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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 02/09/2024
Virtulent Legion "Corrien vs. Lodo's"
Born 1991, M, from Houston/Tx, United StatesAll characters are fictional and created from the Paul Pierro Ouzenne’s imagination. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. The story, images and creative works are solely his property. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
Corrien
A descendent with virtues/talents to trigger tissue rarefactions and compressions. She is a Colombian mother and works to protect what matters most. Corrien was compelled to battle evil after her father was killed by a notorious drug cartel. Her “Quicken Whip is one of her weapons used to overpower the enemies of the world.
Lodo is a Colombian Drug Lord. His name means mud in English. He rose up from the dirt/mud as many do in an environment like Colombia. Either you rose from the mud or be buried in it. There was not much in between. The successes and failures in life, challenge a person's beliefs in faith or fate. Lodo took the position of fate. You can’t change it and therefore you should feel superior if you are the headman, alpha or Jefe. His vibrato was contagious helping him gain popularity. His brutal tactics mended well with traditional history. Colombian life made him a Kingpin among Drug Lords. Very intelligently he studied the history of Colombia and handled his business as history has been doing for years. People usually don’t pay attention to things that normally happen or have happened many times in the past. So he remained under law enforcement radar because his crimes were normal/routine (if there is a such a thing).
His drug cartel was named Lodos, and it was successful for years until, a single person was killed as a result of greed. It happened late Saturday night. Mateo, his lieutenant was in charge of the drug shipment. The buyer, a Miami Drug Dealer became greedy. He decided to steal the drugs and keep the money. During the gun battle two stray bullets struck Ilisa while she was sleeping. She died instantly. After the investigation they determined it was a drug deal that went terribly wrong. Lodo had Mateo killed and believed things went wrong because the deal actually happened on Sunday. What Lodo didn’t know was that Ilisa was Corrien’s sister.
Corrien is a natural ascendent that has the ability to speed up her metabolism, muscles, and reflexes. Corrien abilities includes running over 250 mph, vaulting vast distances, and flexibility. After the death of her sister, she vowed to get revenge. The Lodo Cartel was behind Ilisa’s death, so she began studying them. She had to make a plan. It was no easy task. Her plan was to infiltrate and wait patiently for the opportunity to kill all the ones involved. The Lodo Cartel only used known associates to work with. That made it hard to get close to Lodo. All his members were loyal. She decided to be a victim and let them come to her aid. She became an associate with a rival Cartel “El Matador''. After some months she stole a shipment of drugs from the Matador Cartel. When she stole the drugs, she replaced them with Lodo Cartel credentials. The Matador Cartel thought Lodos did the theft. She conveniently told Lodo’s new lieutenant Aveos the time, date and location of the retaliation hit (A Lodo cocaine factory).
Aveos wanted to know why she was betraying the Matadors. She told him that the Matador Jefe took money from all the members to compensate for the theft.
Corrien- “I don’t pay for other people's mistakes.
Aveos- “I understand”
Corrien- “Now he will pay for his mistake.”
In exchange for the tip Aveos agreed to allow her to be an associate of the Lodos Cartel. She would be protected under their credentials. The Matadors drove two SUVs to the Lado Factory and was meet with three RPG rockets. The SUVs exploded and the passengers DRT (dead right there). Two days after the retaliation hit was unsuccessful, she met with Aveos. They trusted her after the retaliation was stopped thanks to her information. She was given the credentials and employed as an accountant.
After a few months Corrien learned the patterns and behaviors of the cartel. She planted several video wires in the cartel's facilities. The video wires recorded all the evidence needed to convict Lodo and his corrupt associates. She gathered the surveillance evidence and gave it to two people. One person was a mail clerk. She gave him directions to ensure her plan was fail safe. If she failed to send a secure message to him on every Monday at 4:00pm the package would be delivered to Colombia Federal Police headquarters. The second person was a news reporter. She gave her directions to open the package if she ever failed to report any week at 4:10pm Mondays. Now was the time to start her second phase of toppling the Lodo Cartel.
She used greed. The drugs she stole from the Matadors, she planted them in Aveo’s office. She reported the drugs to Lodo after requesting council with him. Lodo investigated the claim and found the cocaine. He assumed the cocaine was cut from the many shipments he distributed throughout the world. He and Aveos had a shootout. Aveos was killed along with his inner crew. Lodo thanked Corrien and planned to promote her. A huge party was planned to promote her at their dance club.
Corrien planned to kill Lodo and his cartel at the promotion party. The night was cold and not a cloud in the sky. The moon light would help her see her prey. It was similar to the night her sister was killed. Now it was time for retribution. She waited patiently in the club watching the movements of the cartel members. She slowly made her rounds locking the exit doors. Lodo made his speech and handed the microphone to Corrien. She told the story of her sister’s murder. As she told the story many members became wide eyed. Many of the members were drunk and didn’t understand the web of death Corrien spun around them. Lodo began laughing thinking Corrien was joking. He soon changed his perception after she sprinted, attacking, and killing 8 associates with a blink of the eye.
Several associates and bystanders ran to the exits. She picked them off one by one, incapacitating some and killing others. Her fast movements and elusive skills were no match for them. Drunk and high many associates were unable to combat with a war ragged revenging Colombiana! One by one they fell until Lodo was the last one. He looked around and saw the carnage. He imagined himself being part of the carnage. He dropped to his knees and begged for mercy. Corrien asked him where the mercy was in the bullets that killed her sister. Lodo seen there was no reasoning with Corrien and tried to shoot her. She dodged the barrage of bullets and snapped his neck with her braided laser lash.
