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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Inspirational
  • Subject: Life Changing Decisions/Events
  • Published: 07/31/2024

"Who's Annie?"

By Kevin Hughes
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United States
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"Who's Annie?"

The guy leaned back against the hot brick wall. He might have been thirty, or maybe thirty two. He looked three decades older than that. Two bouts with drugs and alcohol, taking away all of his Teen and Young adult years…had left him like this. Starving, homeless, and hopeless. He was just sitting there stewing in his own self pity, with a dash of the “life is unfair” sauce bubbling along side the pity.

Then he saw the kid. He couldn’t help but laugh. And smile. Somewhere in his memories was a TV show with a little red headed freckled kid running away from home, with everything he owned wrapped in a bandana hanging from a stick. So he shook his head to make sure it was real, and not a flashback or hallucination.

It was neither. It was a little kid, maybe ten or so, running away from home…and whistling while he walked. He couldn’t help it…he smiled again.

The little kid saw the old skinny guy wearing threadbare clothes. He had stubble on his face, dirty nails, and a big hole in the bottom of his left shoe. He looked…well, worn out.

But he was smiling. There was a twinkle in the old man’s eyes as he waved to the young kid. The kid walked right over to him. Sat down, opened his bandana and revealed two fruit juice boxes, two tuna fish sandwiches- a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, and a small bag of Lay’s potato chips.

The Bum’s mouth watered. The kid caught the look.

“You want tuna, or Peanut butter and Jelly…wait! You aren’t allergic to nuts are you?”

The Bum laughed out loud.
“I ain’t allergic to anything except hard work and school.”

The ten year old scrunched up his face.

“You can be allergic to School? And hard work? Is that why you are a bum?”

‘What!?”

The kid was impervious to the Bum’s tone.

“I hope you aren’t allergic to nuts. My friend Annie is in Eighth Grade. I saw her eat a peanut butter sandwich, and her face, lips and tongue, swelled up something terrible. They took her away in an ambulance.”

The bum couldn’t help it. His anger forgotten.

“Is Annie okay?”

The kid handed the bum the PBJ sandwich. And opened one of the Tuna sandwiches. Before he replied.

“Yeah, she missed a day of school. And she forgave Bryan for giving her his sandwich too. Bryan just wanted to give her a gift. He didn’t know about the allergy stuff.”

“A gift? Why?”

The kid shrugged his shoulders.

“I don’t know. Bryan is weird. He likes girls…well, Annie anyway.”

The bum laughed again. So hard the kid had to stop eating and ask:
‘“Are you okay? Did I say something funny?”

Wiping a tear from his eyes, he couldn’t help it. He asked another question:

“How old is Bryan?”

“Thirteen, Annie is in Eighth grade with him. “

The bum nodded sagely.

“That’s about the right age.”

“For what?”

“For liking girls.”

“I don’t know. I like Annie. She babysits for us all the time.”

The bum smiled again.

“Do you like her enough to want to kiss her?”

“What? Yech!”

The Bum smiled again. The sandwich was all gone. So was the juice box. The little kid offered him the other Tuna Fish sandwich. He took it.

“Well, I gotta go. I was going to run away from home. But I am tired and out of food.”

The Bum stood up. Looking the kid right in the eyes he said:

“Look, I may be a bum. But I had a good Mom and Dad, I just got stubborn and ran away. Running away doesn’t fix anything …so go home. Tell your Mom you love her, and be glad you have a home!”

He said it so fiercely that even a ten year old could hear the pain.

“Okay, if you promise me something.”

“What?”

“I will go home. But promise me you will go home too.”

“I can’t go home!”

“Why not? You said you had a good Mom and Dad. “

“I did.”

“Well, then go home. My Mom will probably yell at me. But then she will hug me. Mom’s do that. So go home.”

The Bum thought for a long while. He put out his hand.

“Deal.”

They shook hands on it.

*****

She looked through the window. It couldn’t be! She thought she recognized him, but it had been fifteen years. He was so thin. He had thrift shop clothes on, a fresh shave and a haircut. And a timid smile on his face when he saw her look through the window.

“Jack, Jack get in here! It’s Kevin! He’s home!”

She heard her husband yell out from his Office, but she was already out the door.

She flung herself around her son. Almost knocking him over. Over her shoulder he saw his Dad, a look of stunned relief on his face, and a tear already rolling down his cheek.

He heard his Mom’s : “I love you. I love you.” And his Dad’s : “Welcome Home son. Welcome home.”

