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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/11/2023
Shattered Memories by: Daniela Ruiz
She watched as the glass shattered on the floor in front of her broken into a million pieces she remembered when she was so happy with her life not ever thinking something would go wrong or that someone had hurted the people she loved yet there they were laying on the floor blood everywhere that night when she had returned home she didn’t understand and till this day doesn’t know why they did what they did to her family her parents were there afterwards she knew what she wanted to do she knew exactly what she needed to do she knew exactly what she had chosen to do she had still and lived there for fifteen years and now she is here remembering that memory on repeat not stopping nothing has changed she did it she decided what she would do and finally take action she got up from the floor where she had been sitting with her long dark cloak and her dress putting on her hood over her head so no one would know who she is or even the people who had murdered her parents she left her room opened the door closed it and ran she started sprinting out of her house in the woods with her long hair free in the air and wind she smiled as she sprinted faster and faster and she got to her destination out of the woods was a village and city filled with lots of people and their children all safe as anyone would think however she knew why she was there she knew nothing on most things of her family or why her parents are dead or were even murdered in front of her she just knew one thing and that is to take over her family to redeem or make sure on finding answers to her problem that she has and is stuck with she entered the village looked around and had to stay in hiding and not be near anyone as she knew that the people who had murdered her parents could be anybody either in the village or in the city meanwhile “We need to find her she doesn’t understand why we did this yet here we are talking about the plan” “Yeah well boss? How come we didn’t kill her?” “Because she well she…she’s innocent in the first place in the second place why would kill an innocent child?” “Yeah that’s true well now what I mean it’s been fifteen years how are we gonna recognize her anyway?” “I’ll figure it out until then we have to find her'' he explained meanwhile she continued walking inside and decided to head to a shop to buy food she opened the door as she entered and looking around for the ingredients on making pasta such as the noodles, meat, sauce or the ingredients to also make that she gathered it and went to go pay at the front soon after she left back to her house in the woods to put it away and back again sprinting the village and city she planned on doing many things besides only making her food either way she went around their towns and found nothing no one going up to her no one interested or anyone really caring they just went about their day until well until she got here “Boss could she be wearing a cloak?” ‘Maybe incase of finding us most likely” he replied He ran up to her and put a cloth over her face with alcohol to knock her out and take her to their secret lair he carried her to his car and laid her down on the back of the car seats “alright boss we’ll be right there don’t worry I got her she’s safe'' He told him “That’s great, news now call when your here” “alright boss whatever you say” he drove to their lair underground basement “hey boss were here” “alright i’m unlocking the door” “alright see ya” he drove and parked the car inside afterwards took her inside the lair and laid her down on their bed “So now what?” “We wait until she wakes up” he replied a couple minutes later she opened her eyes to see in front of her a table in front of her she then sat up and immediately noticed she’s not home or anywhere near the village or the city still she sat there looking at her surroundings noticing that this was not somewhere she had ever been “Alright boss she’s awake” “alright i’ll be right there” as soon as the boss came he stared at her from her long hair to her shoes “alright now i’m going to explain somethings but before I do do you have any questions?” He asked her “I do have a question: Who are you?” She snarled at him while asking that question as well as angrily asking it glaring at him and furiously looking at him like she was holding a grudge “I am the person who killed your parents fifteen years ago i’ll explain why they were killed or why I killed them right now you see your parents were criminals a part of some gang or mafia life either way they fell in love and did great with their victories however they lived together and got married they were so happy however they than had a miracle well not really but for the sake of this story yes you are their miracle you were so young and innocent since you didn’t know however we did and we knew exactly every detail of your parents they had you but didn’t ever talk to you about what they did but you were young and didn’t think much of anything we were enemies of your parents except I changed my life and he well he chose his and didn’t follow me and left and now i’m here with my partner but anyways we became cops to protect well he was in training like me anyways I am here now with you and my partner you needed to know the truth to understand that sure we could look like the