Virtulent Legion "Corrien vs. Lodo's"(Pierro)
All characters are fictional and created from the Paul Pierro Ouzenne’s imagination. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. The story, images and creative works are solely his property. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
Corrien
A descendent with virtues/talents to trigger tissue rarefactions and compressions. She is a Colombian mother and works to protect what matters most. Corrien was compelled to battle evil after her father was killed by a notorious drug cartel. Her “Quicken Whip is one of her weapons used to overpower the enemies of the world.
Lodo is a Colombian Drug Lord. His name means mud in English. He rose up from the dirt/mud as many do in an environment like Colombia. Either you rose from the mud or be buried in it. There was not much in between. The successes and failures in life, challenge a person's beliefs in faith or fate. Lodo took the position of fate. You can’t change it and therefore you should feel superior if you are the headman, alpha or Jefe. His vibrato was contagious helping him gain popularity. His brutal tactics mended well with traditional history. Colombian life made him a Kingpin among Drug Lords. Very intelligently he studied the history of Colombia and handled his business as history has been doing for years. People usually don’t pay attention to things that normally happen or have happened many times in the past. So he remained under law enforcement radar because his crimes were normal/routine (if there is a such a thing).
His drug cartel was named Lodos, and it was successful for years until, a single person was killed as a result of greed. It happened late Saturday night. Mateo, his lieutenant was in charge of the drug shipment. The buyer, a Miami Drug Dealer became greedy. He decided to steal the drugs and keep the money. During the gun battle two stray bullets struck Ilisa while she was sleeping. She died instantly. After the investigation they determined it was a drug deal that went terribly wrong. Lodo had Mateo killed and believed things went wrong because the deal actually happened on Sunday. What Lodo didn’t know was that Ilisa was Corrien’s sister.
Corrien is a natural ascendent that has the ability to speed up her metabolism, muscles, and reflexes. Corrien abilities includes running over 250 mph, vaulting vast distances, and flexibility. After the death of her sister, she vowed to get revenge. The Lodo Cartel was behind Ilisa’s death, so she began studying them. She had to make a plan. It was no easy task. Her plan was to infiltrate and wait patiently for the opportunity to kill all the ones involved. The Lodo Cartel only used known associates to work with. That made it hard to get close to Lodo. All his members were loyal. She decided to be a victim and let them come to her aid. She became an associate with a rival Cartel “El Matador''. After some months she stole a shipment of drugs from the Matador Cartel. When she stole the drugs, she replaced them with Lodo Cartel credentials. The Matador Cartel thought Lodos did the theft. She conveniently told Lodo’s new lieutenant Aveos the time, date and location of the retaliation hit (A Lodo cocaine factory).
Aveos wanted to know why she was betraying the Matadors. She told him that the Matador Jefe took money from all the members to compensate for the theft.
Corrien- “I don’t pay for other people's mistakes.
Aveos- “I understand”
Corrien- “Now he will pay for his mistake.”
In exchange for the tip Aveos agreed to allow her to be an associate of the Lodos Cartel. She would be protected under their credentials. The Matadors drove two SUVs to the Lado Factory and was meet with three RPG rockets. The SUVs exploded and the passengers DRT (dead right there). Two days after the retaliation hit was unsuccessful, she met with Aveos. They trusted her after the retaliation was stopped thanks to her information. She was given the credentials and employed as an accountant.
After a few months Corrien learned the patterns and behaviors of the cartel. She planted several video wires in the cartel's facilities. The video wires recorded all the evidence needed to convict Lodo and his corrupt associates. She gathered the surveillance evidence and gave it to two people. One person was a mail clerk. She gave him directions to ensure her plan was fail safe. If she failed to send a secure message to him on every Monday at 4:00pm the package would be delivered to Colombia Federal Police headquarters. The second person was a news reporter. She gave her directions to open the package if she ever failed to report any week at 4:10pm Mondays. Now was the time to start her second phase of toppling the Lodo Cartel.
She used greed. The drugs she stole from the Matadors, she planted them in Aveo’s office. She reported the drugs to Lodo after requesting council with him. Lodo investigated the claim and found the cocaine. He assumed the cocaine was cut from the many shipments he distributed throughout the world. He and Aveos had a shootout. Aveos was killed along with his inner crew. Lodo thanked Corrien and planned to promote her. A huge party was planned to promote her at their dance club.
Corrien planned to kill Lodo and his cartel at the promotion party. The night was cold and not a cloud in the sky. The moon light would help her see her prey. It was similar to the night her sister was killed. Now it was time for retribution. She waited patiently in the club watching the movements of the cartel members. She slowly made her rounds locking the exit doors. Lodo made his speech and handed the microphone to Corrien. She told the story of her sister’s murder. As she told the story many members became wide eyed. Many of the members were drunk and didn’t understand the web of death Corrien spun around them. Lodo began laughing thinking Corrien was joking. He soon changed his perception after she sprinted, attacking, and killing 8 associates with a blink of the eye.
Several associates and bystanders ran to the exits. She picked them off one by one, incapacitating some and killing others. Her fast movements and elusive skills were no match for them. Drunk and high many associates were unable to combat with a war ragged revenging Colombiana! One by one they fell until Lodo was the last one. He looked around and saw the carnage. He imagined himself being part of the carnage. He dropped to his knees and begged for mercy. Corrien asked him where the mercy was in the bullets that killed her sister. Lodo seen there was no reasoning with Corrien and tried to shoot her. She dodged the barrage of bullets and snapped his neck with her braided laser lash.
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