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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 12/12/2023
We Can Fix This
Born 2007, F, from Michigan, United StatesVerse 1:
You said forever, but where are you now?
I thought we were good at figuring things out
Who knew we were both having these doubts?
Verse 2:
And I wish I could hate you, but I don't
I need you to leave, but I know that you won't
I need you now, I need you most
Chorus:
I keep hurting you, you keep hurting me
We both know that this isn't healthy
But can you stay?
Just for a day?
And you and I, we both have problems
We can rely on each other to help mend and solve them
We can fix this love together
Sure, it's rough, but things'll get better.
Verse 3:
And I miss your touch, your laugh, your smile
You said we'll do better, it might take a while
But if our love is strong enough, we'll push through
This love story ends with me and you
Chorus:
And I keep hurting you, you keep hurting me
We both know that this isn't healthy
But can you stay?
Just for a day?
And you and I, we both have problems
We can rely on each other to help mend and solve them
We can fix this love together
Sure, it's rough, but things'll get better
Bridge:
And I get the feeling you hate me by now
I want to get better, but I don't know how
So here's my last and final vow
Chorus:
I'll stop hurting you if you stop hurting me
I want to go back to when we were happy
But could you stay?
Just one more day?
Can't you see that I need you?
I know I said it, but I don't want to be through
And yes, I know, I have problems to fix
But with you out of my life, is it even worth it?
We should fix this love together
I love you, baby, now and forever.
We Can Fix This(Hannah)
Verse 1:
You said forever, but where are you now?
I thought we were good at figuring things out
Who knew we were both having these doubts?
Verse 2:
And I wish I could hate you, but I don't
I need you to leave, but I know that you won't
I need you now, I need you most
Chorus:
I keep hurting you, you keep hurting me
We both know that this isn't healthy
But can you stay?
Just for a day?
And you and I, we both have problems
We can rely on each other to help mend and solve them
We can fix this love together
Sure, it's rough, but things'll get better.
Verse 3:
And I miss your touch, your laugh, your smile
You said we'll do better, it might take a while
But if our love is strong enough, we'll push through
This love story ends with me and you
Chorus:
And I keep hurting you, you keep hurting me
We both know that this isn't healthy
But can you stay?
Just for a day?
And you and I, we both have problems
We can rely on each other to help mend and solve them
We can fix this love together
Sure, it's rough, but things'll get better
Bridge:
And I get the feeling you hate me by now
I want to get better, but I don't know how
So here's my last and final vow
Chorus:
I'll stop hurting you if you stop hurting me
I want to go back to when we were happy
But could you stay?
Just one more day?
Can't you see that I need you?
I know I said it, but I don't want to be through
And yes, I know, I have problems to fix
But with you out of my life, is it even worth it?
We should fix this love together
I love you, baby, now and forever.
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Help Us Understand What's Happening
Joshua Swinney
12/15/2023It turned out pretty good, I played Lauren Spencer Smith song That Part instrumental and sang it.
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Hannah
12/15/2023Really?? What'd you think and what music were you listening to?? Tell me everything!!
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Autumn Swinney
12/15/2023I sung it, and it sounded pretty good, I wish we could put a recording on here so I could show you how it sound
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Joshua Swinney
12/13/2023Let's just say if shakesphere was alive he'll be jealous of this beautiful peice!
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Help Us Understand What's Happening
Help Us Understand What's Happening
Hannah
12/12/2023CB if you're reading this, please understand where I'm coming from and think about where we both went wrong and how we can fix it, and then come back to me so we can solve these problems together. You're my soulmate, my best friend, and my favorite person. I can't lose you again.
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