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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Inspirational
  • Subject: Miracles / Wonders
  • Published: 05/23/2024

The Great Healer of Nkolimbo Village

By Mike Kaupembe
Born 1990, M, from Blantyre, Malawi
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The Great Healer of Nkolimbo Village

THE GREAT HEALER OF NKOLIMBO

By Mike Kaupembe

The sun was setting over the small village of Nkolimbo, casting a golden glow over the thatched huts and the bustling crowd gathered outside the Great Healer's center. A South African woman, clad in a white bonnet, pleaded with the Great One, her voice trembling with desperation.

"We've traveled hundreds of miles, braved treacherous mountains and valleys, and endured harsh storms. We've heard of your extraordinary powers, your ability to heal the sick and the afflicted. Please, help our son. He's dying, and we're willing to pay any price."

The Great Healer, a man in his mid-50s with a kind face and piercing eyes, listened intently. News of his remarkable abilities had spread far and wide, attracting people from all corners of the world. Some believed he was a prophet, sent by God to liberate the suffering. Others thought him a charlatan, using black magic to deceive the desperate.

"I will heal your son," the Great Healer said, his voice calm and reassuring. "And you will not have to pay me anything."

The woman's eyes widened in disbelief. She had tried every hospital, every doctor, and every treatment, but her son's liver cancer had reached its final stages. The Great Healer's words were her last hope.

As the crowd watched, the Great Healer began his ritual. He drew a circle around the boy with white powder, sprinkled black fluid on his body, and chanted ancient songs. The air was thick with anticipation, the silence punctuated only by the Great Healer's murmurs and the soft rustling of the wind.

But as the minutes ticked by, the boy's condition remained unchanged. The Great Healer's helpers exchanged worried glances, their faces etched with concern. The woman's hope began to fade, replaced by a creeping sense of dread.

And then, it happened. The boy's body began to shake, his eyes wide open, his tongue protruding from his mouth. The crowd gasped, the Great Healer's face fell, and the woman's screams echoed through the valley.

The Great Healer checked the boy's pulse, his fingers pressed against the neck. A moment of silence, and then he spoke, his voice heavy with sorrow.

"I'm sorry to announce that the spirits of our ancestors have rejected the boy. Instead, they have welcomed him into their glorious abode."

The crowd erupted into chaos, the woman's wails piercing the air. The Great Healer disappeared into his chambers, leaving behind a trail of confusion and grief.

The story of the Great Healer of Nkolimbo spread like wildfire, a tale of mystery and tragedy. The woman hired a forensic pathologist, Dr Dzalanyama, who discovered that her son had died of cyanide poisoning. The news shocked the world, and the Great Healer was arrested, tried, and sentenced to 24 years in prison.

As the years passed, the Great Healer's legend grew. People whispered of his selfless deeds, his transformation of Nkolimbo village, and his unwavering dedication to the vulnerable. And though his methods remained a mystery, his legacy lived on, a testament to the power of hope and the human spirit.

The Great Healer of Nkolimbo Village(Mike Kaupembe) THE GREAT HEALER OF NKOLIMBO

By Mike Kaupembe

The sun was setting over the small village of Nkolimbo, casting a golden glow over the thatched huts and the bustling crowd gathered outside the Great Healer's center. A South African woman, clad in a white bonnet, pleaded with the Great One, her voice trembling with desperation.

"We've traveled hundreds of miles, braved treacherous mountains and valleys, and endured harsh storms. We've heard of your extraordinary powers, your ability to heal the sick and the afflicted. Please, help our son. He's dying, and we're willing to pay any price."

The Great Healer, a man in his mid-50s with a kind face and piercing eyes, listened intently. News of his remarkable abilities had spread far and wide, attracting people from all corners of the world. Some believed he was a prophet, sent by God to liberate the suffering. Others thought him a charlatan, using black magic to deceive the desperate.

"I will heal your son," the Great Healer said, his voice calm and reassuring. "And you will not have to pay me anything."

The woman's eyes widened in disbelief. She had tried every hospital, every doctor, and every treatment, but her son's liver cancer had reached its final stages. The Great Healer's words were her last hope.

As the crowd watched, the Great Healer began his ritual. He drew a circle around the boy with white powder, sprinkled black fluid on his body, and chanted ancient songs. The air was thick with anticipation, the silence punctuated only by the Great Healer's murmurs and the soft rustling of the wind.

But as the minutes ticked by, the boy's condition remained unchanged. The Great Healer's helpers exchanged worried glances, their faces etched with concern. The woman's hope began to fade, replaced by a creeping sense of dread.

And then, it happened. The boy's body began to shake, his eyes wide open, his tongue protruding from his mouth. The crowd gasped, the Great Healer's face fell, and the woman's screams echoed through the valley.

The Great Healer checked the boy's pulse, his fingers pressed against the neck. A moment of silence, and then he spoke, his voice heavy with sorrow.

"I'm sorry to announce that the spirits of our ancestors have rejected the boy. Instead, they have welcomed him into their glorious abode."

The crowd erupted into chaos, the woman's wails piercing the air. The Great Healer disappeared into his chambers, leaving behind a trail of confusion and grief.

The story of the Great Healer of Nkolimbo spread like wildfire, a tale of mystery and tragedy. The woman hired a forensic pathologist, Dr Dzalanyama, who discovered that her son had died of cyanide poisoning. The news shocked the world, and the Great Healer was arrested, tried, and sentenced to 24 years in prison.

As the years passed, the Great Healer's legend grew. People whispered of his selfless deeds, his transformation of Nkolimbo village, and his unwavering dedication to the vulnerable. And though his methods remained a mystery, his legacy lived on, a testament to the power of hope and the human spirit.

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Denise Arnault

08/10/2024

There is magic in this world. Science has just not explained all of it yet. That being said, healing is an art, not a science. It is also an act of courage. The healer takes his own happiness as well as the happiness of his 'clients' into hand each time that they practice their craft. It only takes one dissatisfied person to ruin what has been helpful to a thousand. A healer such as this one, m...
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There is magic in this world. Science has just not explained all of it yet. That being said, healing is an art, not a science. It is also an act of courage. The healer takes his own happiness as well as the happiness of his 'clients' into hand each time that they practice their craft. It only takes one dissatisfied person to ruin what has been helpful to a thousand. A healer such as this one, making due with no formal training, but only years of observation and possibly wisdom handed down from prior generations, does what they can with the tools at hand. Outcomes can never be guarenteed, even in todays most advanced hospitals with the best equipment and drugs and modern medicine and science can provide. This is a very longwinded way of saying that I am outraged by the way this healer was rewarded for his attempt to help someone who was purportedly already beyond help. Mike, please understand that I loved your story, but like Joel, I did not like what happened to the healer. Off my soapbox now.

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Joel Kiula

05/23/2024

A great story, sad to see a Great Healer had to face a sad ending.

A great story, sad to see a Great Healer had to face a sad ending.

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