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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Aging / Maturity
- Published: 12/31/2023
"You Go, 2024!"
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United States“No, Really, can’t you tell me anything about what it is like? I mean in about 14 hours I start…can’t you give me some hints? I mean I really want to be the best Year ever…and you have so much experience…please?”
2023 smiled at the energy and enthusiasm of the nascent 2024. Memories of his own naiveté flooded back. 2023 saw how worn down 2022 had become as she had smiled down at his own youthful exuberance.
She never answered any of his questions, or offered any tips, advice, or secrets to having the best Year ever. All she would say is this:
“We give them the time. They have to decide how to use it. Some folks use it wisely, some don’t. Some think they have the whole year..others think they can make a difference. And they do.
They are People 2023…they don’t know how much Time they have. We get the whole year. Lucky for us, most of them believe each Year is a New Beginning. Some don’t realize that each day is a new beginning. Some of them don’t even know a Special Moment, Turning Point, or Crisis when it happens. They are just too busy spending bits and pieces of their hour, day, or Year without any conscious thought. “
She sighed.
Just like 2024 was begging for any scrap of knowledge or experience to make his year the Best Year Ever…2023 had begged 2022 to share something….any thing. Anything at all.
Finally she relented a bit.
“Okay, you have a few things going for you that first Day. “
2024 straightened up. Stacking all 365 Days in order for the Midnight hour. He wanted to be ready. He could feel that 2023 was going to share the things that 2022 had taught him.
“Ahem…so the first thing you have going for you…is you are New. Brand spanking New. You, yourself, are fresh. Free from any bumps, bruises, scars, catastrophes, illness, accidents, Acts of Nature etc… . (2024 Straightened up at the absolute purity of his existence. He was perfect…at least right now.). But I am not.
So, you will inherit the scars, challenges, crisis's, unresolved issues that piled up during my Year. No fault of yours. (2023 smiled a sad wry smile, patting 2024 gently before his Time started.)
You will also inherit an Earth where many people have Hope. Many of them have Love in their Lives. Many people will want change. Good change. Some will want any Change…not thinking through what that might mean in the long term.
Have you heard of “unintended consequences?”
2024 scrunched his eyes and thought back to the “New Year’s Class” he had just finished. He remembered that there was a mention of things that looked good …at first, but soured quickly when the unexpected happened.
He was pretty sure it had to do with where Storms hit, War Started, or…Marriages fell apart over seemingly innocent stuff.
“Yeah, I think so.”
“Well, get ready. Unintended consequences play a huge part in the actions and reactions of People. People will be your biggest challenge. The rest of Life on Earth won’t bother you much. Heck, other than people, no other Life Form on Earth really seems to understand the passing of Time anyway. And none of the Life forms on Earth- except people- think they are in control.
One of your jobs is to remind them that they are not in control. You could plan, scheme, layout and flowchart a perfect day…slip on a curb and fall in front of a bus…and the plans of mice and men fall apart. “
2024 did not want to interrupt. After all, it took him a while to get 2023 to give him any hints. But he had to ask:
“What’s a bus?”
2023 laughed so hard that precious seconds fell like diamonds of Time from his few remaining hours. It was a good laugh.
“My.My. My. You truly are young.”
2024 smiled back. It was good to see the Old Year, wrinkled, limping, and tired - laugh at his ignorance. He thought it helped 2023 somehow. He was right.
“You will know soon enough. Remember…all you can give them is Time. They have to use it. You won’t believe how much of their Time they waste. And how much of other People’s Time they will waste too. “
“I will get them to focus. I mean we had that Class on things that can be changed right?
2023 regained his sad smile. 2024 would get a rude introduction about that in just a few hours.
“Yes, people can change. People can become more open, intelligent, caring, even stronger and longer living. They can Love and Believe in ways that are miraculous. Their potential is stunning.”
2024 beamed.
“Yes! That’s why me- shiny new 2024 will be the Best Year Ever.”
2023 bit his tongue. Just like 2022 had bit hers, when he had said basically the same exact thing…just 12 months earlier.