wrong ones but we were just doing our job” He explained “You killed them in front of me you did this for what? I mean did they ever cause me harm? Did they decide to kill their child their kid? No I am here still alive why did you kill them? You weren’t supposed to. I've been living in the woods in their house for the past couple of years and yet the answer as to why you people murdered my parents is because their criminals?” She spat angrily “Well yes but that’s the way of this we couldn’t just let them harm anymore innocent people only for their sake it isn’t right” He explained “Yeah but…No wait i’m not giving in in this you killed my parents in front of me and now you say this how come I didn’t know because I was little? Of course so what have you killed other guardians as well only because their criminals or something? Is that so bad? For criminals to be parents? Huh? Answer me!” She said even more angrily than last time. “I guess not but then again your parents caused harm you can’t just let them be because of that they could’ve caused more harm than you think but then again what do you know about your parents?” He asked remorse “I know that someone murdered my parents right before my own eyes could believe it could I handle such a graphic scene? No because I was a child I didn’t know what they did I didn’t know they had criminal records but then again my parents died right before I could even blink that plays on repeat so so many times. Do you know how tiring and sicking it gets once you realize the way it looks? The blood splattering all over or the fact that you showed an innocent child violence without thinking how they would take it” She said at first angrily this time the next few lines sadly as she regretted something or did she? She got up and walked to their kitchen as she saw everything she ran out of there as fast as she could went to see the weapons they could have held she got a knife and went back to those two men who had been telling her what had happened as soon as she saw his face she sprinted and stabbed him in the stomach and cut off his head the only other time as the blood splattered she didn’t ever feel so alive before her cloak and dress having some blood splattered on it she smiled at what she had done while the other male had seen this graphic scene standing right behind her he couldn’t believe his eyes she had just killed a cop “I did it, mom and dad I did it only for you two to be proud only for revenge on who did it to you fifteen years ago I’ve never felt so alive” She said happily on what she had just done huh so she did this only for them is understandable but then again you can’t really do anything about it either as she did watch a graphic scene The end
Shattered Memories(Daniela Ruiz)
Shattered Memories by: Daniela Ruiz
She watched as the glass shattered on the floor in front of her broken into a million pieces she remembered when she was so happy with her life not ever thinking something would go wrong or that someone had hurted the people she loved yet there they were laying on the floor blood everywhere that night when she had returned home she didn’t understand and till this day doesn’t know why they did what they did to her family her parents were there afterwards she knew what she wanted to do she knew exactly what she needed to do she knew exactly what she had chosen to do she had still and lived there for fifteen years and now she is here remembering that memory on repeat not stopping nothing has changed she did it she decided what she would do and finally take action she got up from the floor where she had been sitting with her long dark cloak and her dress putting on her hood over her head so no one would know who she is or even the people who had murdered her parents she left her room opened the door closed it and ran she started sprinting out of her house in the woods with her long hair free in the air and wind she smiled as she sprinted faster and faster and she got to her destination out of the woods was a village and city filled with lots of people and their children all safe as anyone would think however she knew why she was there she knew nothing on most things of her family or why her parents are dead or were even murdered in front of her she just knew one thing and that is to take over her family to redeem or make sure on finding answers to her problem that she has and is stuck with she entered the village looked around and had to stay in hiding and not be near anyone as she knew that the people who had murdered her parents could be anybody either in the village or in the city meanwhile “We need to find her she doesn’t understand why we did this yet here we are talking about the plan” “Yeah well boss? How come we didn’t kill her?” “Because she well she…she’s innocent in the first place in the second place why would kill an innocent child?” “Yeah that’s true well now what I mean it’s been fifteen years how are we gonna recognize her anyway?” “I’ll figure it out until then we have to find her'' he explained meanwhile she continued walking inside and decided to head to a shop to buy food she opened the door as she entered and looking around for the ingredients on making pasta such as the noodles, meat, sauce or the ingredients to also make that she gathered it and went to go pay at the front soon after she left back to her house in the woods to put it away and back again sprinting the village and