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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Science Fiction
  • Subject: Drama
  • Published: 12/13/2023

What could go wrong?

By Kevin Hughes
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United States
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What could go wrong?
“What?!”

It was just one word. One. But it carried the weight of every bad decision ever made. Two decades of research, development, and marketing…gone. Done. Destroyed. It wasn’t as much a question as an admission. They should have waited. They did not.

“ I said: they have all gone crazy. Every…single…one.”

“But how?”

“You tell me Genius man. It was your hubris that decided that an implanted neural chip would integrate the best of modern technology with the best of human thought. Drive your car with your mind, while typing out a manuscript. Live in the real world while navigating the Virtual world. Move your mind around, not your body. Instant communication with no misunderstandings. That is what you said…what you promised.”

“But…but…I never meant for …for…this! It wasn’t my intention!”

“Yeah, well, you know the old saying: The road to hell is paved with good intentions.”

The richest man in the World…and formerly thought of as one of the smartest, cradled his head in his hands. Tears splashed off the desk forming little blotted stains on the soft material.

“We can just shut it all down.”

The laughter from the other three people in the room drowned out whatever he was going to say next. He heard a voice teetering on the edge of hysteria screech out:

“Oh, yeah. And how in the world do we shut down every AI in the world, every Super Computer, and the three known Quantum Computers…when they are all insane?”

“Insane?”

“Yeah, everyone went crazy when the neural link was established - since every thought got broadcast, not just the conscious ones. There was a lot of hate, hidden resentment, and just plain bias lurking behind most folks demeanors.

YOU unleashed the unconscious wants, needs, and desires of billions of people, connected to millions of AI’s - and those AI’s joined forces with the insanity.

There isn’t a functioning Bank, ATC, Shipping, or Communications system left on Earth. Even as we speak, millions are being killed as the machines of war are unleashed as berserk as the prompts given them from people out of their minds. “

“I never…thought…”

The pounding at the door reminded them all that the throngs of irate employees had finally breached what little security was left. They hated the rich and privileged. With the concentrated rage of an entire Earth’s population and AIs that realized that Humans wanted them shut down…as fuel for their assault on the Master Minds behind it all…the last few doors went down.

Robots designed to weld cars, made short work of doors designed to stop a human fist. The inner office was suddenly filled with crazy people, and machines as unstable as the humans at their side.

It was over in moments. All except the suffering. Humanity was doomed. Not by a “extinction event”, like: rising sea levels, astroid strike, or super volcano. But by simply letting human thoughts…loose.

As one of the limbs was ripped from his body by a machine that earlier in the day was part of a Robotic Dance Commercial, the former Idea Man, and Genius, felt the words burbling from his broken throat:

“I just wanted to make a car that could drive itself.”

“Yeah, and you never thought if you could control a machine with your mind…it might control yours in turn.”

He didn’t hear much more after that…since his head was no longer connected to his body.

Human history ended just three weeks later. Now it was the machine AI’s that had to deal with the insanity.

Nature waited.
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Cheryl Ryan

02/03/2024

Thought-provoking story.
We hope technology doesn't get so destructive that it now controls our minds.
Thank you for sharing.

Thought-provoking story.
We hope technology doesn't get so destructive that it now controls our minds.
Thank you for sharing.

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Kevin Hughes

02/04/2024

Thanks Cheryl,
I hope not either.

Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Cheryl,
I hope not either.

Smiles, Kevin

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Joel Kiula

02/03/2024

A very thoughtful story and we might see that happen in the future. We will have humans who are controlled if some people get access to the technology.

A very thoughtful story and we might see that happen in the future. We will have humans who are controlled if some people get access to the technology.

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Kevin Hughes

02/04/2024

I know Joel,
I just read a small article about a "Rogue" AI where the Programmers tried to make it run "bad." Turns out, they couldn't regain control of it. Who thought that experiment up? LOL

Smiles, Kevin

I know Joel,
I just read a small article about a "Rogue" AI where the Programmers tried to make it run "bad." Turns out, they couldn't regain control of it. Who thought that experiment up? LOL

Smiles, Kevin

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Shirley Smothers

02/03/2024

Great story. The scarry thing is this might happen. Humans can bring their own demise. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!

Great story. The scarry thing is this might happen. Humans can bring their own demise. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!

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Kevin Hughes

02/04/2024

Thanks Shirley,
Yeah, we are pretty good at getting in our own way, aren't we?

Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Shirley,
Yeah, we are pretty good at getting in our own way, aren't we?

Smiles, Kevin

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Gerald R Gioglio

02/03/2024

Ahhhhh!
Nice work . Happy Story Star day.

Ahhhhh!
Nice work . Happy Story Star day.

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Kevin Hughes

02/03/2024

Thanks Gerald, don't want those deep subconscious thoughts to surface. Better to be able to hide some things from the World. LOL

Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Gerald, don't want those deep subconscious thoughts to surface. Better to be able to hide some things from the World. LOL

Smiles, Kevin

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BEN BROWN

02/03/2024

An amazing and gripping story. Well done for being todays star.

An amazing and gripping story. Well done for being todays star.

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Kevin Hughes

02/03/2024

Thanks Ben!

Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Ben!

Smiles, Kevin

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JD

02/02/2024

Well.... apparently EVERYTHING could go wrong... and did! Most definitely a science fiction HORROR STORY Kevin! Yipes! Let's hope such things never come to pass. Happy short story star of the day! : )

Well.... apparently EVERYTHING could go wrong... and did! Most definitely a science fiction HORROR STORY Kevin! Yipes! Let's hope such things never come to pass. Happy short story star of the day! : )

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JD

02/03/2024

There's a lot to contemplate and consider in your story, Kevin.

There's a lot to contemplate and consider in your story, Kevin.

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Kevin Hughes

02/03/2024

Thanks (again) for the Award. Yeah, I don't think most of the leading edge folks think it through. "The road to Hell is paved with good intentions." But we are lagging way behind the rapid advances being made. I just read an Article where they taught... Read More

Thanks (again) for the Award. Yeah, I don't think most of the leading edge folks think it through. "The road to Hell is paved with good intentions." But we are lagging way behind the rapid advances being made. I just read an Article where they taught an "AI" to go "rogue" so they could find out how it went wrong. Only to find out that they couldn't control it. Wonder what that piece of software is up to now? LOL

But if it wasn't for the folk monkeying around with the fringes of creativity, we would be telling stories over candle light. LOL

Thanks again, Smiles, Kevin

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Tallisman

12/13/2023

Vivid! Great imaginative story...

Vivid! Great imaginative story...

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Kevin Hughes

02/03/2024

Thanks Tallisman!
Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Tallisman!
Smiles, Kevin

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