At dinner he filled them in. They all laughed when he showed them what was in his backpack:
“I always carry a Tuna Sandwich and a PBJ with me now. Just in case. I don’t want Annie to get sick.”

“Who’s Annie?”

Then he told them the story that changed his life.

"Who's Annie?"(Kevin Hughes) The guy leaned back against the hot brick wall. He might have been thirty, or maybe thirty two. He looked three decades older than that. Two bouts with drugs and alcohol, taking away all of his Teen and Young adult years…had left him like this. Starving, homeless, and hopeless. He was just sitting there stewing in his own self pity, with a dash of the “life is unfair” sauce bubbling along side the pity.

Then he saw the kid. He couldn’t help but laugh. And smile. Somewhere in his memories was a TV show with a little red headed freckled kid running away from home, with everything he owned wrapped in a bandana hanging from a stick. So he shook his head to make sure it was real, and not a flashback or hallucination.

It was neither. It was a little kid, maybe ten or so, running away from home…and whistling while he walked. He couldn’t help it…he smiled again.

The little kid saw the old skinny guy wearing threadbare clothes. He had stubble on his face, dirty nails, and a big hole in the bottom of his left shoe. He looked…well, worn out.

But he was smiling. There was a twinkle in the old man’s eyes as he waved to the young kid. The kid walked right over to him. Sat down, opened his bandana and revealed two fruit juice boxes, two tuna fish sandwiches- a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, and a small bag of Lay’s potato chips.

The Bum’s mouth watered. The kid caught the look.

“You want tuna, or Peanut butter and Jelly…wait! You aren’t allergic to nuts are you?”

The Bum laughed out loud.
“I ain’t allergic to anything except hard work and school.”

The ten year old scrunched up his face.

“You can be allergic to School? And hard work? Is that why you are a bum?”

‘What!?”

The kid was impervious to the Bum’s tone.

“I hope you aren’t allergic to nuts. My friend Annie is in Eighth Grade. I saw her eat a peanut butter sandwich, and her face, lips and tongue, swelled up something terrible. They took her away in an ambulance.”

The bum couldn’t help it. His anger forgotten.

“Is Annie okay?”

The kid handed the bum the PBJ sandwich. And opened one of the Tuna sandwiches. Before he replied.

“Yeah, she missed a day of school. And she forgave Bryan for giving her his sandwich too. Bryan just wanted to give her a gift. He didn’t know about the allergy stuff.”

“A gift? Why?”

The kid shrugged his shoulders.

“I don’t know. Bryan is weird. He likes girls…well, Annie anyway.”

The bum laughed again. So hard the kid had to stop eating and ask:
‘“Are you okay? Did I say something funny?”

Wiping a tear from his eyes, he couldn’t help it. He asked another question:

“How old is Bryan?”

“Thirteen, Annie is in Eighth grade with him. “

The bum nodded sagely.

“That’s about the right age.”

“For what?”

“For liking girls.”

“I don’t know. I like Annie. She babysits for us all the time.”

The bum smiled again.

“Do you like her enough to want to kiss her?”

“What? Yech!”

The Bum smiled again. The sandwich was all gone. So was the juice box. The little kid offered him the other Tuna Fish sandwich. He took it.

“Well, I gotta go. I was going to run away from home. But I am tired and out of food.”

The Bum stood up. Looking the kid right in the eyes he said:

“Look, I may be a bum. But I had a good Mom and Dad, I just got stubborn and ran away. Running away doesn’t fix anything …so go home. Tell your Mom you love her, and be glad you have a home!”

He said it so fiercely that even a ten year old could hear the pain.

“Okay, if you promise me something.”

“What?”

“I will go home. But promise me you will go home too.”

“I can’t go home!”

“Why not? You said you had a good Mom and Dad. “

“I did.”

“Well, then go home. My Mom will probably yell at me. But then she will hug me. Mom’s do that. So go home.”

The Bum thought for a long while. He put out his hand.

“Deal.”

They shook hands on it.

*****

She looked through the window. It couldn’t be! She thought she recognized him, but it had been fifteen years. He was so thin. He had thrift shop clothes on, a fresh shave and a haircut. And a timid smile on his face when he saw her look through the window.

“Jack, Jack get in here! It’s Kevin! He’s home!”

She heard her husband yell out from his Office, but she was already out the door.

She flung herself around her son. Almost knocking him over. Over her shoulder he saw his Dad, a look of stunned relief on his face, and a tear already rolling down his cheek.

He heard his Mom’s : “I love you. I love you.” And his Dad’s : “Welcome Home son. Welcome home.”

