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Greylag Goose

By Leanne Chung
Born 2013, F, from Harpenden, United Kingdom
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Greylag Goose

Greylag goose, Greylag goose,
Wild and free.
I feel your wingtips touching me.

As you take off,
With all your friends,
The wind in your feathers
Blows ‘till the end.

Greylag goose, Greylag goose,
Wild and free,
Flying across a miniature sea.

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Roy Stubblefield

09/03/2024

I really like your poem and hope that you will publish more, thank you.

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Leanne Chung

09/04/2024

Thank you so much!

Barry

07/31/2024

Definitely a five-star poem! What I liked best about it was the musical rhythmn of the words you chose and, of course, the physical imagery.

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Leanne Chung

07/31/2024

Thank you! I really appreciate it as this is my only my third piece of writing on Story Star.

Ivy

07/31/2024

Wow! This poem is very well written.

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Leanne Chung

07/31/2024

Thanks!

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