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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Life Experience
- Published: 03/10/2024
Overcome
Born 1972, F, from Ontario, CanadaOvercome
I take a sip, it’s smooth, it’s warm
Then the window steals my thoughts
Completely lost in the wretched storm
The songbirds have been caught
Though not surprised, my cup in hand
Shaking like torrential breeze
Like strokes of lightening upon the land
Illuminating ease
I spill a little, stain my sleeve of white
Burning thoughts into my skin
The sun no longer, clouds dark as night
The rain begins to win
I close my eyes, to ten, inhale
Then presence takes its place
The air smells sweet, no longer stale
Calm thoughts in my headspace
The heavy rain like music sings
I sit back now mollified
The storms exist as little things
Answers come from deep inside
And so, I drink my cup of tea
Songbirds are now released
Each moment like leaves upon a tree
Blusterous, and then find peace
Overcome(Connie Nye-Kaley)
Overcome
I take a sip, it’s smooth, it’s warm
Then the window steals my thoughts
Completely lost in the wretched storm
The songbirds have been caught
Though not surprised, my cup in hand
Shaking like torrential breeze
Like strokes of lightening upon the land
Illuminating ease
I spill a little, stain my sleeve of white
Burning thoughts into my skin
The sun no longer, clouds dark as night
The rain begins to win
I close my eyes, to ten, inhale
Then presence takes its place
The air smells sweet, no longer stale
Calm thoughts in my headspace
The heavy rain like music sings
I sit back now mollified
The storms exist as little things
Answers come from deep inside
And so, I drink my cup of tea
Songbirds are now released
Each moment like leaves upon a tree
Blusterous, and then find peace
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Joel Kiula
03/18/2024Absolutely love this. I love the coolness and the present moment and it's wonders.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
03/18/2024Connie, I loved the way you compared how you felt inside to the storm outside! Nicely written prose. A deserved short story star of the day.
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Shirley Smothers
03/18/2024Beautiful poem. Bringing calm to chaos is the best thing. Loved this. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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