city she planned on doing many things besides only making her food either way she went around their towns and found nothing no one going up to her no one interested or anyone really caring they just went about their day until well until she got here “Boss could she be wearing a cloak?” ‘Maybe incase of finding us most likely” he replied He ran up to her and put a cloth over her face with alcohol to knock her out and take her to their secret lair he carried her to his car and laid her down on the back of the car seats “alright boss we’ll be right there don’t worry I got her she’s safe'' He told him “That’s great, news now call when your here” “alright boss whatever you say” he drove to their lair underground basement “hey boss were here” “alright i’m unlocking the door” “alright see ya” he drove and parked the car inside afterwards took her inside the lair and laid her down on their bed “So now what?” “We wait until she wakes up” he replied a couple minutes later she opened her eyes to see in front of her a table in front of her she then sat up and immediately noticed she’s not home or anywhere near the village or the city still she sat there looking at her surroundings noticing that this was not somewhere she had ever been “Alright boss she’s awake” “alright i’ll be right there” as soon as the boss came he stared at her from her long hair to her shoes “alright now i’m going to explain somethings but before I do do you have any questions?” He asked her “I do have a question: Who are you?” She snarled at him while asking that question as well as angrily asking it glaring at him and furiously looking at him like she was holding a grudge “I am the person who killed your parents fifteen years ago i’ll explain why they were killed or why I killed them right now you see your parents were criminals a part of some gang or mafia life either way they fell in love and did great with their victories however they lived together and got married they were so happy however they than had a miracle well not really but for the sake of this story yes you are their miracle you were so young and innocent since you didn’t know however we did and we knew exactly every detail of your parents they had you but didn’t ever talk to you about what they did but you were young and didn’t think much of anything we were enemies of your parents except I changed my life and he well he chose his and didn’t follow me and left and now i’m here with my partner but anyways we became cops to protect well he was in training like me anyways I am here now with you and my partner you needed to know the truth to understand that sure we could look like the wrong ones but we were just doing our job” He explained “You killed them in front of me you did this for what? I mean did they ever cause me harm? Did they decide to kill their child their kid? No I am here still alive why did you kill them? You weren’t supposed to. I've been living in the woods in their house for the past couple of years and yet the answer as to why you people murdered my parents is because their criminals?” She spat angrily “Well yes but that’s the way of this we couldn’t just let them harm anymore innocent people only for their sake it isn’t right” He explained “Yeah but…No wait i’m not giving in in this you killed my parents in front of me and now you say this how come I didn’t know because I was little? Of course so what have you killed other guardians as well only because their criminals or something? Is that so bad? For criminals to be parents? Huh? Answer me!” She said even more angrily than last time. “I guess not but then again your parents caused harm you can’t just let them be because of that they could’ve caused more harm than you think but then again what do you know about your parents?” He asked remorse “I know that someone murdered my parents right before my own eyes could believe it could I handle such a graphic scene? No because I was a child I didn’t know what they did I didn’t know they had criminal records but then again my parents died right before I could even blink that plays on repeat so so many times. Do you know how tiring and sicking it gets once you realize the way it looks? The blood splattering all over or the fact that you showed an innocent child violence without thinking how they would take it” She said at first angrily this time the next few lines sadly as she regretted something or did she? She got up and walked to their kitchen as she saw everything she ran out of there as fast as she could went to see the weapons they could have held she got a knife and went back to those two men who had been telling her what had happened as soon as she saw his face she sprinted and stabbed him in the stomach and cut off his head the only other time as the blood splattered she didn’t ever feel so alive before her cloak and dress having some blood splattered on it she smiled at what she had done while the other male had seen this graphic scene standing right behind her he couldn’t believe his eyes she had just killed a cop “I did it, mom and dad I did it only for you two to be proud only for revenge on who did it to you fifteen years ago I’ve never felt so alive” She said happily on what she had just done huh so she did this only for them is understandable but then again you can’t really do anything about it either as she did watch a graphic scene The end
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