“What you just said is the very best idea you can gift People with. You go Year!”
With that the Clock struck Midnight. 2023 joined his younger brothers and sisters. 2019 and 2020 were still a bit touchy about how they turned out. 2023 went over to talk with them.
2019 didn’t turn out at all like anyone expected. Neither did 2020. And no way in Heaven or on Earth would anyone have predicted the Marvels of Discovery that 2023 would make in Science, Physics, Technology and Space.
Nor would they have predicted the unrest, Wars, disasters that happened. 2023 had inherited several wars from 2022…hoping to end them all…only to have more start. 2024 would inherit them all.
2023 would hold onto the beauty of the James Webb Telescope pictures. The joy of new birth. Drawing strength from the small determined number of People who want a better life, for everyone.
Watching the almost always ignored aspects of People that never seem to make the News. Like their innate kindness, their willingness to help a stranger…or child. The sacrifice so many of them make so that 2024 would have a chance to become The Best Year Ever.
The bell rang, the ball dropped, and as one - all the Years toasted the arrival of 2024. They laughed as he sent a cheeky wink at them all:
“You’ll see! 2024 will be the Best Year Ever!”
He heard their reply fade into Time:
“You go 2024! We are all behind you."
"You Go, 2024!"(Kevin Hughes)
“No, Really, can’t you tell me anything about what it is like? I mean in about 14 hours I start…can’t you give me some hints? I mean I really want to be the best Year ever…and you have so much experience…please?”
2023 smiled at the energy and enthusiasm of the nascent 2024. Memories of his own naiveté flooded back. 2023 saw how worn down 2022 had become as she had smiled down at his own youthful exuberance.
She never answered any of his questions, or offered any tips, advice, or secrets to having the best Year ever. All she would say is this:
“We give them the time. They have to decide how to use it. Some folks use it wisely, some don’t. Some think they have the whole year..others think they can make a difference. And they do.
They are People 2023…they don’t know how much Time they have. We get the whole year. Lucky for us, most of them believe each Year is a New Beginning. Some don’t realize that each day is a new beginning. Some of them don’t even know a Special Moment, Turning Point, or Crisis when it happens. They are just too busy spending bits and pieces of their hour, day, or Year without any conscious thought. “
She sighed.
Just like 2024 was begging for any scrap of knowledge or experience to make his year the Best Year Ever…2023 had begged 2022 to share something….any thing. Anything at all.
Finally she relented a bit.
“Okay, you have a few things going for you that first Day. “
2024 straightened up. Stacking all 365 Days in order for the Midnight hour. He wanted to be ready. He could feel that 2023 was going to share the things that 2022 had taught him.
“Ahem…so the first thing you have going for you…is you are New. Brand spanking New. You, yourself, are fresh. Free from any bumps, bruises, scars, catastrophes, illness, accidents, Acts of Nature etc… . (2024 Straightened up at the absolute purity of his existence. He was perfect…at least right now.). But I am not.
So, you will inherit the scars, challenges, crisis's, unresolved issues that piled up during my Year. No fault of yours. (2023 smiled a sad wry smile, patting 2024 gently before his Time started.)
You will also inherit an Earth where many people have Hope. Many of them have Love in their Lives. Many people will want change. Good change. Some will want any Change…not thinking through what that might mean in the long term.
Have you heard of “unintended consequences?”
2024 scrunched his eyes and thought back to the “New Year’s Class” he had just finished. He remembered that there was a mention of things that looked good …at first, but soured quickly when the unexpected happened.
He was pretty sure it had to do with where Storms hit, War Started, or…Marriages fell apart over seemingly innocent stuff.
“Yeah, I think so.”
“Well, get ready. Unintended consequences play a huge part in the actions and reactions of People. People will be your biggest challenge. The rest of Life on Earth won’t bother you much. Heck, other than people, no other Life Form on Earth really seems to understand the passing of Time anyway. And none of the Life forms on Earth- except people- think they are in control.
