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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Comedy / Humor
- Published: 06/04/2024
Short Circuit
Born 1945, M, from Farmersburg, United States“But it’s almost new. It should work.” Kevin said to his wife, Elida. He kept giggling at the controls.
“Well, it doesn’t and we can’t keep putting refrigerated goods into it or we’ll go broke.” Elida said, removing the spoiled beef from the freezer.
“The guy on Facebook promised me it worked.” He said, handing her a package of pork roast. “Wow, this is already stinking.”
“We’re going to have to buy a new refrigerator.” She said, tying the trash bag. They had emptied the shelves.
“I thought I had. Guess not.” Kevin said, shutting the refrigerator door regretfully.
“Please, no more stuff on the internet. This time we buy from a reputable dealer like Walmart or somebody like that." She said. “One with a guarantee. If it doesn’t work, we take it back.”
“Yes, dear.” He said, smiling at her.
That afternoon, they went shopping. They had pooled their savings little as it was and found they could afford one a little over $300.
They found one at Willis Appliance Mart. $299.00, marked down from $599.00
“Yup, it’s brand new, and no one has ever used it. This is last year’s model. Gotta have room for the new ones.”
“And it’s guaranteed?” Kevin said.
“If it stops working, we’ll sent out a repairman.” Hargus said. They were going to buy, and he hadn’t had a sale all day.
Kevin looked at his wife. She nodded. “Ok. When can you deliver it?”
Hargus breathed a sigh of relief. “I’ll call my guy soon as we finish the paperwork. We’ll have it at your home tomorrow morning sometime.”
They returned to their home secure in the knowledge tomorrow they would have a working refrigerator. “What are we going to do with the old one?” Kevin said, staring at the white box in their kitchen.
“Maybe we could sell it on Facebook.” Elida said, smiling. “For sale, one big flower pot.”
“Hey how about a burial vault?” Kevin said. He laughed. “Spend time in the fridge.”
“Why don’t you see if Fred will help you move it to the garage? I’d like to clean that spot before they bring in the new one tomorrow.”
“Good idea.” Kevin said, pulling his cellphone out of his pocket.
A few minutes later, Fred appeared at their kitchen door. A husky man in his 40s, Fred worked for a company building new homes.
“I appreciate you helping me. I don’t think I could handle it by myself.” Kevin said.
“Glad I could help. Just got home.” Fred said. Together, he and Kevin moved the refrigerator out from the wall. “Let me check the outlet. Had a pretty severe storm the other night.”
Together, Kevin and Elida watched as Fred unplugged the cord and pushed the tongs of an electrical tester into the wall receptacle. Nothing lit up. Getting to his feet, Fred asks. “Is the circuit breaker on?”
“Yeah, the box is one of the first things I checked after the storm.” Kevin said, somewhat embarrassed.
“I think your outlet is bad,” Fred said, getting to his feet. “I got a new one over at the house. Be right back.”
While he was gone, Elida said. “I thought you checked that?”
“I checked the circuit breaker, not the outlet.” Kevin said. “Don’t have anything to check it.”
“We need to get you a tester.” Elida said.
“I’ll pick one up at Lowes.” Kevin said. Fred came through the garage door.
“I shut off your circuit breaker.” He said. Kneeling down, he pulled off the cover and replaced the outlet. Replacing the cover, he said. Let’s see if she works. “He plugged in the cord to the refrigerator. “Kevin hit that circuit breaker. Fifth one down.”
Kevin found the right button and flipped it. There was a distinct hum from the refrigerator. Fred grinned. “There you go. Brand new refrigerator.”
"That’s it? It was the outlet?” Kevin said, his mouth hanging open. Elida just stared, looking from Fred to Kevin and back again.
“Give it about an hour. Should be cold by that time,” Fred said, gathering his tools. Kevin tried to pay Fred, but he wouldn’t take any money.
Cold air greeted him when he opened the door to the refrigerator an hour later. They called Hargus as soon as he opened the next morning and canceled the delivery. Later that day, they went shopping and stocked the refrigerator.
Short Circuit(Darrell Case)
“But it’s almost new. It should work.” Kevin said to his wife, Elida. He kept giggling at the controls.
“Well, it doesn’t and we can’t keep putting refrigerated goods into it or we’ll go broke.” Elida said, removing the spoiled beef from the freezer.
“The guy on Facebook promised me it worked.” He said, handing her a package of pork roast. “Wow, this is already stinking.”
“We’re going to have to buy a new refrigerator.” She said, tying the trash bag. They had emptied the shelves.
“I thought I had. Guess not.” Kevin said, shutting the refrigerator door regretfully.
“Please, no more stuff on the internet. This time we buy from a reputable dealer like Walmart or somebody like that." She said. “One with a guarantee. If it doesn’t work, we take it back.”
“Yes, dear.” He said, smiling at her.
