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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Horror
  • Subject: Faith / Hope
  • Published: 05/22/2024

Whisper in the dark

By Meena
Born 2006, F, from Pakistan/lahore, Pakistan
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Whisper in the dark
(Whisper in the dark)

"As I stepped off the train, the misty veil of Ravenwood Station swirled around me, whispering secrets in the wind.The trees seemed to lean in, their branches like skeletal fingers reaching out to snatch me, as I made my way down the deserted platform and into the darkness of the night."Suddenly i feel something creepy the strange hand on my shoulder im completely scared .I can't move.The hand tightened its grip, and I felt a cold breath on my ear, whispering a single word: 'Mine' – as I tried to scream, my voice was muffled by some unseen force, and I was dragged away into the darkness.
As I was dragged deeper into the darkness, the hand on my shoulder seemed to grow colder, and I felt myself being pulled towards an ancient, ruined church, its crumbling spire reaching towards the moon like a skeletal fingers.He continuously saying my name i either can't close my eyes. I try hard to close it and when i close my eyes its again all quite.But when I opened my eyes again, the figure was closer, its glowing eyes inches from mine, and I felt a chill run down my spine as it whispered my name once more, its breath cold and rank, like the grave.
The figure's gaze seemed to bore into my soul, and I felt my memories unraveling like threads from a tapestry, as it whispered a single word: 'Remember' – and suddenly, visions of a long-forgotten past flooded my mind, like a dam breaking.
As the visions faded, I was left with only one certainty: I was not who I thought I was. The figure vanished, leaving me shaken and lost in the darkness, with only the echo of my true name whispered in my mind: 'Aria'."
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Momo

07/15/2024

Nice wording

Nice wording

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Ayesha Binti Mahmud

05/22/2024

nice I guess

nice I guess

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