One of your jobs is to remind them that they are not in control. You could plan, scheme, layout and flowchart a perfect day…slip on a curb and fall in front of a bus…and the plans of mice and men fall apart. “
2024 did not want to interrupt. After all, it took him a while to get 2023 to give him any hints. But he had to ask:
“What’s a bus?”
2023 laughed so hard that precious seconds fell like diamonds of Time from his few remaining hours. It was a good laugh.
“My.My. My. You truly are young.”
2024 smiled back. It was good to see the Old Year, wrinkled, limping, and tired - laugh at his ignorance. He thought it helped 2023 somehow. He was right.
“You will know soon enough. Remember…all you can give them is Time. They have to use it. You won’t believe how much of their Time they waste. And how much of other People’s Time they will waste too. “
“I will get them to focus. I mean we had that Class on things that can be changed right?
2023 regained his sad smile. 2024 would get a rude introduction about that in just a few hours.
“Yes, people can change. People can become more open, intelligent, caring, even stronger and longer living. They can Love and Believe in ways that are miraculous. Their potential is stunning.”
2024 beamed.
“Yes! That’s why me- shiny new 2024 will be the Best Year Ever.”
2023 bit his tongue. Just like 2022 had bit hers, when he had said basically the same exact thing…just 12 months earlier.
“What you just said is the very best idea you can gift People with. You go Year!”
With that the Clock struck Midnight. 2023 joined his younger brothers and sisters. 2019 and 2020 were still a bit touchy about how they turned out. 2023 went over to talk with them.
2019 didn’t turn out at all like anyone expected. Neither did 2020. And no way in Heaven or on Earth would anyone have predicted the Marvels of Discovery that 2023 would make in Science, Physics, Technology and Space.
Nor would they have predicted the unrest, Wars, disasters that happened. 2023 had inherited several wars from 2022…hoping to end them all…only to have more start. 2024 would inherit them all.
2023 would hold onto the beauty of the James Webb Telescope pictures. The joy of new birth. Drawing strength from the small determined number of People who want a better life, for everyone.
Watching the almost always ignored aspects of People that never seem to make the News. Like their innate kindness, their willingness to help a stranger…or child. The sacrifice so many of them make so that 2024 would have a chance to become The Best Year Ever.
The bell rang, the ball dropped, and as one - all the Years toasted the arrival of 2024. They laughed as he sent a cheeky wink at them all:
“You’ll see! 2024 will be the Best Year Ever!”
He heard their reply fade into Time:
“You go 2024! We are all behind you."
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Gail Moore
01/02/2024Happy New Year my friend and favourite author.
Can not think of any other person on the planet that deserved such an accolade.
Mr genius writer.
Happy star of the month. Enjoy your fame. :-)
Happy 2024
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Kevin Hughes
01/03/2024Aloha Gail,
Thanks so much for the kind words. "Genius" might be a bit of hyperbole. LOL I hope this year is a wonderful year for you and yours. Happy New Year!
Smiles, Kevin
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Valerie Allen
01/02/2024Great story to start off the new year! Many pearls of wisdom in your words. Best wishes for 2024 ~
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Kevin Hughes
01/02/2024Aloha Valerie,
I had to laugh when you said: "Many pears of wisdom in your words." Wisdom and Maturity are words not native to conversations about me. LOL But I guess if you live long enough, you do learn some things. Happy New Year and thanks for the kind words.
Smiles, Kevin
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BEN BROWN
01/02/2024A great story for the start of the New Year. Well done for being todays star.
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CPlatt
01/02/2024Happy New Year, Kevin! All the best for 2024! And congrats on star of the month too! Very well deserved! Cheers, Chris.
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CPlatt
01/02/2024Yeah the older folks over here have that traditional of Seeing in the New Year, for good luck it's supposed to be a dark haired person. We don't bother but my in laws still do it.
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Kevin Hughes
01/02/2024Hey CPlatt,
I just heard about a New Year's Custom on your side of the Pond. The first person in your house after Midnight has to bring three things with them for luck in the New Year. I thought that was cool. Over here, we kiss our significant other at the stroke of Midnight.