That afternoon, they went shopping. They had pooled their savings little as it was and found they could afford one a little over $300.
They found one at Willis Appliance Mart. $299.00, marked down from $599.00
“Yup, it’s brand new, and no one has ever used it. This is last year’s model. Gotta have room for the new ones.”
“And it’s guaranteed?” Kevin said.
“If it stops working, we’ll sent out a repairman.” Hargus said. They were going to buy, and he hadn’t had a sale all day.
Kevin looked at his wife. She nodded. “Ok. When can you deliver it?”
Hargus breathed a sigh of relief. “I’ll call my guy soon as we finish the paperwork. We’ll have it at your home tomorrow morning sometime.”
They returned to their home secure in the knowledge tomorrow they would have a working refrigerator. “What are we going to do with the old one?” Kevin said, staring at the white box in their kitchen.
“Maybe we could sell it on Facebook.” Elida said, smiling. “For sale, one big flower pot.”
“Hey how about a burial vault?” Kevin said. He laughed. “Spend time in the fridge.”
“Why don’t you see if Fred will help you move it to the garage? I’d like to clean that spot before they bring in the new one tomorrow.”
“Good idea.” Kevin said, pulling his cellphone out of his pocket.
A few minutes later, Fred appeared at their kitchen door. A husky man in his 40s, Fred worked for a company building new homes.
“I appreciate you helping me. I don’t think I could handle it by myself.” Kevin said.
“Glad I could help. Just got home.” Fred said. Together, he and Kevin moved the refrigerator out from the wall. “Let me check the outlet. Had a pretty severe storm the other night.”
Together, Kevin and Elida watched as Fred unplugged the cord and pushed the tongs of an electrical tester into the wall receptacle. Nothing lit up. Getting to his feet, Fred asks. “Is the circuit breaker on?”
“Yeah, the box is one of the first things I checked after the storm.” Kevin said, somewhat embarrassed.
“I think your outlet is bad,” Fred said, getting to his feet. “I got a new one over at the house. Be right back.”
While he was gone, Elida said. “I thought you checked that?”
“I checked the circuit breaker, not the outlet.” Kevin said. “Don’t have anything to check it.”
“We need to get you a tester.” Elida said.
“I’ll pick one up at Lowes.” Kevin said. Fred came through the garage door.
“I shut off your circuit breaker.” He said. Kneeling down, he pulled off the cover and replaced the outlet. Replacing the cover, he said. Let’s see if she works. “He plugged in the cord to the refrigerator. “Kevin hit that circuit breaker. Fifth one down.”
Kevin found the right button and flipped it. There was a distinct hum from the refrigerator. Fred grinned. “There you go. Brand new refrigerator.”
"That’s it? It was the outlet?” Kevin said, his mouth hanging open. Elida just stared, looking from Fred to Kevin and back again.
“Give it about an hour. Should be cold by that time,” Fred said, gathering his tools. Kevin tried to pay Fred, but he wouldn’t take any money.
Cold air greeted him when he opened the door to the refrigerator an hour later. They called Hargus as soon as he opened the next morning and canceled the delivery. Later that day, they went shopping and stocked the refrigerator.
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Shirley Smothers
09/01/2024A cute story. Very realistic. Sometimes it's just a simple fix. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Joel Kiula
09/01/2024Wonderful story. We have people in our lives who help us when we need them. If they knew the problem and how to fix it then it would have been good. Happy to have others who knows how these things work.
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Cheryl Ryan
09/01/2024The story is such a fun read. It's humorous and has a great message that some judgments we make sometimes can result from our own ignorance.
Thank you for sharing!
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Kevin Hughes
09/01/2024Oh Darrel, I have been that Kevin. One of my friends son's works at the Genius Store for Apple, and when they answer the phones they always ask: "Is your computer plugged in to the wall - or surge protector?" A few minutes later they would report back: "It is now." When people bring in laptops, he asks if they hit the power button. Nope. Is the battery charged? Nope. Problem solvd.
When my brother's worked on cars, they always checked the gas first, battery second, water third. If it had gas, a charge, and a full radiator, they could then start trouble shooting. I loved your story and all the memories it brought back to me of my own silly mistaks. Like not trying the door to see if it was locked and spending an hour looking for where we hid the key. Only to watch my Wife come home, and walk right in the front door. It as wasn't locked, it was sticking. A little shoulder bump, and in she went. LOL
Congrats. Kevin
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Denise Arnault
06/08/2024I thought that this was supposed to be a fiction story but it sounds so familiar! Good quick read.
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Darrell Case
06/09/2024Denise
Thank you. You're right. It has been nonfiction too many times for me.
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Gerald R Gioglio
06/04/2024Opps...I guess some of us can identify with not looking for the simplest solution first. I plead the fifth. Thanks for the reminder!
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