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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
- Published: 07/23/2024
Briarwood Manor
Born 1997, M, from Melcher-Dallas, Iowa, United StatesA shroud of fog, thick as a hare's despair, clung stubbornly to Briarwood Manor. Its gabled roof, once a cheerful confection of gingerbread, now resembled a blackened skull against the sickly dawn. I, Bartholomew Cottontail, stood shivering on the cobbled path, the damp seeping through my worn waistcoat. My whiskers twitched, picking up the faint metallic tang of rust and the cloying sweetness of rot.
A tap, no, a frantic hammering, echoed from within. I pushed open the warped oak door, a groan escaping its rusty hinges. Dust motes danced in the spectral light that filtered through cobweb-draped windows. The once grand entryway reeked of mildew and something far more sinister – a creeping madness that clawed at my sanity.
“Bartholomew! Thank the heavens you’ve come!” A frantic voice, laced with a tremor of hysteria, shattered the oppressive silence. It belonged to Priscilla, my childhood sweetheart, now a gaunt rabbit with eyes that mirrored the haunted halls. Her fur, once the color of spun moonlight, was dull and matted.
“Priscilla, what has transpired here?” I rushed to her, the chill seeping into my very bones. Her touch was like ice, sending a shiver down my spine.
“It’s Father,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “He’s changed.”
Dread coiled in my gut. Old Man Briarwood, a figure of booming laughter and booming voice, was renowned for his fantastical clockwork creations that brought joy to the entire warren.
We navigated a labyrinth of dust-laden corridors, the air thick with the ticking of a thousand dormant mechanisms. It was an unsettling symphony, broken only by the frantic pounding of my own heart. We reached a heavy oak door adorned with elaborate clockwork gears, its rhythmic whirring the only sign of life in the decaying mansion.
Priscilla’s hand trembled as she turned the key. The metallic groan of the hinges was a death knell. The workshop, once a vibrant haven of invention, was a grotesque parody of its former glory. Broken clockwork contraptions littered the floor, their intricate gears twisted and mangled. A putrid stench, a sickly mix of oil and decay, assaulted my nostrils.
And then I saw him. Old Man Briarwood, hunched over a workbench, his back to us. His white fur was matted with grime, and his once-bright eyes were vacant, replaced by two glowing red orbs that burned with a feverish intensity. His movements were jerky, unnatural, like a broken automaton.
“Father?” Priscilla’s voice cracked.
He turned, his face a grotesque mask of madness. A mechanical contraption, a grotesque parody of a clockwork heart, pulsed a sickly red light in his chest cavity. His voice, when it came, was a grating rasp unlike anything I had ever heard.
“The machines, they live,” he wheezed, his words punctuated by the rhythmic whirring of his makeshift heart.
“What have you done?” I cried, horror choking my voice.
A deranged smile split his face, revealing rows of needle-sharp teeth. “I have achieved immortality! The machines have embraced me, granted me eternal life!”
His laughter, a high-pitched, mechanical rasp, echoed through the room. It was a sound devoid of joy, a chilling parody of his once-hearty chuckle.
Suddenly, a horrifying realization dawned on me. The rhythmic ticking that filled the house wasn't just from the dormant contraptions. It was the sound of his twisted heart, a constant reminder of the monstrous bargain he had struck.
“What have you become?” I whispered, despair creeping into my voice.
He lunged forward, a skeletal hand with claws of polished brass reaching for us. In that moment, the workshop, once a source of wonder, became a tomb. We fled, the warped gears of the broken clockwork toys scraping at my fur, leaving trails of crimson as I ran.
The fog outside seemed to press in on us, suffocating. Briarwood Manor loomed behind us, a monument to madness, the rhythmic beating of his clockwork heart a horrifying mantra that echoed in my ears long after we escaped. It was a chilling reminder that the pursuit of immortality often leads to a fate worse than death – a descent into a mechanical, soulless existence.
As for Priscilla, her sanity teetered on the edge. I, Bartholomew Cottontail, am haunted by the chilling image of my childhood sweetheart and the terrifying echo of her father’s unnatural laughter, a constant reminder of the price of ambition and the descent into madness that awaited within the fog-shrouded walls of Briarwood Manor.
