist, but with a newfound perspective. She saw the ocean not just as a place of wonder and scientific exploration but as a source of solace and inspiration. She shared her experiences with the town's youth, encouraging them to embrace their own feelings of "lostness" and embark on journeys of self-discovery.
The "lost feeling" was no longer a burden; it was a companion on life's unpredictable voyage. Serenitopia, once a backdrop to her inner turmoil, had become the anchor of her existence, a place where the lost could be found and where the lost feeling was, in fact, a profound reminder that every individual's journey was unique and, ultimately, a path toward self-discovery and fulfillment.
"The Lost Feeling"(Waseem Ahmed Khattak)
In a quaint coastal town named Serenitopia, a young woman named Lily lived a life that seemed perfect to the outside world. She had a loving family, supportive friends, and a promising career as a marine biologist. Yet, beneath her cheerful facade, a peculiar sensation had been gnawing at her for as long as she could remember—the feeling of being lost.
It was an indistinct, elusive emotion, like trying to catch wind with a net. Lily couldn't pinpoint the source of this emotion; it simply existed, lingering in the background of her life. As a child, she'd often stare out at the vast ocean, wondering if it held answers to the questions that plagued her.
One sunny afternoon, as she walked along the beach, she spotted an old, washed-up message in a bottle. Curiosity piqued, and she uncorked the bottle and unfurled the note. It read, "To the Lost Seeker, may your journey begin by embracing the unknown."
Lily found herself drawn to the message, sensing an inexplicable connection. She decided to embark on a quest to understand her "lost feeling" and to find her true purpose in life.
Her journey took her to distant lands, where she encountered people from various walks of life who shared their own stories of feeling lost. There was a nomadic artist who had lost her muse, a retired sea captain who longed for the thrill of the open ocean, and a disillusioned city dweller who yearned for the simplicity of rural life.
In her travels, Lily discovered that the "lost feeling" was a common thread that connected people from all corners of the world. It was the sensation of drifting without direction, of yearning for something elusive, and of searching for meaning in a vast, chaotic universe.
As she listened to these stories, Lily began to realize that the "lost feeling" was not a curse but a catalyst for change. It was the spark that ignited a journey of self-discovery, leading individuals to explore new horizons, embrace the unfamiliar, and seek out their true passions.
One day, as she sat on a cliff overlooking a serene valley, Lily experienced a moment of clarity. She realized that her "lost feeling" had guided her to this very point, where she felt a deep sense of belonging. Serenitopia, with its breathtaking coastal beauty, was the place she had been searching for all along.
Returning to her hometown, Lily continued her career as a marine biologist, but with a newfound perspective. She saw the ocean not just as a place of wonder and scientific exploration but as a source of solace and inspiration. She shared her experiences with the town's youth, encouraging them to embrace their own feelings of "lostness" and embark on journeys of self-discovery.
The "lost feeling" was no longer a burden; it was a companion on life's unpredictable voyage. Serenitopia, once a backdrop to her inner turmoil, had become the anchor of her existence, a place where the lost could be found and where the lost feeling was, in fact, a profound reminder that every individual's journey was unique and, ultimately, a path toward self-discovery and fulfillment.
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