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- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/30/2023
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12/05/2023Very strong and sorrowful. I like the repetition of the same clause at the beginning. I guess you have your own reason of keeping it repeated in the rest of story. Maybe it speaks the unspoken, or words are enable to express some feelings as usually happens.
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12/01/2023A bit to repetitive, could have been finished way sooner. I get the concept though. :-)
I think it could have been so much more. :-)
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