At dinner he filled them in. They all laughed when he showed them what was in his backpack:
“I always carry a Tuna Sandwich and a PBJ with me now. Just in case. I don’t want Annie to get sick.”

“Who’s Annie?”

Then he told them the story that changed his life.

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Chris Larson

01/02/2025

Kevin, you did it to me again. Chocked me up. My peeps, who I read to, will enjoy this -- IF I can get through it!
Thanks.

Kevin, you did it to me again. Chocked me up. My peeps, who I read to, will enjoy this -- IF I can get through it!
Thanks.

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Kevin Hughes

01/02/2025

Thanks Chris!
Those are some powerful words in your comment.

Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Chris!
Those are some powerful words in your comment.

Smiles, Kevin

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Joel Kiula

11/16/2024

Another masterpice. A great story indeed. Thank you for sharing

Another masterpice. A great story indeed. Thank you for sharing

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Kevin Hughes

01/02/2025

Thanks Joel!
Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Joel!
Smiles, Kevin

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Kristin Dockar

11/16/2024

I so enjoyed this story Kevin. Just great! So much hope in it.

I so enjoyed this story Kevin. Just great! So much hope in it.

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Kevin Hughes

11/16/2024

Aloha Kristin,

Thanks for the comment! Hope is a universal salve.

Smiles, Kevin

Aloha Kristin,

Thanks for the comment! Hope is a universal salve.

Smiles, Kevin

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Cheryl Ryan

11/16/2024

This story seems like one of those divine interventions, or messengers series, as Denise Arnault would call it. Returning home after 15 years and just a few minutes of meeting with the young kid is truly a miracle. I can imagine the joy this brings to the parents who may have been grieving and praying for his return for 15 years.
This is great. Thank you for sharing Kevin!

This story seems like one of those divine interventions, or messengers series, as Denise Arnault would call it. Returning home after 15 years and just a few minutes of meeting with the young kid is truly a miracle. I can imagine the joy this brings to the parents who may have been grieving and praying for his return for 15 years.
This is great. Thank you for sharing Kevin!

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Kevin Hughes

11/16/2024

Thank you Cheryl,
Yep, many a life changing event only takes a moment, Elvis on that bus when the Lady told him he was a Singer...so he went to record a song for his Mom. Ed McMahon, driving down to Philadelphia to meet with Johnny Carson, t... Read More

Thank you Cheryl,
Yep, many a life changing event only takes a moment, Elvis on that bus when the Lady told him he was a Singer...so he went to record a song for his Mom. Ed McMahon, driving down to Philadelphia to meet with Johnny Carson, those two minutes changed Ed's life. Madonna going to NYC and hand carrying her home made audition tape to Agent after Agent, and the last one she visited said: "Oh, I think you have talent." And, of course, Sylvester Stallone writing Rocky, and then ending up with the very last Agent (under "Z") in the phone book, believing in him.

In my own personal life, meeting my Kathy just because I was nice to a girl in my apartment complex...yeah, life changing events don't have to take a while, or even appear dramatic. A wrong turn at an intersection was how one of my buddies met his wife of fifty two years! And so it goes.

Smiles, Kevin

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Gerald R Gioglio

11/16/2024

Sweet tale, Dude. Happy Story Star day.

Sweet tale, Dude. Happy Story Star day.

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Kevin Hughes

11/16/2024

Thanks Gerald!
Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Gerald!
Smiles, Kevin

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JD

11/15/2024

Another lovely gem, Kevin. Thank you. Happy short story star of the day.

Another lovely gem, Kevin. Thank you. Happy short story star of the day.

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Kevin Hughes

11/16/2024

JD,
I am out of ways to say thank you! But ...Thank You!
Smiles, Kevin

JD,
I am out of ways to say thank you! But ...Thank You!
Smiles, Kevin

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Christopher Long

08/06/2024

Wonderful uplifing story Kevin love your writing

Wonderful uplifing story Kevin love your writing

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Christopher Long

08/07/2024

No problem Kevin thankyou for yours

No problem Kevin thankyou for yours

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Kevin Hughes

08/06/2024

Thank again for the kind words and support!
Smiles, Kevin

Thank again for the kind words and support!
Smiles, Kevin

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Denise Arnault

07/31/2024

One of the best stories that have come along in a while!

One of the best stories that have come along in a while!

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Kevin Hughes

07/31/2024

Thanks Denise!
Smiles, Kevin

Thanks Denise!
Smiles, Kevin

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