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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 07/17/2024
Deep wicked
Born 1988, M, from Thomaston/Ga, United StatesThe air hung thick and heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older, something almost predatory, as the group of high school students ventured deeper into the cave. Their history teacher, Mr. Harrison, a man who seemed perpetually clad in tweed and enthusiasm, chattered on about stalactites and ancient cave paintings, oblivious to the growing unease prickling at the edges of their excitement.
The tremor hit without warning, a deep groan from the earth itself that sent dust and pebbles raining down on their heads. A collective gasp rippled through the group as the flashlight beams flickered, momentarily plunging them into absolute darkness. Then, just as abruptly as it began, the tremor subsided.
"Everyone alright?" Mr. Harrison's voice, though tight with concern, cut through the stunned silence. He hadn't noticed the group huddled around a newly revealed fissure in the cave wall, a gaping maw leading into darkness.
Curiosity, that age-old siren song, lured five of the teenagers towards the opening. As Mr. Harrison tended to a panicking classmate, they slipped into the passage, adrenaline tingling in their veins. The tunnel, surprisingly spacious, led them to a hidden chamber, its air thick with the weight of forgotten magic.
The chamber was a treasure trove of the macabre. Ancient scrolls lay scattered on a stone altar, their parchment brittle with age. Tarnished silver goblets, etched with arcane symbols, gleamed dully in the dim light filtering through the tunnel entrance. And there, resting on a pedestal carved from obsidian, lay a leather-bound book, its cover devoid of any markings yet radiating an aura of palpable power.
Eager hands reached out, stuffing the scrolls, goblets, and the book into backpacks, their historical significance momentarily overshadowed by the thrill of discovery. They were back in the main cavern before Mr. Harrison noticed their absence, their treasures hidden beneath textbooks and jackets.
The bus ride back to the school was filled with nervous whispers and excited chatter, the unsettling atmosphere of the cave already fading into memory. But the cave wasn't finished with them. Not even close.
It started subtly. A persistent chill that clung to their skin even in the warm spring air. Nightmares that bled into their waking hours, filled with cackling shadows and burning eyes. Their reflections in the mirror began to flicker, replaced by grotesque visages with eyes that glowed with malevolent hunger.
The book, nestled innocently amongst forgotten homework, throbbed with a life of its own, a conduit for the vengeful spirits it had unwittingly awoken. The ancient magic woven into its pages had latched onto the teenagers, marking them as its own.
As the curse tightened its grip, the five friends found themselves thrust into a terrifying new reality. They weren’t just students anymore; they were pawns in a centuries-old game of magic and revenge, forced to confront the consequences of their actions. Their only hope lay in deciphering the secrets of the very book that held them captive, unraveling the ancient incantations, and facing the wrath of the coven they had unwittingly resurrected.
Their history project had just become a desperate fight for survival, a race against time to break the curse before it consumed them all.
Deep wicked(William Crawford)
The air hung thick and heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older, something almost predatory, as the group of high school students ventured deeper into the cave. Their history teacher, Mr. Harrison, a man who seemed perpetually clad in tweed and enthusiasm, chattered on about stalactites and ancient cave paintings, oblivious to the growing unease prickling at the edges of their excitement.
The tremor hit without warning, a deep groan from the earth itself that sent dust and pebbles raining down on their heads. A collective gasp rippled through the group as the flashlight beams flickered, momentarily plunging them into absolute darkness. Then, just as abruptly as it began, the tremor subsided.
"Everyone alright?" Mr. Harrison's voice, though tight with concern, cut through the stunned silence. He hadn't noticed the group huddled around a newly revealed fissure in the cave wall, a gaping maw leading into darkness.
Curiosity, that age-old siren song, lured five of the teenagers towards the opening. As Mr. Harrison tended to a panicking classmate, they slipped into the passage, adrenaline tingling in their veins. The tunnel, surprisingly spacious, led them to a hidden chamber, its air thick with the weight of forgotten magic.
The chamber was a treasure trove of the macabre. Ancient scrolls lay scattered on a stone altar, their parchment brittle with age. Tarnished silver goblets, etched with arcane symbols, gleamed dully in the dim light filtering through the tunnel entrance. And there, resting on a pedestal carved from obsidian, lay a leather-bound book, its cover devoid of any markings yet radiating an aura of palpable power.
Eager hands reached out, stuffing the scrolls, goblets, and the book into backpacks, their historical significance momentarily overshadowed by the thrill of discovery. They were back in the main cavern before Mr. Harrison noticed their absence, their treasures hidden beneath textbooks and jackets.
The bus ride back to the school was filled with nervous whispers and excited chatter, the unsettling atmosphere of the cave already fading into memory. But the cave wasn't finished with them. Not even close.
It started subtly. A persistent chill that clung to their skin even in the warm spring air. Nightmares that bled into their waking hours, filled with cackling shadows and burning eyes. Their reflections in the mirror began to flicker, replaced by grotesque visages with eyes that glowed with malevolent hunger.
The book, nestled innocently amongst forgotten homework, throbbed with a life of its own, a conduit for the vengeful spirits it had unwittingly awoken. The ancient magic woven into its pages had latched onto the teenagers, marking them as its own.
As the curse tightened its grip, the five friends found themselves thrust into a terrifying new reality. They weren’t just students anymore; they were pawns in a centuries-old game of magic and revenge, forced to confront the consequences of their actions. Their only hope lay in deciphering the secrets of the very book that held them captive, unraveling the ancient incantations, and facing the wrath of the coven they had unwittingly resurrected.
Their history project had just become a desperate fight for survival, a race against time to break the curse before it consumed them all.
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Shelly Garrod
07/25/2024Amazing descriptive writing style. This was very good. Looking forward to further adventures with Mr. Harrison's high school students.
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