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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/09/2023
GOODBYE!
Born 2009, M, from Kerala, IndiaTo the tune of lost love's sigh,
Craft a melody, sweet and high.
Recall the nights, our whispered truth,
Now, all that's left, a ghost of youth.
If I'm not the one, spare your honeyed grace,
Let silence lie where once was our embrace.
We dreamt in sync, 'til dreams did part,
Now I roam alone, nursing a broken heart.
The storm of your love, so tender, so wild,
A play of passion, in which I was beguiled.
Believed in our world, a love's sweet façade,
Now the curtain falls, on the act so flawed.
In the depths of your gaze, a story untold,
A flicker of secrets, in your eyes so bold.
Lost is the love we once did raise,
Now just a memory, in the misty haze.
Don't pour out sweet nothings, let them not flow,
Your whispers, once warm, now lost in the snow.
The specter of love, a phantom so dear,
Haunts the heart that holds you ever near.
You said I shone, like the morning dew,
I believed every word, thinking it was true.
But I'm caught, a prisoner in your snare,
Lost in a love that's no longer there.
With careless ease, you called me 'love',
Those days now gone, like a freed dove.
You thieved my heart with a thief's glee,
Now you stride forth, leaving behind me.
If I'm not the one to dwell in your heart,
Let's sever the bond, let's drift apart.
Your feigned affection, now I see through,
If it's not me, let's bid adieu.
The silver lies, you spun so well,
Wrapped around my soul, a binding spell.
You speak of others, but they're not me,
I was yours, but now I must flee.
Our book closes, our story ends,
I wish you happiness, as a friend.
You once said, "Only I bring you cheer,"
Yet now, that whisper's all I hear.
Craft this tune with tender care,
Let each note reflect a love so rare.
May it warm the heart, bring a tearful eye,
For a love once blooming, that's now said goodbye.
GOODBYE!(Achu biju)
To the tune of lost love's sigh,
Craft a melody, sweet and high.
Recall the nights, our whispered truth,
Now, all that's left, a ghost of youth.
If I'm not the one, spare your honeyed grace,
Let silence lie where once was our embrace.
We dreamt in sync, 'til dreams did part,
Now I roam alone, nursing a broken heart.
The storm of your love, so tender, so wild,
A play of passion, in which I was beguiled.
Believed in our world, a love's sweet façade,
Now the curtain falls, on the act so flawed.
In the depths of your gaze, a story untold,
A flicker of secrets, in your eyes so bold.
Lost is the love we once did raise,
Now just a memory, in the misty haze.
Don't pour out sweet nothings, let them not flow,
Your whispers, once warm, now lost in the snow.
The specter of love, a phantom so dear,
Haunts the heart that holds you ever near.
You said I shone, like the morning dew,
I believed every word, thinking it was true.
But I'm caught, a prisoner in your snare,
Lost in a love that's no longer there.
With careless ease, you called me 'love',
Those days now gone, like a freed dove.
You thieved my heart with a thief's glee,
Now you stride forth, leaving behind me.
If I'm not the one to dwell in your heart,
Let's sever the bond, let's drift apart.
Your feigned affection, now I see through,
If it's not me, let's bid adieu.
The silver lies, you spun so well,
Wrapped around my soul, a binding spell.
You speak of others, but they're not me,
I was yours, but now I must flee.
Our book closes, our story ends,
I wish you happiness, as a friend.
You once said, "Only I bring you cheer,"
Yet now, that whisper's all I hear.
Craft this tune with tender care,
Let each note reflect a love so rare.
May it warm the heart, bring a tearful eye,
For a love once blooming, that's now said goodbye.
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Joel Kiula
03/28/2024A great poem. First love memories stays with us always when the one we lose the one we love.
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Gerald R Gioglio
03/28/2024Yeah, beautiful. The loss of that first love stays with you for a lifetime. Nicely done. Happy Storystar day.
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Shirley Smothers
03/28/2024A beautiful love poem. Deep emotions and sad. This poem evokes many feelings. I see that many peopld have read your poem. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
03/27/2024Achu, you wrote beautifully of your heartache! I could feel your pain as you beared your soul. A beautiful expression of heartbroken youth. A wonderful poem! A well deserved short story star of the day!
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Pearlstar26
12/25/2023Oh my god, this is so well written! I felt like crying in the middle. :)
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