If you were single, and not dating, you had to hope someone willing to plant a wet one on your lips was standing nearby! LOL
Happy New Year, Kevin
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Kevin Hughes
01/02/2024Aloha Gerald,
Happy New Year...I saw a funny Cartoon I thought you would like. The Three Wisemen are talking to Jesus and they say: "Now remember this is both your Birthday and Christmas present." Every one of my relatives born in late December loved it.
And about the Election, one of my older (and mush wiser!) friends said to just stop listening to the constant worry. He said: "Kevin, we don't even know who is really running until after the Conventions in August...so why worry for eight months? And as you said in your latest story, things can change quickly." So try and hide from the Media Seep and go out and walk around a lake -or talk to someone who still has wonder at the day in front of them! It helps!
Smiles, Kevin
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Ed DeRousse
01/01/2024Thank you for your insight and diplomacy on explaining the difference between reality, and history....And hope!
Congratulations!!
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Kevin Hughes
01/01/2024Ed, that is one of my favorite comments ...ever. Thanks for that!
Smiles, Kevin
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Lillian Kazmierczak
01/01/2024Kevin, what a creative concept for a story! I can only imagine 2024's dismay today! It was a lot on its plate! Hopefully global leaders will rise to the occasion and stop these senseless wars, (niave, I know, but hopeful just the same!)! A well crafted short story star of the day!
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Kevin Hughes
01/01/2024Lillian, I am just as naive as you are - I believe we can learn to get along. But then again, I get mad when someone has 15 Items in the ten item check out line. So maybe I am not as understanding as I think I am. LOL.
Smiles, Kevin
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Joel Kiula
01/01/2024You have a very sharp and creative mind. Such a wonderful story to share. Happy New Year
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Cheryl Ryan
01/01/2024Very creative and inspiring!
Truly the best the year can offer is time. It's now left for anyone to make the best use of it.
Happy New year
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Kevin Hughes
01/01/2024That is a profound insight Cheryl, it is up to us to make the best use of it! Thanks for the kind words.
Smiles, Kevin
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Shelly Garrod
01/01/2024Wow Kevin. I loved this story. Your creative mind was definitely at work on this one. We can only hope that 2024 will show its light on all of us. Congrats on a well deserved Story Star of the Day. And Happy Short Story Writer of the Month. Another well deserved award. You are an inspiration to me. Keep writing and sharing your special writing talent with us. Happy New Year!
Blessings, Shelly
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Aziz
01/01/2024Congratulations, sir. Well deserved award. The Writer of the first month of the year, very symbolic and meaningful choice. You are a great writer whose words flow from a river of blessings and wisdom.
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Kevin Hughes
01/01/2024Aziz,
Here is hoping that 2024 is a great year for you and yours! You have been so generous and supporting of not only myself, but all of the Author's on StoryStar. You are much appreciated...and your comments are always insightful, caring, and clear.
Smiles, Kevin
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Marla
01/01/2024Thanks for sharing this, Kevin! I enjoyed reading it! Congrats on Star of the day. :)
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JD
12/31/2023Here's hoping 24 is a good one for all of us. Happy New Year Kevin, and happy first day of 24 short story star! :-)
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Kevin Hughes
01/01/2024Wow, JD! What a way to start the year. On my way to 1,300 stories? Oh. My. Gosh. Nine years! I can't thank you enough - and all of us here on StoryStar thank you Daily for this platform. Me especially. Two Awards to start the Year. My Ego is going to take the rest of the month to settle back down. LOL
I hope this year brings you all the good things your heart desires...oh, and some Dark Chocolate too!
Smiles, and eternal gratitude , Kevin
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JD
12/31/2023PS - Happy Short Story Writer of the Month, too! :-)
THANK YOU for ALL the 1,269 outstanding stories you've shared with us over the last 9 years, Kevin. You truly are the King of short stories and the STAR of Storystar!
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