Briarwood Manor(D.l. lewis)
A shroud of fog, thick as a hare's despair, clung stubbornly to Briarwood Manor. Its gabled roof, once a cheerful confection of gingerbread, now resembled a blackened skull against the sickly dawn. I, Bartholomew Cottontail, stood shivering on the cobbled path, the damp seeping through my worn waistcoat. My whiskers twitched, picking up the faint metallic tang of rust and the cloying sweetness of rot.
A tap, no, a frantic hammering, echoed from within. I pushed open the warped oak door, a groan escaping its rusty hinges. Dust motes danced in the spectral light that filtered through cobweb-draped windows. The once grand entryway reeked of mildew and something far more sinister – a creeping madness that clawed at my sanity.
“Bartholomew! Thank the heavens you’ve come!” A frantic voice, laced with a tremor of hysteria, shattered the oppressive silence. It belonged to Priscilla, my childhood sweetheart, now a gaunt rabbit with eyes that mirrored the haunted halls. Her fur, once the color of spun moonlight, was dull and matted.
“Priscilla, what has transpired here?” I rushed to her, the chill seeping into my very bones. Her touch was like ice, sending a shiver down my spine.
“It’s Father,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “He’s changed.”
Dread coiled in my gut. Old Man Briarwood, a figure of booming laughter and booming voice, was renowned for his fantastical clockwork creations that brought joy to the entire warren.
We navigated a labyrinth of dust-laden corridors, the air thick with the ticking of a thousand dormant mechanisms. It was an unsettling symphony, broken only by the frantic pounding of my own heart. We reached a heavy oak door adorned with elaborate clockwork gears, its rhythmic whirring the only sign of life in the decaying mansion.
Priscilla’s hand trembled as she turned the key. The metallic groan of the hinges was a death knell. The workshop, once a vibrant haven of invention, was a grotesque parody of its former glory. Broken clockwork contraptions littered the floor, their intricate gears twisted and mangled. A putrid stench, a sickly mix of oil and decay, assaulted my nostrils.
And then I saw him. Old Man Briarwood, hunched over a workbench, his back to us. His white fur was matted with grime, and his once-bright eyes were vacant, replaced by two glowing red orbs that burned with a feverish intensity. His movements were jerky, unnatural, like a broken automaton.
“Father?” Priscilla’s voice cracked.
He turned, his face a grotesque mask of madness. A mechanical contraption, a grotesque parody of a clockwork heart, pulsed a sickly red light in his chest cavity. His voice, when it came, was a grating rasp unlike anything I had ever heard.
“The machines, they live,” he wheezed, his words punctuated by the rhythmic whirring of his makeshift heart.
“What have you done?” I cried, horror choking my voice.
A deranged smile split his face, revealing rows of needle-sharp teeth. “I have achieved immortality! The machines have embraced me, granted me eternal life!”
His laughter, a high-pitched, mechanical rasp, echoed through the room. It was a sound devoid of joy, a chilling parody of his once-hearty chuckle.
Suddenly, a horrifying realization dawned on me. The rhythmic ticking that filled the house wasn't just from the dormant contraptions. It was the sound of his twisted heart, a constant reminder of the monstrous bargain he had struck.
“What have you become?” I whispered, despair creeping into my voice.
He lunged forward, a skeletal hand with claws of polished brass reaching for us. In that moment, the workshop, once a source of wonder, became a tomb. We fled, the warped gears of the broken clockwork toys scraping at my fur, leaving trails of crimson as I ran.
The fog outside seemed to press in on us, suffocating. Briarwood Manor loomed behind us, a monument to madness, the rhythmic beating of his clockwork heart a horrifying mantra that echoed in my ears long after we escaped. It was a chilling reminder that the pursuit of immortality often leads to a fate worse than death – a descent into a mechanical, soulless existence.
As for Priscilla, her sanity teetered on the edge. I, Bartholomew Cottontail, am haunted by the chilling image of my childhood sweetheart and the terrifying echo of her father’s unnatural laughter, a constant reminder of the price of ambition and the descent into madness that awaited within the fog-shrouded walls of Briarwood Manor.
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