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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 04/12/2024
A Dangerous Ride
Born 2012, M, from Lindfield, United KingdomA Dangerous Ride
Chapter 1
“Hey sir. You havin’ a casual day at the office?” “To be honest, no. I’d rather use my brain than catch these criminals.” Brian sighed. Suddenly, he got a call from commissioner.”Hello sir. What’s wrong?” Brian asked.”We got a serious problem. The minister has been murdered. And who else do I hand this case to that’s not you? So I thought of giving it to you. You will get promoted if you figure out this case. You have been given 3 months time. Ok then, have a good one.” Just after that call, his best friend Henry called.” Brian! There’s.. There’s a really big problem.” Henry said panting.”WELL YOUR PROBLEM CAN’T BE MORE SERIOUS THAN MINE!” Brian screamed. “The minister got murdered… By me.”Henry said. Brian’s heartbeat stopped.”Wha.. How?” Brian stuttered. “Meet me at G1 1DJ.” Henry said. “This is going to be a dangerous ride.”
Chapter 2
They met at the marked place. “Picture this. I was having a party at my house. Then these goons came in. They beat everybody up, including me. And then they took money out of my safe. I followed them to their house sneakily with my car. But they got in the minister’s home. I had a business deal unfinished with him, and told him I’ll get the money to him and it’s at home. Like about 2 million pounds. I owe him 500 thousand though. So, I got in and I suddenly sensed that a knife was directed at me. And I wasn’t planning to kill him. Just take the money. He swung his knife and for self defence I twisted his hand but the knife accidentally went in through his stomach.” “Damn. That’s harsh.” Brian said.
Chapter 3
Brian planned to escape the country with him. But little did he know that cruelty and danger was close. Henry said to drop him off at his house and wait for him to change and get his bag. He dropped him off and waited. But when he came out, he had nothing except a gun. He pointed it at Brian and told him to get out of the car. He got out with his hands up. The police also snuck up behind and pointed it at Brian. He was trapped. He wondered why this for. “Haha! I got my 10 million pounds bounty. And, you know why this was for? I’ll tell you. They told me that you were once a robber and a wanted criminal. The person who caught you would’ve got 10 million. To be honest, that much for a small ant like you? Well, I don’t know how dangerous you are, but this was easy.” Henry said with laughter “I have changed. That’s why I joined police forces. That’s why I changed my whole identity. Well, I am surprised it took this much time though. But I knew this day would come.”
Chapter 4
Henry pushed him to the police. After They gave Henry all the money, Henry shot them all and told Brian to get in his car. Then, it was an incredible chase. A citizen reported this to the police and the police were chasing them. A police officer jumped from his car while driving and held on to the back of our car. He climbed up and reached for the open space in the window. But Henry pulled it up and chopped his hand off with a knife. Then they got out of the car and ran to Henry’s private jet.
They were finally in air and safe. But, British police forces reported this to all the police forces of countries nearest they can go to. This will be a never ending story
PART 2: THE HUNT COMING SOON
A Dangerous Ride(Aadiv)
A Dangerous Ride
Chapter 1
“Hey sir. You havin’ a casual day at the office?” “To be honest, no. I’d rather use my brain than catch these criminals.” Brian sighed. Suddenly, he got a call from commissioner.”Hello sir. What’s wrong?” Brian asked.”We got a serious problem. The minister has been murdered. And who else do I hand this case to that’s not you? So I thought of giving it to you. You will get promoted if you figure out this case. You have been given 3 months time. Ok then, have a good one.” Just after that call, his best friend Henry called.” Brian! There’s.. There’s a really big problem.” Henry said panting.”WELL YOUR PROBLEM CAN’T BE MORE SERIOUS THAN MINE!” Brian screamed. “The minister got murdered… By me.”Henry said. Brian’s heartbeat stopped.”Wha.. How?” Brian stuttered. “Meet me at G1 1DJ.” Henry said. “This is going to be a dangerous ride.”
Chapter 2
They met at the marked place. “Picture this. I was having a party at my house. Then these goons came in. They beat everybody up, including me. And then they took money out of my safe. I followed them to their house sneakily with my car. But they got in the minister’s home. I had a business deal unfinished with him, and told him I’ll get the money to him and it’s at home. Like about 2 million pounds. I owe him 500 thousand though. So, I got in and I suddenly sensed that a knife was directed at me. And I wasn’t planning to kill him. Just take the money. He swung his knife and for self defence I twisted his hand but the knife accidentally went in through his stomach.” “Damn. That’s harsh.” Brian said.
Chapter 3
Brian planned to escape the country with him. But little did he know that cruelty and danger was close. Henry said to drop him off at his house and wait for him to change and get his bag. He dropped him off and waited. But when he came out, he had nothing except a gun. He pointed it at Brian and told him to get out of the car. He got out with his hands up. The police also snuck up behind and pointed it at Brian. He was trapped. He wondered why this for. “Haha! I got my 10 million pounds bounty. And, you know why this was for? I’ll tell you. They told me that you were once a robber and a wanted criminal. The person who caught you would’ve got 10 million. To be honest, that much for a small ant like you? Well, I don’t know how dangerous you are, but this was easy.” Henry said with laughter “I have changed. That’s why I joined police forces. That’s why I changed my whole identity. Well, I am surprised it took this much time though. But I knew this day would come.”
Chapter 4
Henry pushed him to the police. After They gave Henry all the money, Henry shot them all and told Brian to get in his car. Then, it was an incredible chase. A citizen reported this to the police and the police were chasing them. A police officer jumped from his car while driving and held on to the back of our car. He climbed up and reached for the open space in the window. But Henry pulled it up and chopped his hand off with a knife. Then they got out of the car and ran to Henry’s private jet.
They were finally in air and safe. But, British police forces reported this to all the police forces of countries nearest they can go to. This will be a never ending story
PART 2: THE HUNT COMING SOON
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