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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: War & Peace
- Published: 05/08/2024
A boy stops War
Born 2007, M, from California, United StatesIn the tumultuous annals of history, amidst the clash of armies and the ravages of war, there emerged an unlikely beacon of hope - a humble boy named Aric.
Haunted by the horrors he witnessed in his war-torn village, Aric embarked on a perilous journey to quell the conflict that tore at the heart of his world. The two warring nations, Alveria and Baloria, had been locked in a bloody stalemate, their armies deadlocked in an endless cycle of violence.
As Aric traversed the scorched landscape, he encountered a wise old sage who shared with him the ancient prophecy that foretold of a child who would bring peace to the warring kingdoms. Fueled by this revelation, Aric's determination surged.
Donning the torn tunic of a messenger, Aric made his way to the battlefield, where the clash of steel filled the air. With each step, he carried a message of hope, a plea for an end to the bloodshed.
'Citizens of Alveria, citizens of Baloria, I beg you to lay down your weapons!' he cried. 'Let us shatter the chains of hatred that bind us and forge a new path of peace.'
His words, though feeble amidst the roar of battle, found an unexpected resonance in the hearts of weary warriors. As Aric's voice echoed across the battlefield, a spark of doubt flickered within the ranks.
'We are weary of war,' whispered a weary Alverian soldier. 'Perhaps it is time to listen to this boy.'
In the opposing ranks, a Balorian general paused, his sword trembling in his hand. 'I have seen too much death. I second this boy's plea.'
One by one, soldiers from both sides stepped forward, their swords and shields clattering to the ground. The battlefield fell silent as the echo of Aric's words reverberated through the ranks.
The generals of both armies, stunned by the unexpected turn of events, reluctantly agreed to a ceasefire. With trembling hands, they signed a peace treaty, promising to end the hostilities that had plagued their lands for so long.
As the ink dried on this historic document, Aric stood tall, his eyes ablaze with the fire of a peacemaker. He had achieved what countless armies and wise leaders had failed to accomplish: he had stopped a war and given his people a chance at a future free from conflict.
News of Aric's bravery and wisdom spread throughout the land, inspiring hope in the hearts of those who had long despaired. He became a symbol of unity and reconciliation, reminding all that even in the darkest of times, the power of one person can make an extraordinary difference.
And so, the boy who had once witnessed the ravages of war became the boy who stopped a war. His name, Aric, would forever be etched in the annals of history as the child who brought peace to a war-torn world.
A boy stops War(Leonardo Lezama)
In the tumultuous annals of history, amidst the clash of armies and the ravages of war, there emerged an unlikely beacon of hope - a humble boy named Aric.
Haunted by the horrors he witnessed in his war-torn village, Aric embarked on a perilous journey to quell the conflict that tore at the heart of his world. The two warring nations, Alveria and Baloria, had been locked in a bloody stalemate, their armies deadlocked in an endless cycle of violence.
As Aric traversed the scorched landscape, he encountered a wise old sage who shared with him the ancient prophecy that foretold of a child who would bring peace to the warring kingdoms. Fueled by this revelation, Aric's determination surged.
Donning the torn tunic of a messenger, Aric made his way to the battlefield, where the clash of steel filled the air. With each step, he carried a message of hope, a plea for an end to the bloodshed.
'Citizens of Alveria, citizens of Baloria, I beg you to lay down your weapons!' he cried. 'Let us shatter the chains of hatred that bind us and forge a new path of peace.'
His words, though feeble amidst the roar of battle, found an unexpected resonance in the hearts of weary warriors. As Aric's voice echoed across the battlefield, a spark of doubt flickered within the ranks.
'We are weary of war,' whispered a weary Alverian soldier. 'Perhaps it is time to listen to this boy.'
In the opposing ranks, a Balorian general paused, his sword trembling in his hand. 'I have seen too much death. I second this boy's plea.'
One by one, soldiers from both sides stepped forward, their swords and shields clattering to the ground. The battlefield fell silent as the echo of Aric's words reverberated through the ranks.
The generals of both armies, stunned by the unexpected turn of events, reluctantly agreed to a ceasefire. With trembling hands, they signed a peace treaty, promising to end the hostilities that had plagued their lands for so long.
As the ink dried on this historic document, Aric stood tall, his eyes ablaze with the fire of a peacemaker. He had achieved what countless armies and wise leaders had failed to accomplish: he had stopped a war and given his people a chance at a future free from conflict.
News of Aric's bravery and wisdom spread throughout the land, inspiring hope in the hearts of those who had long despaired. He became a symbol of unity and reconciliation, reminding all that even in the darkest of times, the power of one person can make an extraordinary difference.
And so, the boy who had once witnessed the ravages of war became the boy who stopped a war. His name, Aric, would forever be etched in the annals of history as the child who brought peace to a war-torn world.
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Cheryl Ryan
05/14/2024Such a brave boy. We need such a boy in many of the conflicts and wars plaguing the world right now.
Thank you for sharing!
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Lee Fenton
05/14/2024Beautiful message in this story! Thanks for writing this Leonardo, congrats on the Story star of the day.
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Gerald R Gioglio
05/14/2024...and a child will show us the way...nice work, Leonardo. Happy story Star day.
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Leonardo Lezama
05/17/2024Thank you Mr. Gioglio. I'm so grateful for the 3x short story star of the day.
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Leonardo Lezama
05/17/2024Leila, that is so true, we need a person like Aric. Thank you for reading.
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Joel Kiula
05/08/2024Increadible story. It takes will and courage to achieve that. Well done.
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